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Old 07-18-04, 09:49 PM   #1
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Old 07-18-04, 10:03 PM   #2
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Old 07-19-04, 12:01 AM   #3
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you did this on purpose eh... check.
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Old 07-22-04, 06:59 PM   #4
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Ill throw out my set up cuz hes dope or so he thinks...
His battles get as many clicks as homo porn links...
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Old 07-22-04, 07:07 PM   #5
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I'm famed... your fates bound, kid got strapped limbs
So LI's wishing on a star, but I just up and smacked him
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Old 07-22-04, 07:13 PM   #6
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Ill throw out my set up cuz hes dope or so he thinks...
His battles get as many clicks as homo porn links...

seen similar stuff said before. But it was pretty witty & you put it in a nice way. overall I would say 7/10

I'm famed... your fates bound, kid got strapped limbs
So LI's wishing on a star, but I just up and smacked him

Nice. More original I dunno if ive seen a star concept punch before but it was good. But to me that wasnt really a good punch, there is no diss to him apart from saying you smack him, it was self glorying.

6/10

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Old 07-22-04, 09:22 PM   #7
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Ill throw out my set up cuz hes dope or so he thinks...
His battles get as many clicks as homo porn links...

ya ive seen this sorta thing before but u kinda flipped it with the 'clicks' reference....only decent in my mind tho id also say 7/10

I'm famed... your fates bound, kid got strapped limbs
So LI's wishing on a star, but I just up and smacked him

This was pretty original...1st line had good wordplay "Bound-strapped limbs" and the second was pretty creative...the self glorification was ight cuz u countered it well with the set-up and punch...i'd say 7.5/10

Vote- Shadow's edge i felt his was more creative and LI's was too standard...no hate just my view of the battle...keep at it
 
Old 07-22-04, 11:31 PM   #8
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Ill throw out my set up cuz hes dope or so he thinks...
His battles get as many clicks as homo porn links...

I was feelin his punchline. I could understand it easier also.

I'm famed... your fates bound, kid got strapped limbs
So LI's wishing on a star, but I just up and smacked him

I was feeelin it at first but it didnt hit hard enough to get the win.

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Old 07-23-04, 12:01 AM   #9
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Vote: shadows edge

Both were type weak, but shadow edged it with a better concept. I wasn't feelin' either, however.
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Old 07-23-04, 12:19 AM   #10
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weak shit....

LI: Weak shit, thought u would drop harder than this...not really complex, not that original, wasnt feelin it...didnt hit hard at all...
6/10...

SE:Kinda weak too, more complex tho, and better concept to use...hit harder too. Flow was type to me tho...
7/10...

V/shadow, weak battle, but he had the harder hittin one...so yea...
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Old 07-23-04, 09:15 AM   #11
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who's half assed rhyme is better? who cares.

peace, and goodbye, relaunched.

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Old 07-23-04, 10:41 PM   #12
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Weak battle both dropped weak but gotta vote...

L.I.>>> yours was weak and I thought you would have had something better, setup was good but punch was really disappointing, drop like u suppose to next time......I give ya.............6/10


Shadow.......weak drop too but alittle harder than his, it was creative so that is really only category you bettered him in so I gave it to you based on that...........and I give ya..........6.5/10

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Old 07-24-04, 01:41 PM   #13
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i didnt like neither punch....but im going to give this to shadow..he was more creative
L.I punch didnt hit hard at all...
 
Old 07-24-04, 11:02 PM   #14
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V/ Shadows edge

first.. L.I. was a gay punch = wack.. plus.. hell porno flicks get alot of clicks by gays.. so i aint feeling it

there for yup.. shadows punch was better

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Old 07-24-04, 11:20 PM   #15
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L.I. wtf was that man seen way better from you
your punch wasnt really much of a punch didnt hit that hard

SE again didnt really hit that hard but better than L.Is
so you got my vote seen some of your shit you can do better

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