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01-09-06, 02:45 AM | #1 | |||||||
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13. Nick Fletcher vs. 21. Flow Intelligent
IP: A0C8 44A9
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Drop verse by Friday, 11:59 PM Eastern Time. 16 Lines. No Recycling. No Biting. No Feeding. Good Luck.. Come Dope. |
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01-09-06, 04:10 AM | #2 | |||
Skadoosh!
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IP: 8D50 76CC
Check faggot.
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01-09-06, 04:11 AM | #3 | |||
Skadoosh!
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IP: 8D50 76CC
Fuck you bitch. You're wack.
And still using that same shitty style from when I KO'ed you in 2004. 16 lines, check. This broke ass kid ain’t shit, I got heads noddin’ on the sets.. ..as I come with a bouncin’ flow, he just comes with bouncin’ cheques. Kid’s confused about shit lately, so I’ll beat him with ease.. Man, he don’t even know if he’s gone or ‘ere……… …or a sexually transmitted disease!! Ok, let’s get serious…ya ain’t ready to touch my class.. ..cuz this is guerrilla warfare, and I’m smashin’ yo monkey ass!! Look dude, ya got no defence, as I bring shots to ya shield, Ya bit off more than ya could chew………like Tyson vs. Holyfield. Really, I don’t gotta come hard…and yo, that’s a fact.. ..cuz Flow’s consistency in this tourney is his disappearing act I ain’t modest about shit, this battle’s gone go off without a hitch.. ..as I fuck Intel……everyone how I’m gonna destroy this bitch Kid you’ve fell off, let’s be real…ya ain’t hit shit in a while.. Last time flow had a decent connection… …was on his AOL 3-month trial. Flow ya done fool…seriously y’all, I ain’t being funny.. ..I’ll have him outta KORV, without even askin’ for prize money. |
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01-09-06, 12:16 PM | #4 | |||||
The Epitome Of Greatness
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IP: 3240 794D
Check, You still aint shit
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01-09-06, 01:27 PM | #5 | |||||
The Epitome Of Greatness
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IP: 3240 794D
Check it.....
Im fucking up ya chances, This ya last round of fighting MC's Cuz ya seeing L's straight up like angles at ninety degrees This battle's tragic .... So now ya future looks cloudy and dim Cuz you aint touching flow, Like swimmers without any limbs Blessin this dude, Nick aint shit, Plus i'm wrecking his crew Cuz lately RV's got you all gassed up ... Like Mexican food Fletcher is wack .... So i'll always stay disgracing his name Because this fruit is used and dry .. Try 'Raisin' your game Solo, Let's be honest ... I know you really admire my stats But like broke railroads, You should just retire your tracks Getting tossed regardless, Go ahead and drop ya hardest Just watch as i throw this herbicide, Like cautious farmers* Most of your raps are weak, The rest are mostly played bitch Cuz if pussy was skill, It'd be no question why youre gay kid Plus i bet he uses a line about me not paying some money Which has been said a million times so stop playing it dummy *= Herbicide (Herb Aside)
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01-09-06, 02:15 PM | #6 | ||||
Moderator
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IP: A713 E6BC
This broke ass kid ain’t shit, I got heads noddin’ on the sets..
..as I come with a bouncin’ flow, he just comes with bouncin’ cheques. Ok, let’s get serious…ya ain’t ready to touch my class.. ..cuz this is guerrilla warfare, and I’m smashin’ yo monkey ass!! vs. Im fucking up ya chances, This ya last round of fighting MC's Cuz ya seeing L's straight up like angles at ninety degrees Most of your raps are weak, The rest are mostly played bitch Cuz if pussy was skill, It'd be no question why youre gay kid Both had 2 punchline quotables. So, it comes down to who's verse was better on average. So, exlcuding the quotables this is what I thought about the verses. King Solo had a lot of forced shit, like: Kid’s confused about shit lately, so I’ll beat him with ease.. Man, he don’t even know if he’s gone or ‘ere……… …or a sexually transmitted disease!! Those two "ors" in a row killed this. I know gonnorea is a sexually transmitted disease, but this shit just did not work. It was forced and didn't even come close to connecting. Then, Solo came with that Tyson line which went played out a few months after the fight.. meaning it is extremely played. And the consistency line wasn't even a punch. "You're consistency comes from you leaving after tournaments are over!" doesn't do anything for this battle. Then, the nameplays on Flow Intelligent are all played out right now, leaving that Intel line worthless. The type of shit where it's "You're only connection is through the internet" are played as hell too. Shit's just old. The last line could have been worded better, it was still decent, but didn't connect very hard at all. Now, on to Flow Intelligent's verse.. After his first quotable that line was self glorification and sucked weiner. The wordplay was played and the line didn't do anything for your verse. The line about mexican food was decent, but the "like" lowered the effectiveness. The raisin wordplay is played out, even here. L.I. was using that in the last KORV. The broke railroads line was decent enough, it just didn't seem like it was worded to its maximum effectiveness. The herbicide line was another decent one. Not dope, but still average. You should have skipped the explanation, but it was still alright. After your second quotable you posted up a random statement that I don't care about. Solo did use a money line, but everybody already knows it's played, so that statement was pointless. However, I do believe that Flow Intelligent pulled off an upset here. King Solo had too many forced and played lines, as well as random statements. Flow Intellligent attempted wordplay in almost every line, but some of it was worded wrong or played. So, in the end, my vote goes to Flow Intelligent. |
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01-09-06, 04:29 PM | #7 | |||||||
Banned
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IP: F7E3 42B8
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Started off decent & I thought better was yet to come however it kind of drifted downwards rather than up. Quote:
Sme nice some weak. Some stuff u used was like filler material & not a great punch such as the 'touching flow' line. However you had 5/8 bars that I liked whereas King had 4/8. V/ F.I. |
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01-09-06, 06:49 PM | #8 | |||
Skadoosh!
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IP: 8D50 76CC
No comment.
Last edited by King Solo : 01-09-06 at 06:54 PM. |
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01-09-06, 11:50 PM | #9 | |||||
Bonecrushing Nigga
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IP: 1A27 F887
Getting tossed regardless, Go ahead and drop ya hardest
Just watch as i throw this herbicide, Like cautious farmers* *ROFLing*
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01-11-06, 06:14 PM | #10 | ||||
Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
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IP: 8752 F263
i vote tie lol
good battle you two
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01-11-06, 08:34 PM | #11 | ||||||
Insane in the textbrain
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IP: C15C CF52
This broke ass kid ain’t shit, I got heads noddin’ on the sets..
..as I come with a bouncin’ flow, he just comes with bouncin’ cheques. ^^meh ok Kid’s confused about shit lately, so I’ll beat him with ease.. Man, he don’t even know if he’s gone or ‘ere……… …or a sexually transmitted disease!! ^^eh Ok, let’s get serious…ya ain’t ready to touch my class.. ..cuz this is guerrilla warfare, and I’m smashin’ yo monkey ass!! ^^guerilla and monkey associative worplay...so? kinda weak Look dude, ya got no defence, as I bring shots to ya shield, Ya bit off more than ya could chew………like Tyson vs. Holyfield. ^^meh comparison, not harsh Really, I don’t gotta come hard…and yo, that’s a fact.. ..cuz Flow’s consistency in this tourney is his disappearing act ^^heh, better I ain’t modest about shit, this battle’s gone go off without a hitch.. ..as I fuck Intel……everyone how I’m gonna destroy this bitch ^^ok but coulda been worded better Kid you’ve fell off, let’s be real…ya ain’t hit shit in a while.. Last time flow had a decent connection… …was on his AOL 3-month trial. ^^heh, not bad flip Flow ya done fool…seriously y’all, I ain’t being funny.. ..I’ll have him outta KORV, without even askin’ for prize money. ^^meh vs. Im fucking up ya chances, This ya last round of fighting MC's Cuz ya seeing L's straight up like angles at ninety degrees ^^bland, but aight This battle's tragic .... So now ya future looks cloudy and dim Cuz you aint touching flow, Like swimmers without any limbs ^^ouch, it pains me to read such lame comparisons, lol sorry dude Blessin this dude, Nick aint shit, Plus i'm wrecking his crew Cuz lately RV's got you all gassed up ... Like Mexican food ^^agh! not another comparison, dude they're pointless unless they're funny! And it's not really worded into a diss Fletcher is wack .... So i'll always stay disgracing his name Because this fruit is used and dry .. Try 'Raisin' your game ^^good concept, weak wording Solo, Let's be honest ... I know you really admire my stats But like broke railroads, You should just retire your tracks ^^heh, ok Getting tossed regardless, Go ahead and drop ya hardest Just watch as i throw this herbicide, Like cautious farmers* ^^good (but lol@ explaining it, any decent textcee gets it anyway) Most of your raps are weak, The rest are mostly played bitch Cuz if pussy was skill, It'd be no question why youre gay kid ^^ok concept, bad wording Plus i bet he uses a line about me not paying some money Which has been said a million times so stop playing it dummy ^^not really a diss I think FI had the best bar of the battle, but Nick came more consistent. If FI had worded some of his good concepts better, he'd get my vote, but overall I think Nick just barely took it with consistency v/Nick
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Fee Fi Fo Fum, now bitch I'm a giant And your ass is like Jack, but your magic beans is wack Skills is what you lack I'm like a Benz, you ain't even like a Cadillac Ya more like a Reagal I'm a pittbull and you's a beagel |
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01-11-06, 08:52 PM | #12 | |||||
Blow Me
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IP: 28A8 B6DC
This broke ass kid ain’t shit, I got heads noddin’ on the sets..
..as I come with a bouncin’ flow, he just comes with bouncin’ cheques. ehh iight Kid’s confused about shit lately, so I’ll beat him with ease.. Man, he don’t even know if he’s gone or ‘ere……… …or a sexually transmitted disease!! i agree with mim on this.. could be nice.. but.. didnt hit to full effect... Ok, let’s get serious…ya ain’t ready to touch my class.. ..cuz this is guerrilla warfare, and I’m smashin’ yo monkey ass!! wasnt feeling it Look dude, ya got no defence, as I bring shots to ya shield, Ya bit off more than ya could chew………like Tyson vs. Holyfield. played Really, I don’t gotta come hard…and yo, that’s a fact.. ..cuz Flow’s consistency in this tourney is his disappearing act cool bar I ain’t modest about shit, this battle’s gone go off without a hitch.. ..as I fuck Intel……everyone how I’m gonna destroy this bitch iight personal.. could be alot better Kid you’ve fell off, let’s be real…ya ain’t hit shit in a while.. Last time flow had a decent connection… …was on his AOL 3-month trial. played Flow ya done fool…seriously y’all, I ain’t being funny.. ..I’ll have him outta KORV, without even askin’ for prize money. wasnt feeling it m fucking up ya chances, This ya last round of fighting MC's Cuz ya seeing L's straight up like angles at ninety degrees iight opener This battle's tragic .... So now ya future looks cloudy and dim Cuz you aint touching flow, Like swimmers without any limbs ehh alrite Blessin this dude, Nick aint shit, Plus i'm wrecking his crew Cuz lately RV's got you all gassed up ... Like Mexican food played Fletcher is wack .... So i'll always stay disgracing his name Because this fruit is used and dry .. Try 'Raisin' your game played.. but made me laugh Solo, Let's be honest ... I know you really admire my stats But like broke railroads, You should just retire your tracks liked this Getting tossed regardless, Go ahead and drop ya hardest Just watch as i throw this herbicide, Like cautious farmers* feeling this no need for explanation Most of your raps are weak, The rest are mostly played bitch Cuz if pussy was skill, It'd be no question why youre gay kid decent Plus i bet he uses a line about me not paying some money Which has been said a million times so stop playing it dummy alrite closer overall: i thought this battle could have been 843092843 times better.. but it wasnt so i gotta vote on what i see.. and.. i had expected nick to take this.. but i think he kinda half-assed.. and flow took advantage.. both came played.. but Flow just came slightly better and edged nick in this battle....v/Flow Intelligent
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01-13-06, 11:55 AM | #13 | ||||||
hotshh!
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IP: 8B7B DE28
damn sol
keep in touch......... |
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01-13-06, 05:23 PM | #14 | ||||
Jack The Ripper
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IP: 5F2C AA8F
Ok, let’s get serious…ya ain’t ready to touch my class..
..cuz this is guerrilla warfare, and I’m smashin’ yo monkey ass!! Flow ya done fool…seriously y’all, I ain’t being funny.. ..I’ll have him outta KORV, without even askin’ for prize money. vs. Im fucking up ya chances, This ya last round of fighting MC's Cuz ya seeing L's straight up like angles at ninety degrees Getting tossed regardless, Go ahead and drop ya hardest Just watch as i throw this herbicide, Like cautious farmers I got equal quotables, altho the herbacide bar by far topped all of Solo's shit, his verse in general was a little more consistent, iunno, to many crappy meta's and weak shit from FI, he only had these 2 good lines and the rest were ass, while King Solo had these 2 decent lines, some wack lines, and some more decent lines, I got KS taking this with consistency v/King Solo
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01-14-06, 10:31 PM | #15 | ||||||
hotshh!
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IP: 66CC 3CD6
Kid’s confused about shit lately, so I’ll beat him with ease..
Man, he don’t even know if he’s gone or ‘ere……… …or a sexually transmitted disease!! Ok, let’s get serious…ya ain’t ready to touch my class.. ..cuz this is guerrilla warfare, and I’m smashin’ yo monkey ass!! Really, I don’t gotta come hard…and yo, that’s a fact.. ..cuz Flow’s consistency in this tourney is his disappearing act I ain’t modest about shit, this battle’s gone go off without a hitch.. ..as I fuck Intel……everyone how I’m gonna destroy this bitch Flow ya done fool…seriously y’all, I ain’t being funny.. ..I’ll have him outta KORV, without even askin’ for prize money. gimme my money vs Im fucking up ya chances, This ya last round of fighting MC's Cuz ya seeing L's straight up like angles at ninety degrees Getting tossed regardless, Go ahead and drop ya hardest Just watch as i throw this herbicide, Like cautious farmers* Most of your raps are weak, The rest are mostly played bitch Cuz if pussy was skill, It'd be no question why youre gay kid 1st time i read this i thought flow won, but i read it again and flow shit was good but nicks was just as good or better honestly v/nick |
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