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09-17-06, 01:10 PM | #1 | ||||
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25. Bruce Bogtrotter (0-0) vs 26. Real Thoro (0-0) vs 27. Mr. Multie (0-0)
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09-17-06, 05:19 PM | #2 | ||||||
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Wow a 3-way for the first battle on this site... Dope thanks kempo
Also since i dunno any of you fellas what you saw we do a pic battle or a hardcore battle or something along those lines
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09-17-06, 09:21 PM | #3 | ||||
Within Eternity's Wither
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up to you and Real Thoro i'll drop due to the agreement
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09-18-06, 11:58 AM | #4 | ||||||
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Blah aint have time this week.
12 match it Mr. Mutli huh? This kids still new to the board, so watch me pop his cherry N ill smash bruise n bloody your face worse then marry Your punches suck and this battle you wont win Hope everyone saw your 1-2 Cause we all know that laughin is the best medicine This kids gotta big ego, So fuck you be dead And this kid couldnt be a flyweight .............Even if i droped it on his fucking head Real thorough dunno muc habout you but was banned for cheating Reals a bitch and your text fucking sucks hoe So watch me Ko Real quickand thoro him threw a window You'll try to be creative but there's no limit to his wackness You couldn't beat me, even if I helped this kid practice Why even state your back noone knows you left why persist Cause if you was to leave again, you wouldnt even be missed
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09-19-06, 12:30 AM | #5 | ||||||
Within Eternity's Wither
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unlimited lines........im not match'n shit, let me just get this outta the way now
Bruce...bruce...bruce shall we get started? nuff said Bruce confide in ya master, im RVs local who'll disturb ya vocals So i'll prove ya talk is a front, like prostitutes using a virgin mobile But im destined to ruin you, punch n' text, til ya flesh ain't recoupable Now watch his face get blown office head, without the sex in da cubicle Quote:
Slowly remove'n you, while you dickride n' diss's, there's flaws in ya tank Your not elite you fuck'n fag, the closet ya mind comes to art is draw'n a blank Quote:
Serving this dude, you deserve the boot, this homo's through I aint worried bout you diggin for dirt<----it really holds no proof And by your drops in the cypher, i can tell that your needing rehearsal So if your hungry or hearing impaired either way your def-eating the purpose Now on to Real Thoro....like it matters lmao Leave ya pen/pad in doubts, while you'll dickride ya spouse Plus ya txts like old sex, i kno this pussy inside and out Why should i clash with trash, pass that class, ya acts get rash You'll only get 2 lines cuz you a cheek, thas only half my ass
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09-21-06, 10:05 PM | #6 | |||||||
the real man of steel
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But im destined to ruin you, punch n' text, til ya flesh ain't recoupable
Now watch his face get blown office head, without the sex in da cubicle vs This kids still new to the board, so watch me pop his cherry N ill smash bruise n bloody your face worse then marry This kids gotta big ego, So fuck you be dead And this kid couldnt be a flyweight .............Even if i droped it on his fucking head V/Bruce....this was a weak one....multie you had that one line i like alot...shit was good but ya verse fell off to me...you had some played lines...work on your personals and punchs...the mobile line was decentish...bruce yours was decnt too but i felt it was more consistent those lines i quoted were ight...but you had a steady verse that gets my vote
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09-22-06, 06:00 AM | #7 | ||||||
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Blah upppin... i know peeps need links
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09-22-06, 12:14 PM | #8 | ||||
The Saviour
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09-22-06, 12:29 PM | #9 | |||
I Hurt.
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Slowly remove'n you, while you dickride n' diss's, there's flaws in ya tank
Your not elite you fuck'n fag, the closet ya mind comes to art is draw'n a blank vs. Nothing Comin' in, I didn't know what to expect from Bruce cuz I ain't peeped him before, but I was kinda disappointed. Bruce, your stuff is just a bit too basic, no real wit to it. Like ur closer, he wouldn't be missed, just no creativity to that. The throw real in a window was ur best line, but it was forced cuz his name isn't Real Throw, lol, u had to change it to make it work. Sorry, just didn't think any of ur lines were quotable so try again next week with more wit. Mr. Multie didn't come that great tho either. Line I quoted was a bit playedish but not that bad. Office line wasn't too bad either but I've seen a bunch of office lines before. Fix ur font tho man, just use a standard font, urs is newbish n' sometimes, perception is everything cuz if people perceive u as a newb, u won't get the benefit of the doubt. Vote - Mr. Multie |
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09-22-06, 07:04 PM | #10 | |||
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i didn't really feel anything from bruce..
a couple of his lines seemed more like compliments than disses.. like- Your punches suck and this battle you wont win Hope everyone saw your 1-2 Cause we all know that laughin is the best medicine i'm not going to click the hyperlink lol, so maybe i'm missing something but.. punchlines are meant to be funny - no? i understand how you may have meant this to go, but it didn't really read that way imo. This kids gotta big ego, So fuck you be dead And this kid couldnt be a flyweight .............Even if i droped it on his fucking head same case wit this one.. who really wants to be flyweight? i think this would've worked better with heavyweight.. but wtvr. apart from that i felt a lot of his shit was pretty bland. mr multi's wasn't much better honestly. i expected better multi's!!! lol. the def-eating wordplay was a bit played.. but he had more wit and creativity, so my vote goes to- v/ Mr Multi. |
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09-22-06, 09:00 PM | #11 | ||||
Within Eternity's Wither
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didn't really have time this week next week will be better i've been spending time w/ my son but ups
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09-22-06, 11:21 PM | #12 | |||||
ROFL @ u niggas since '04
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Bruce confide in ya master, im RVs local who'll disturb ya vocals
So i'll prove ya talk is a front, like prostitutes using a virgin mobile But im destined to ruin you, punch n' text, til ya flesh ain't recoupable Now watch his face get blown office head, without the sex in da cubicle Slowly remove'n you, while you dickride n' diss's, there's flaws in ya tank Your not elite you fuck'n fag, the closet ya mind comes to art is draw'n a blank vs. nothing one sided battle really. Bruce gave it a good go but his punches had no real effect. He didnt have much with behind them and his flow was really off. Just need to learn to word shit better and drop more witty punches. Mr. Multi for the most part really just made me laugh. His verse wasn't tight but it was decent with whole comedy shit he has going on. V/ Mr. Multi rtf http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=235050 |
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09-23-06, 02:23 AM | #13 | ||||
The Saviour
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Real Thoro no-shows.
Up over no-shows. |
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09-23-06, 01:23 PM | #14 | |||
Middle Weight
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ehh whack battle here, nothing to me was real outstandish. a couple of okay to decent punches, 3-way battles suck most the time especially when they're like this. overall though i'ma have to give this to Mr. Multie for outshining Bruce who was sub-par to horrible in my opinion.
vote - multie.
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09-23-06, 07:03 PM | #15 | ||||
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But im destined to ruin you, punch n' text, til ya flesh ain't recoupable
Now watch his face get blown office head, without the sex in da cubicle Slowly remove'n you, while you dickride n' diss's, there's flaws in ya tank Your not elite you fuck'n fag, the closet ya mind comes to art is draw'n a blank vs. nothing hmmm... bruce... weak man V/ mr. multie
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