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Old 03-08-09, 10:03 PM   #1
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Book Of Thought - Week 1 "California Edition" (Chat & Predictions)

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Welcome

Book Of Thought - Week 1
"The California Edition"

Welcome, to the Book of Thought, the 'official' mag of Write Away Your Thoughts Topical League of Rapverse.com. Week one was a landslide, & because of that simple fact, this is the California Edition. There wasn't a single 'close' match as far as the votes went, but in my opinion this is only the first true warm up week for most, considering how bad the preseason went. Hopefully this week, you guys will show much more time & effort in your drops. We have a few nice additions, the biggest additions are Johnny 6-feet and Fuck Yuu. I expect them to start with a bang. This week should be interesting, there will be several that will lose their undefeated title, and a few more gaining it. Even though this is early, week 3 will be the beginning of champ and contender titles. The highest ranks will be in champ, 3rd and 4th spot will be in contender. So write well this week, because if you have a chance at getting it, me & write are only deciding who we think is best in case of a tie. So yeah, I'm very excited to get this league on its feet and running. Hopefully it'll be a great season, but you guys make that decision. Keep writing, keep showing, and keep voting.



Anyone Interested?
I need some help with writing the mags, ideas, shit like that. Kind of like a mini-side kick. If you're interested, hit me up through PM or something. It would be greatly appreciated.

Week 1

Man, why the hell are people not reading the rules? I post them in each and every battle thread, and I sticky'd them. This week I'm posting the rules word by word, pasted from the rules thread. & this week I'm not going to be easy on anyone who does not follow the rules. The three main rules other than the obvious ones, don't sway... If I see ANY thing other than 'uppin, good job' or some shit like that, auto three vote loss.. If you continue it'll continue to happen. Secondly, 2 links - you MUST have 2 links of battles you've voted on. If you don't you'll be DQ'd. If you continue to do the same I'm booting you for the remainder of the season. Third is the lines rule. I saw a battle where both opponents dropped 12 lines, the min. is 16, max. is 50. So, please follow the rules. Anyway, most of you didn't drop very close matches.. I was kind of disappointed, not in the writtens, but in how landslidish the votes were. I hope you guys are somewhat motivated to drop next week, and put forth the effort.

Week 1 Match Reviews:
By Johnny 6-feet

Finland vs. Got Soul?

Double no-show

LL Cook K vs. shanmailer7

Double no-show

Jonathon vs. Uprenti$$

Jonathon wound up dropping a furious, mutli-packed braggodocious verse only to pick up a no-show win against his opponent. A disapointing conclusion.

Mr.Write vs. Coke Dealer

Coke dropped a nonspecific take on his topic choice but at the same time got inside his narrators head pretty well. Write brought a little more heat to his choice with an orignal concept and consistently strong imagery. Write picked up with win through his strong use of imagery and storytelling skills.

Nâ€-T vs. In-Vision

Nâ€-T picks up a no-show win this week with a verse laced with angst and introspective imagery, complete with a hook and solid vocab to tie it all together. Considering the length it's a damn shame it had to be used against an absent opponent.

Alphabetized vs. Civil.

Civil picks up the win this week with a heartwenching piece packed with vivid imagery which had the voters tearing up right off the bat. Alpha's piece contained a lot of staple's of a good topical piece, also including a strong topic choice and use of imagery. But the general consensus was that Civil is going to be a huge threat in the league based on this first showing.

MONKEY BARZ vs. bobericc_lyrics

A couple of short verses in this topical with bob winning by a landslide. Monkey dropping a multi-packed brag verse better suited for an open mic while bob brought a topically laced, introspective piece packed with well-chosen vocabulary.

JTR vs. one way

JTR picks up the win this week with a verse packed with social commentary about music controversy, something with the voters could all relate to. one way responded with a slightly more general take on his topic, short in length and with fewer multi's to help the flow along. Considered by the voters to be one of the strongest battles of the week.

Battle of the Week
(Week 1)


JTR vs one way

By far the best battle this week. Got the most votes, the most feed, hell, it got the most attention. It was most definantly a battle to read for week one, and it shows why they are both potential powerhouses.

one way

Quote:
Behind the lines

Sometimes we seem to forget all of the faces behind the lines
So much can be learned when receiving thoughts from another mind
For what does it take to speak so gracefully on a depressing topic
Or relate and give strength to a reader when they come across it
Or put a smile on a face of the miserable and make a child’s day
Or inspire a nation to stand united together in a historical way
It seems to be the words of another that lift us abruptly to our feet
The words of another that can make us laugh or make us weep
It’s the true words we seek, when we ask for assistance and advice
The numerous lines we read, when we want our facts to be precise
If we took the time to look behind the lines, we would surly see
That the faces are all around, cause they’re people like you and me
Weather they inspire an individual or speak to the world through song
The face behind the lines was only inspired by their experiences all along
If you don’t believe your words are involved, well this will prove it true
If your words were heard by somebody, the face behind the lines is you
So remember your words will effect others in many different ways
You’re the face behind your lines, so think about what you say


vs

JTR

Quote:
Ok oneway, that's one way to think about it, but I'm not lost without it
Cuz it's only the most controversial shit that gets people to talk about it
Remember Em' wanted to kill Kim? Put her in the trunk with her throat still slit
And after the song came out we all loved him cuz he was still Slim?
That reminds me of this, cuz I was never blinded by his lines from his scripts
The rhymes that he spit never made me put a nine or knives on my chick
It never made me call her a bitch, or kill her along with all of my kids
And if anyone did I don't blame him; I blame society cuz all of it's shit. Ya dig?
So you can load a gun with a clip, but what makes the man pull the trigger?
There's gotta be SOME focus in him? Thats more politics for you folks to figure
Pay attention; we aint a slave to records & not all records hold in aggression
& even if they do it's not important since TI's on a road to redemption, get it?
See that's why we can't take rappers serious cuz rappers are all delirious
When they switch moods up from rude to cute stuff like they're on periods
But there's no need to fear the spits when hearing 'em from a lyricist
I don't blame rappers I blame parents who don't know how to steer their kids
And I think this is nonsense when warnings say "Explicit Content" on the cover
No one listens to what's on it and if a kid wants it he just gotta bother mother
He knows she's had a long day and an argument is something she's not feeling
So if he bugs her enough she'll get stumped & buy it so he can stop screaming
Then he'll pop E & wash it down with Becardi and play the tracks on full blast
While strappin a lasso around his damn throat and it's all happenin so fast
Then parents get so mad and sue 'em while blaming music, rapping, and thugs
But not themselves for lacking the love when Lil' Jack was askin for hugs
Rappin his passion but his parents would always be like "Jack, that's enough!"
So he relaxed on drugs cuz dad didn't like rap & would smack him for acting up
See I made that story up and it was gory but it could have been true
Without proper guidance you'd be lost and blinded & this could have been you
Search Raymond Nap or James Vance, what they did listening to Stained Class
That album from Judas Priest made 'em shoot themselves in the face man
Their brains splat from the same 8 gauge blast of a shotgun
& everyone blamed the famed band but didn't ask how a couple teens got one
It's not dumb if ya blame a man behind the lines; just ignorant. Consider this..
I don't gotta think before I say: You gotta think before you listen in

Learn the whole lesson, quit protestin'.


PowerHouse's

1. JTR
This week he was just shaking off rust, so you guys can only imagine what'll happen when his luster starts to shine. I can't wait to see what we're in store for. I just hope he doesn't disappoint. All in all, he got battle of the week, dropped fire, and he's one hell of a writer.

2. boberric_lyrics
He didn't drop within the rules of line limitations, but nonetheless he had an outstanding verse. I loved the flow and the multies, just perfect word placing. I've been keeping up with his work every now and then, and there's no doubt in my mind that he will provide some great reads throughout the season.

3. Civil.
He took Write's spot, simply because his verse was dope as hell this week. I don't know about him topically, but he showed me whats up this week. The beginning of his drop blew me away. So if he can just keep writing like he did at the beginning of his verse this week? UnSTOPABLE.

Honorable Mention
Mr. Write
You dropped some dope shit this week, I liked it. I don't think most people did, but I thought the concept was original and dope. You could've done a lot more with it, but then again you didn't have a threatening opponent. Keep writing.

Matchups & Predictions for Week 2

Jonathon (1-0) vs Mr.Write (1-0)
Nâ€-T (1-0) vs Civil. (1-0)
JTR (1-0) vs boberric_lyrics (1-0)
Johnny 6-feet (0-0) vs Fuck Yuu (0-0)
MurDaH187 (0-0) vs CARLA'S PIMP (0-0)
MONKEY BARZ (0-1) vs LL Cool K (0-1)
Alphabetized (0-1) vs one way (0-1)
Coke Dealer (0-1) vs Finland (0-1)
shanmailer (0-1) vs Got Soul? (0-1) vs In-Vision (0-1)

Ranks

Jonathon (1-0)
Nâ€-T (1-0)
JTR (1-0)
Civil. (1-0)
Mr.Write (1-0)
boberric_lyrics (1-0)
Johnny 6-feet (0-0)
Fuck Yuu (0-0)
MurDaH187(0-0)
CARLA'S PIMP (0-0)
MONKEY BARZ (0-1)
Coke Dealer (0-1)
Alphabetized (0-1)
one way (0-1)
LL Cool K (0-1)
shanmailer7 (0-1)
Finland (0-1)
Got Soul? (0-1)
In-Vision (0-1)

Uprenti$$ (Booted)

Closing

Cool shit, we're on to week 2. It seemed like it'd be forever before this season was up but its really flying by now. I appreciate those of you who followed the rules and voted. Lets keep this league striving, invite more people, spread the word. Anyway, I'm fucked up on my medicine so I need to stop writing this before ya'll are oblivious to what I'm saying... Everyone, keep writing, keep voting, and keep showing.

Thanks,
Jonathon

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Old 03-09-09, 12:19 AM   #2
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thanks jon damn you the man mod more like it now...lmfao not me sorry i been busy dude with everything righ tnow so if you want you can have the league ill just be the helper then..lol
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Old 03-09-09, 08:12 AM   #3
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lol sure, but a few weeks down the road i'll need your help, spring break... its the nineteenth through uh, idk when, but its a week long so.. yeah
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Old 03-09-09, 08:57 AM   #4
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dude dope mag. Thanks for the mention, and compliments.

i definately got more dope shit comin for ya.
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Old 03-09-09, 09:39 AM   #5
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Jon if you need help with anything just let me know through a PM. i can help you set up matches and close battles tally up votes and make sure people are doing what they are supposed to. just let me know. i had a feeling you was going to match me up against johnny. lol. the original WAYT modding team is back
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Old 03-09-09, 10:12 AM   #6
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**coughs and indicates the match reviews**

A league with a mag? Crazy. Aint seen that in a long time, good work compadre.
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Am doing the topics now, so you dont have to worry about them jon
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Topics are done. Also JON and WRITE, i was thinking about creating a forum in the wayt that would only be visible to me you and write. it would be for discussion about the league and what changes need to be made and or what other mods need to do or need to stop doing.. let me know what you think of this idea because i'd like to have it up either tomorrow or wednesday.
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hey we dont have to use one of those pictures right?

just one of the topics?
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Jonathon (1-0) vs Mr.Write (1-0)= jonathon
Nâ€-T (1-0) vs Civil. (1-0) = civil
JTR (1-0) vs boberric_lyrics (1-0) = JTR
Johnny 6-feet (0-0) vs Fuck Yuu (0-0) = Fcuk yuu (cuz 6 feet is ova confident)
MurDaH187 (0-0) vs CARLA'S PIMP (0-0)= Carla pimp ( cuz topic are my weakness so im useing this leauge to elevate)
MONKEY BARZ (0-1) vs LL Cool K (0-1)= monkey bars
Alphabetized (0-1) vs one way (0-1)= alphabetized
Coke Dealer (0-1) vs Finland (0-1)= tie lol or maybe coke dealer
shanmailer (0-1) vs Got Soul? (0-1) vs In-Vision (0-1) = got soul ( i dont know none of them so i really dont know )
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Use whatever you want civil. The pictures and movie titles are just a little extra. Different people like different things, but i do agree pictures suck ass
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Old 03-09-09, 03:10 PM   #12
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Yo FU, I agree as far as the extra forum goes.. dope

& thanks a million for doin' topics, I was chillin with one of my old boys I haven't hung out with in a fatty..
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Alright hopefully i will have it up tomorrow. And yeah its no problem man. I know how much work it is doing it by yourself.
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Dropped in the battle, that 'day of the dead' pic sparked an idea in my read right away.
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