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09-09-03, 11:45 AM
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Just call me your Savior
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circle of life...
IP: F718 7AAD
an angel...
wit a clipped wing... stares in tha mirror... only one tear drops... a demon... rises... and collects a halo... one soul torn two ways... which way... should i go... in order to live... peacefully... for all eternity... one way leads to tha other... no way out... only one way in... split into millions... but only one messenger... who walks silently... on shadows... pray on his victims souls... thus... we only find ourselves... caught in the... circle of life...
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09-09-03, 08:37 PM
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Just call me your Savior
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IP: F6E0 2940
uppin...
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09-10-03, 10:55 AM
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Just call me your Savior
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IP: F718 7AAD
uppin again, this is my new one...
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09-11-03, 10:56 AM
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Just call me your Savior
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IP: F718 7AAD
hello???????????
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09-11-03, 12:41 PM
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IP: 3746 F53F
besides having a title that reminds me of the lion king it isn't too bad.
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09-11-03, 07:08 PM
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IP: BB8C D4B2
unbelievable...
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10-09-03, 07:48 PM
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IP: BB8C D4B2
i went back to up this cause i only got some weak ass reply, so please don't yell at me...
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10-09-03, 08:04 PM
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IP: 7AA4 D75E
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my opinion anyways the wing clipped was my visual because i recently saw a picture of a lil gurl angel with tattered wings and i used her as teh character in this peice you wrote well short breif stanzas i loved the theme and i belive the title did throw people offf being theres so many poems written on teh circle of life good drop pay back the favor |
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