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6 - 14 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No D/R
No Crew Votes
85 post to vote


my bad...had to do something...here it is tho

Minimum posts to vote: 85

Check in by: 08-09-04 at 12:34 PM

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J DOT has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-09-04 12:07 PM.

Ice Pick has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-09-04 12:08 PM.

You get set out too long ya boy Dot'll melt you like "ice"
Make yo life upset when i get into yo head like lice
Cant "pick" da germs out, cant detect yo infection
Dot'll help dawg, get inside you like a C-Section
Im puttin yo rhymes to rest, like 'LUDA' 'go to sleep hoe'
Put em in a jaw, then a coffin, then six feet below
I'm the clean up man, when i merk cats with bare hands
24* year old 'angel', I'll rotten his evil plan
Assasinate his dreams, call him Martin Luther King
When it comes to plottin his downfall, J DOT's a fien
If ya life just about weed and raps*, then I would say its worthless
10 min to flow, but you still got hit the worstest
I think yo feelings hurt, you prolly nearing yo death
But I'm done talking, you could have the last of my breathe


*check his profile for information

(we still cool PICK...its a battle, gotta go hard)

LIL INTRO
i Rip-Kidz-wit-Bad-Scriptz reduce ya' verse to Remmantz-&-Partz
'dis dude flow " BITES' so much"..i guess i'm Swimmin-wit-Sharkz

The real battle begins
i'm Darin-U-to-Spit-Sh!t..niggaz best Learn-ta-Cope
when i "Clap" ya "unprotected "ya Pen-is at RISK..i'm "Burnin" ya Quotez
i aint Concerned-wit-VOTEZ..i "Check" Matez quickly..see how 'dis PAWN'z flopped
"Beatin' ICE like "100ft Jumperz" nucka.. a Long Shot
JDOT rymes All-FAKE??..ya' Flow'z GRASS Rootz??..i MOWED-da-Lawn
somebody Told-U-Wrong..U can's spit wit 'ICE..ya' Breathing'z Fatigued
9 BATTLEZ..6 of 'em loss's??..Dot thinks he is Leadin-da-League
my Dukez 'R a Hazzard.. General Lee{generally} U find Knotz Landing leavin scars
on ya' forehead CONCUSIONZ "project" visualz dat Must-be-STARZ
DOTS a Primate..but i agilely "flip" on his Monkey Barz
leavin' Flunkiez Scarred..ya' "dissected" TRACKZ??..i RAN-thru-in-SECTIONZ
like "crazed" PROCTOLOGISTZ..ICE will HANNed-U-ya- RECTUM......MuthafUUcka..whaaat!!

i hope u gun flow...if u get dq'ed i still get the win right...i aint gun bitch to strobe like some people, but just spit

nvm...there it is

Nice shit DOT, YEAH WE STILL COOL

i think i went over a line or 2

UPPN FOR SOME VOTES

YOU NOT MAD I DROPPED AN EXTRA LINE ARE YA

IM TOO HIGH AND COUNTED WRONG

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hell yea im mad...imm let strobe kno that i won this, cause u dint follow rulez













naw...jp, its coo, nice flow...uppppn peoples...need votes

ohh shit dude you had me goin

HJA HA HA HA that totaly fucked wit me head

GOOD LOOKIN

we should try and get a tag team battle goin sometime

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Voted For: Ice Pick

Wordplay - Ice
Punches - Ice
Personals - J-Dot
Vocab - ?
Structure - J-Dot
Overall - Ice

Ice Pick took this because I put more emphasis on Wordplay and Punches than Personals and Stucture.. It is more entertaining to read with good punches.. personals too, bit punches causes for more talent.. he came more creative on them to mt.. also ice pick, you fliw was seemed better because of the wordplay and a few multies.. yyour stucture could of been better, but it's all good.. you barley took this cuz.. no hate J-Dot, jus being real.

yo, keep it gangsta and return the favor in my thread will you? thanx.. heres the link..
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=133629

Voted For: Ice Pick

Aight, This was a tight battle, its about time iam seeing some battles in here that are actually tight, and not One-sided shit.. Anyway, Jdot you had some good concepts, Structure was good, and yah flow was tight, Yah Punches were not that hard, but were aight.. and i liked that personal yah Entered..

I rate yah Verse at: 6.5/10

Ice pick yah had some really good Wordplay and effective Punches, yah structure was kinda fucked, and Flow was not the best, But yah really out did him with Metaphores, and wordplay, and thats what really finished this battle

Rated yah verse: 7/10


No hate Guys, Tight battle


Return the Fav!!!!!!!

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up, up, and get some votes...we need some votes on this, c'mon people, too many battles gettin slept on

Voted For: Ice Pick

NO CONTEST!
ice pick kiled it.wit punches n flow.

good try j dot. try to think about different shit n rhyming.

ayo ice pick i vote honest al tha time errtime.

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