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Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-02-05 at 05:19 AM

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ThA NoToRiOuS D has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-02-05 04:52 AM.

InfiniteStan has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-02-05 04:52 AM.

ayo.....dis kids a clown man
first of all who comes up with a name like infinite stan..??

imma have ta merk dis nigga
must be a dumb kid...cuz he dont even no how 2 werk dis trigga

but ay! imma show u a lesson or two....
dis fagget has been rejected by evry single crew..

the words coming outta your mouth is probally who the fuck is dee??
but still ur rhymes are as weak as da dude jorge from scary movie 3

ayo kid you aint wanted around
so imma spin you around in circles like a merry-go-round...

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Deviously Devine Designs
Best Thing Since Sliced Bread

(2)Me vs. wyteknyte(2)

(1)Me vs. Flow Verse(1)

only a true genius wud know that battlin me aint smart
u only got 13 posts n' dat aint enough to climb my chart
now u gotta get rid of dat picture of u lookin all retarded
i should smack u in da head n' teach u a lesson like coach carter
ur 'bout to be extinct from this world in 'bout a second
now u got me started so im now bustin a tekken*
you need to get an antivirus from infecting your self
uve been wackin it so much u betta' scream for sum help
ur weak punches n' throws are missing n' only hittin air
but im graspin and breakin you as if i were a grizzly bear


.... my mouth is blank 2day.. cant think of anythin.but ohwell...

tekken*- from the game tekken .......................good luck

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........................................stan.vs..N .D

uppin 4 dis bytch..........honest votes!!!!!

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Deviously Devine Designs
Best Thing Since Sliced Bread

(2)Me vs. wyteknyte(2)

(1)Me vs. Flow Verse(1)

Voted For: InfiniteStan

aight i read both verses and my vote goes to stan....
damn you got better lol your structure was cool "only a true genius wud know that battlin me aint smart
u only got 13 posts n' dat aint enough to climb my chart
now u gotta get rid of dat picture of u lookin all retarded
i should smack u in da head n' teach u a lesson like coach carter" that shit made me laugh nice shit...your personals and punches hit...nice vocab..the only line i wasnt feeling was the tekken line you coulda reworded it better overall it was decent and gully id say 7/10 gud shit...

notorious you came weak



ayo.....dis kids a clown man
first of all who comes up with a name like infinite stan..??
openr was kinda gay it seemed like filler
imma have ta merk dis nigga
must be a dumb kid...cuz he dont even no how 2 werk dis trigga
wtf? wasnt feeling that at all...so your callin your self a trigga? dosent make sense at all
but ay! imma show u a lesson or two....
dis fagget has been rejected by evry single crew..
hmmm this semmed like filler too wheres the punchlines?

the words coming outta your mouth is probally who the fuck is dee??
but still ur rhymes are as weak as da dude jorge from scary movie 3
ehhh this was ok.....didnt like it that much
ayo kid you aint wanted around
so imma spin you around in circles like a merry-go-round...
gay closer this was a weak verse bro

overaall stan took this nuff sed

uppin votes..............................

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......................................STAN Vs. N.D

Voted For: InfiniteStan

ayo.....dis kids a clown man
first of all who comes up with a name like infinite stan..??

Terrible, no concept or punch there at all

imma have ta merk dis nigga
must be a dumb kid...cuz he dont even no how 2 werk dis trigga

Nah, weak and played

but ay! imma show u a lesson or two....
dis fagget has been rejected by evry single crew..

If thats a personal best line of your battle so far, but it was worded really basically and still wasn't even good

the words coming outta your mouth is probally who the fuck is dee??
but still ur rhymes are as weak as da dude jorge from scary movie 3

I dunno Jorge, but the concept was better here

ayo kid you aint wanted around
so imma spin you around in circles like a merry-go-round...

Nah, weak and played


only a true genius wud know that battlin me aint smart
u only got 13 posts n' dat aint enough to climb my chart

Weak, bad concept

now u gotta get rid of dat picture of u lookin all retarded
i should smack u in da head n' teach u a lesson like coach carter

Concept was there, wording wasn't

ur 'bout to be extinct from this world in 'bout a second
now u got me started so im now bustin a tekken*

Concept was there again, but the wording was well off

you need to get an antivirus from infecting your self
uve been wackin it so much u betta' scream for sum help

Eh? This was weird

ur weak punches n' throws are missing n' only hittin air
but im graspin and breakin you as if i were a grizzly bear

[B]Concept was a bit unoriginal, and didn't really hit.


Tha Notorious D had nothing, just a typical newb verse, keep writing, read tutorials and then you'll elevate. Infinitestan at least punched, but none really stood out to me.

Still, v/infinitestan

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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=206973

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Voted For: InfiniteStan

ayo.....dis kids a clown man
first of all who comes up with a name like infinite stan..??
3....2nd line stretched like fuck.....and punch is basic
imma have ta merk dis nigga
must be a dumb kid...cuz he dont even no how 2 werk dis trigga
2...stretched...n punch was shit..
but ay! imma show u a lesson or two....
dis fagget has been rejected by evry single crew..
2....post links for proof or sumtin..cuz i think this is a fake personal
the words coming outta your mouth is probally who the fuck is dee??
but still ur rhymes are as weak as da dude jorge from scary movie 3
3...basic punch and dee?
ayo kid you aint wanted around
so imma spin you around in circles like a merry-go-round...
2...said round too much and not a punch..this a threat.

only a true genius wud know that battlin me aint smart
u only got 13 posts n' dat aint enough to climb my chart
2...set-up was stupuid an punch was basic
now u gotta get rid of dat picture of u lookin all retarded
i should smack u in da head n' teach u a lesson like coach carter
5....first decent punch in this battle i guess
ur 'bout to be extinct from this world in 'bout a second
now u got me started so im now bustin a tekken*
3...tekken lines are really played now
you need to get an antivirus from infecting your self
uve been wackin it so much u betta' scream for sum help
2...no punch....
ur weak punches n' throws are missing n' only hittin air
but im graspin and breakin you as if i were a grizzly bear
2....no punch again

OK..this battle was weak...nothing really hit.What the 2 of you need to know..is that you can't go "makin threats"..if you know what I mean.Like Notorious's merry-go-round line.And stan's hittin air/grizzly bear line.
But Infinite stan got this for actually havin one decent punch with the coach carter one.Elevation is greatly needed here.

Vote-Infinitestan
Rtf in sig,

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