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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=153065

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Check

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1644913

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1645039

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1646350

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1648415

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Bring your crew, you need help, beat you like you “receive belts”/
I don’t even need to merk him, his sig looks like he’s doin it himself./

Name his crew GODS? Well fuck, just have to call me Satan./
I’m like a monster truck rally the way I smash and crush “Van”/

Came in one piece but you’ll leave in three, I’ll grip necks and squeeze./
Alcoholics rhyme? Smash your face through bottles and leave ya to bleed/

I’m the best, kid I roll one deep to ~slam ho’s,~ fist to your throat to ~jam flows./
It’s not just ya name, but a real suggestion like when the crowd yells “Van, GO!”/

Son, going face down on your keyboard is the only way you can “hit keys”/
But man, how am I supposed to be afraid of a crew who’s mascot is titties?/

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I had to get a new couch, but as you can see the fun continues!

A.I.

weak battle fellas

Breakdown for lil:

Bring your crew, you need help, beat you like you “receive belts”/
I don’t even need to merk him, his sig looks like he’s doin it himself./

Not bad...setup take away from personal

Name his crew GODS? Well fuck, just have to call me Satan./
I’m like a monster truck rally the way I smash and crush “Van”/

I see where ya going but nah..weak

Came in one piece but you’ll leave in three, I’ll grip necks and squeeze./
Alcoholics rhyme? Smash your face through bottles and leave ya to bleed/

This would be nice as a open mic line but not for a battle

I’m the best, kid I roll one deep to ~slam ho’s,~ fist to your throat to ~jam flows./
It’s not just ya name, but a real suggestion like when the crowd yells “Van, GO!”/

Useless multies in setup, blah no punch

Son, going face down on your keyboard is the only way you can “hit keys”/
But man, how am I supposed to be afraid of a crew who’s mascot is titties?/


Weak, an u lose more points for putting as a closer

Overall I give ya.........6/10


Breakdown for vango:

I'm bout to have you pissin your pants kid, good thing you wore your "Depends"
I'd invite you to take this battle to EFL, oh sorry you don't have enough WINS

Setup was played(who hasn't heard a tampon line?)there was no punch, we were all newbs once, only way this punch works is if he had a bunch of loses but he's got 1 win, no loses an 110 posts an jus joined last month, so where's the diss?...terrible opener

Since the Iil prophet couldnt make it heres my prediction and you can quote this
"You have no chance of winning", your a Subtle Tee, meaning your barely noticed

Weak...tried a meta wit subtle Tee but didn't work

I guess that makes you the Casper of RV, but I've never been afraid of GHOSTS
Check yourself kid, your a FLYWEIGHT, you couldnt even bench press my POSTS

Setup is played, punch makes no sense...he'd have to lift his monitor to bench press your post, so thats not really that light.

I leave you battled and bruised kid, somebody better call Subtletee a NURSE
Claiming your from the heavens,..... I'll clip your wings with just one VERSE

Brag line..where's the punch? or personal? shoulda followed clip ya wings wit a punch or meta or something to be a direct diss to opponent.

See every cloud has a silver lining, so let me explains yours so its CLEAR
Hey you didnt win this battle,its okay see you've always got next Year

Again where's the punch? or personal? or meta?...how could u use this as a closer?

Overall: 5.5/10

This was a terrible battle...both had nothing in their verse both had quite a few filler lines, I only gave it to prophet becuz all though his punches were weak they made sense..except for that useless multi line but besides that he made sense...vango's punches and personals either made no sense or had nothing to do with his opponent so I gave it to prophet based on that...no hate, I explained my reasons..both need elevation...stay up!!

Vote: Prophet

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Bring your crew, you need help, beat you like you “receive belts”/
I don’t even need to merk him, his sig looks like he’s doin it himself./

ha nice opener....

Name his crew GODS? Well fuck, just have to call me Satan./
I’m like a monster truck rally the way I smash and crush “Van”/

ok but sorda lack'in

Came in one piece but you’ll leave in three, I’ll grip necks and squeeze./
Alcoholics rhyme? Smash your face through bottles and leave ya to bleed/

like the flow, 1st line good 2ed decent

I’m the best, kid I roll one deep to ~slam ho’s,~ fist to your throat to ~jam flows./
It’s not just ya name, but a real suggestion like when the crowd yells “Van, GO!”/

decent set up N decent diss on the follow up.....

Son, going face down on your keyboard is the only way you can “hit keys”/
But man, how am I supposed to be afraid of a crew who’s mascot is titties?/

u could of end it better but not a bad verse....

Overall 7.5/10

vango

I'm bout to have you pissin your pants kid, good thing you wore your "Depends"
I'd invite you to take this battle to EFL, oh sorry you don't have enough WINS
weak opener

Since the Iil prophet couldnt make it heres my prediction and you can quote this
"You have no chance of winning", your a Subtle Tee, meaning your barely noticed

Weak again....

I guess that makes you the Casper of RV, but I've never been afraid of GHOSTS
Check yourself kid, your a FLYWEIGHT, you couldnt even bench press my POSTS

WFT?? weak but good try at creativeness.....

I leave you battled and bruised kid, somebody better call Subtletee a NURSE
Claiming your from the heavens,..... I'll clip your wings with just one VERSE

no punch cREativeness lack and i just wasnt feeling it mang u gotta come harder then that

See every cloud has a silver lining, so let me explains yours so its CLEAR
Hey you didnt win this battle,its okay see you've always got next Year

weak ending honestly this whole verse was weak u lacked in every aspect.....

4.0/10

vote Prophet = sub

Hmmm, thanks for voting guys. I dropped a no-show verse because as we can see by his drop time, he didn't show on time.


Also, I'm not ~iil propher~, he got banned for biting and I was put in the tourney in his place.

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your an idiot an this is a pure hate vote, your mad because your feeding of my verse in kll. how does my punches have nothing to do with subtletee. if you dont get the personals dont vote. check out his avy, user title and sig idiot.

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^ Meh, it's explained and he hated on both of us.

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yeah but were battling in a league and he fed off my verse and is mad because he will probably be dq'ed thats the difference.

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So................votes?

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Vote - Vango.

Vango had a better structure along with better punches,flo, and wordplay.
Subtle...
You had the personal's. But your verse didn't flow well at all.
Also, You were really stretched.

Best Line:
Since the Iil prophet couldnt make it heres my prediction and you can quote this
"You have no chance of winning", your a Subtle Tee, meaning your barely noticed

My Advice.
Both came a lil stretched. Shorten em lines up. -1

The fuck people always try and make a punch out of the definition of my name and then GET THE DEFINITION WRONG?

Dictionary.com definition

subtlety

\Sub"tle*ty\, n.; pl. Subtleties. [OE. sotelte, sutilte, OF. sotillete, L. subtilitas. See Subtle, and cf. Subtility.] 1. The quality or state of being subtle, or sly; cunning; craftiness; artfulness

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