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10-23-03, 04:59 PM
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short drop..what u think?
IP: FA96 CEF1
ur own blood will soak ur clothes...
i aint worried about u commin back cuz u cant smell beef wit a broken nose... if u aint thumpin or dumpin then stay the hell home... cuz the only clip on ur hip holds a cell phone... ur bitch aint stainin the sheets cuz i use the couch... and if shes on her period im gonna use her mouth... ill blow bullets past ur sideburns give u permanent blisters... have u stuttering, talkin in rhymes faster then twista's... u think bein on top was a problem... but my bitch could suck my dick with braces and not pop a condom... Last edited by cease : 10-23-03 at 05:05 PM. |
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10-23-03, 08:16 PM
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IP: FA96 CEF1
no critique or nothin....come on
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10-23-03, 08:20 PM
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IP: 4710 118C
i think it wuz iyte
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10-23-03, 09:18 PM
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Can u beat me?..Hell No
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IP: 4577 CD9A
this was OK. u need to elevate your vocab. u had a lil bit of wordplay in there but it wasnt much. your rhyme scheme was alright but again it was basic. that will not win u any battles my nigga. try to elevate yo vocab.
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10-23-03, 10:19 PM
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IP: FA96 CEF1
thanks for the insight.....uppin
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10-24-03, 07:27 AM
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^word^ it wasn't bad but u can elevate a lil more... aight check mine: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=87496 |
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09-25-04, 12:59 PM
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IP: D5FE 7245
roflllllll every single line of that was lloyd banks cease who u tryin to pull over?
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