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Old 05-23-04, 07:19 PM   #1
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Hexen Vs phat mic

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Old 05-24-04, 10:47 AM   #2
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Old 05-24-04, 01:27 PM   #3
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Old 05-25-04, 06:57 PM   #4
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ok there better not be any feeding or shit like that....

Mass-attacks to rid-his-heart I don't get his art but he'd better practice
i'll hex-his-stature cuz he stays on Jocks more than lettered jackets
this vet-is-backwords, Phat the apex slay text while hex makin it wack
just-statin-the-facts, when he spits he'll hava 'clean cut' cuz everyone's taking-a-'nap'
Remedial-lad, playing football as the center still doesn't have reason-to-snap
spare me ya drought-verse embarrased-but-proud-first cuz he's in a bout
should type ya flow's off of Jay Z's first album, cuz u winnin is a 'Reasonable Doubt'
He kicks more "throwback" concepts than old-school replica Jordans
overrated and cats still "sleep on your shit" like "narcoleptics on toilets"
I'll smash u all, plus it's raining men way i got dude's falling
and hang up the phone with Hip Hop cuz rapping is not ya 'true calling'....
 
Old 05-26-04, 11:56 AM   #5
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Phat Mic More Slept On Than Swilt At Night Fall,
Chat His Freestlye So Cock suck We Hear Him Brawl,
Microphone Device..?u Cldnt kick dope if u diss me twice,
Reading Ur textee man dats funny,for u to cool chizle on ice,
Nerb dick rhyder more sucked than dog to stick and still bitin',
Pick Urself up dawg...u fall down so much u need be fightin',
Bible of crushed roses....yo man stop actin franshise,
Wen realy dawg ur more played than dope to many eyes,
Your Metas so extinted we call you fossil by name,
Callin him wack doesnt express how much he is lame....

Blah Blah...dat was freestlye coz im real outa time..i almost 4got....so easy on da critics...pz ....~~~VOTE~~~~
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Old 05-26-04, 12:22 PM   #6
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Sorry but PHAT mic you`re verse was horrid you`re structure and your multi joints "-" is so herbish you need elevation on i dint get that jordan line maybe because i`m english but even that you`re punchlines we`nr that hard erm . . Hexen that verse was ok not that special some of them were weak
Wen realy dawg ur more played than dope to many eyes
But you did come better than hexen in punches and flow i would say . .

Edit this i just read HEXEN verse again and it was pretty much a filler even though Phat mic had enoying structure he still hit harded

V/Phat mic.
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Old 05-26-04, 01:07 PM   #7
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Old 05-26-04, 01:14 PM   #8
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Sorry i made a mistake in the name
1-0 phat mic.
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Old 05-26-04, 01:50 PM   #9
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alright well phat mic took this shit this your verse was fuckin sick and i think that was one of your best phat mic you easily ripped him got me in shock i was like..dayum whereed that come rom..ur sickest line

He kicks more "throwback" concepts than old-school replica Jordans
overrated and cats still "sleep on your shit" like "narcoleptics on toilets"


shit was ill dawg some of your lines were stretched thought but its all good still sickness and your flow was off at tymes but you picked it back up and continued with that sickness You took this easily..and i liked your wordplay and that lettered jacket line was sick too

hexen:.....errr...that shit was aiight lol it flowed nicely but you need to improve on ur punches and multis and shit and some of ur shit didnt make sense ..none of your lines stood out they were all ..OK...thats why phat took this one

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Old 05-27-04, 12:56 AM   #10
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Old 05-27-04, 06:57 PM   #11
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Old 05-27-04, 08:48 PM   #12
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hexen took dis 2many stretched lines 4 phat mic and it fucked up yo flow it was a descent drop but need work hexen your verse was on point drop was nice vocab was on point also not 2 many laughs in dis juss a hardcore match i raggean

hexen-

bestline-Nerb dick rhyder more sucked than dog to stick and still bitin',
Pick Urself up dawg...u fall down so much u need be fightin',

^^ nice drop

worsteline-none all in off nice

phatmic

bestline-Mass-attacks to rid-his-heart I don't get his art but he'd better practice
i'll hex-his-stature cuz he stays on Jocks more than lettered jackets

^^ nice u had a good number of good linez

worsteline-none juss 2 many stretched linez

phatmic-9.2/10
hexen-9.5/10
winner hexen
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Old 05-27-04, 11:10 PM   #13
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Old 05-28-04, 02:06 PM   #14
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Aiyo..

HeXen: 2/10
Man That Shit Was Horrible, Your Lines Didn't Even Make Sense...Everyone Making A Big Deal About Structures And Your Trying TO Make Your Look Like Theres and Its Maken Your Spits Horrible. Structure Is Nothing!! When Rappers Go On Stage At Freestyle Battles Do You Ever Hear Any Judge Say (Damn His Shit Was Stretched? Hell NO!! IT DOn't Matter Just As Long As Your Shit Is Good) But NEwayz, You Feel Way Off With This Spit..Disgraceful Man.

Phat Mic: 6/10
Your Shit Was Pretty Good, You Had Sum Nice Metaphors and Your Punches Were Pretty Good. No Real Personals But You Had Sum Nice Multis. Nice Drop. Work On Flow and Word Play.

Vote - Phat Mic

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Old 05-28-04, 06:44 PM   #15
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