ehh...............ups for feed

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crhyme sindicate
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i like the way this was put together, mos DEF, worth the read, nice multies, you got some skizzazzle, word up, i liked the topic too, the way you came to it at the end, nice job, keep writing

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shit was hott kidd, i really liked all them multies. it was a sight for sore eyes. liked the parcial story thing too. really good keep it up

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im so ill that cancer thinks im its father.

ups........don't kno why but ima drop some new OMs oh and People Don't Bite Then Post This On RB Like Im Not There Either.....You Kno WHo You Are...

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crhyme sindicate
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All Of Ya Shits Is Dope, You Know How To Put Words Together And Flow... To The Uneducated Your Vocab May Seem Complicated, But To Those Who Know What Your Talkin About The Words Or The Way Their Put Dont Really Make Sense. Like Every One Of Ya Verses Has A Message Behind It But With The Exception Of This Piece It Doesnt Really Get Captured Because Its Obvious Your Just Fishing For Syllabls To Put Together. You Know What Im Sayin? On Almost Every Line I'd Have To Ask 'what Did You Mean By That?'

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not natural multies cats giving you credit when you fell way short of the mark homey which shows they know very little about rap these multies are much more natuaral than yours

Bars shattered, cars battered and scars scattered on rough roads as
Tough loads of drugs owned by thugs stopped by cops no jazz
Now I’m broke cat wondering where my dope is at, cats in Alcatraz
Have better luck as they clever duck the law. Good and bad build
Diligent towers they are belligerent powers need a peace treaty ill
Between the two, timberlands is how my foot laced rhyme put in place
Like carpet on floors as the rap market restores my hope with grace
This stuff like newspapers accuses folks and abuses with quotes the case
Closed,. Like the state I pass regulation with mass devastation
On the population, occupation is rapper in the game segregation
Exists

nice vocab..nice multis...quotable lines...one of the best i have seen on the site so far....like keep the drops comin