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Old 07-31-02, 02:44 AM   #1
The Necromancer
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Murder

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Murder (Ooh, the day before the due date. Now thats pretty close shave)

Murder murder mother fucking murder//
Soldier soldier didn't wanna hurt her//
Dragon dragon one lone punisher//

Flyin flying across the sky flying//
Dying dying across the land dying//
People dragons people dragons, Everybody crying//

In the age of chaos two factions battle for dominance//
The dragon chants enchants a trance of seeming romance//
The king of dragons stood upon the queen's pedestool//
The cruel fool human king's daughter would soon rule//
She was sick of this war, she was tired, she's Princess Arness//
So she dressed for success to suppress wars progress//
What she did was simple but was treason for both sides//
Moral slides Dragon Queen crys chaos collides sadness abides//
But because of one simple murder the war indeed stopped//
Armys swapped distraught thought brought halt to the onslaught//

Princess Arness soon because queen of human's kingdom//
The fearsome dragon queen succumb to a gruesome phantom//
Arness was tired of the guilt from the dragon queen's pain//
With strain she again sneaked into the dragon's domain//
This time to confess the murder she did...//
...no one ever saw the princess again... or the dragon queen.//
 
Old 08-04-02, 02:17 AM   #2
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In the age of chaos two factions battle for dominance//
^ Outlined tha whole topic/theme
This was like a fairy tale ... but wid a sad ending
dope story line ... kept me readin ...
You have an amazing imagination ...
Much props ...
 
 


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