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09-16-06, 10:38 AM | #1 | |||||||
I'm Talented.Period.
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"From the Get-go"...new banga from ya boyeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!
IP: 40C2 F668
http://www.soundclick.com/qakaprox
^^Click on "From the Get-Go" Beat: OP beats Hook: Tha Q Verses 1& 2: Tha Q Concept: I wanted to spit about how life is in D.C. right now. It's part club banga/part story telling. Note: The quality on this is very compromised. I have a new lap top and have yet to purchase a set up. So, what you hear is me spitting through the lap top's built-in microphone. It's tolerable, but definitely sub par. Holla 1 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=234990 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=234991 |
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09-16-06, 10:50 AM | #2 | |||
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IP: 73B8 65CC
aight you can tell the quality is different....but mixed well beat is coo...delivery and flow is real nice...lol you need yo set up back...hook is cool from the gecko!!!! like the lizard lol delvery on second verse is cool this was a nice song yo i like this jus the quality but you already know nice drop
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09-16-06, 11:41 AM | #3 | ||||
I don't lose
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IP: 7994 4630
jerk you stole my beat....ive had the song written for a while....just waiting on my new equiptment to come in the mail......the yelling on the laptop dont work that well needs more warmth.....hook is okay...it flows decent.....good flow n shit...it does sound weird to hear you on some "been done before" shit.....i unno produce it better n it can be good....
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09-16-06, 12:21 PM | #4 | |||||||
I'm Talented.Period.
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IP: 40C2 F668
^^UR the jerk!!!!!!!!
where u been?!? Come suck my dick! lol...nah...wuts up |
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09-16-06, 03:47 PM | #5 | ||||
Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
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IP: 6A24 77A2
omg q on bad quality :schocked:
lol can definately tell but ohwell doesnt take away from the dopeness hook is cool except for the quality but oh well didnt really like the flow in the begginning of the verse but it got better alot of multis lyrically def feel it lol delivery is nice like this verse better flow was nice throughotu you switched up the rhyme scheme throughout i jsut dont know why youre talking about females. but i dont care props nice track redo it when you up yyour quality ps are you going to sell your co1u
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09-16-06, 06:41 PM | #6 | |||||||
I'm Talented.Period.
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IP: 40C2 F668
iz comin up
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09-16-06, 08:48 PM | #7 | |||||||
Better THAN You!
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IP: 5266 8858
Quality is noticable, but doesn't really matter. that doesn't take away from Enjoyability.
Hook - Pretty Nice.. Catchy, Quality kinda effects it, But it's still pretty nice. And keeps me want listenin to this. Verse 1 - Good Flow, for some reason the content reminds me of a ludacris type..I don't know why..just the whole swag of the verse seems Ludacris Type - I.E. Upbeat and Moving.. Hook - Look up, nice hook..Catchy as hell..even got me speaking along.. Verse 2 - Nice..lol...I'm likin this one, you left a little of the Upbeat feeling off in this one and told a little more story...which was pretty nice..I love the switch between them...keeps a good variety.. Pretty Nice..You let the beat ride a while at the end..So i just had to stop it..fade that out or something..but otherwise..nice.. hit me up.. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=235025
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09-17-06, 05:46 AM | #8 | |||||||
I'm Talented.Period.
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IP: 40C2 F668
preciate da feed
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09-17-06, 08:19 AM | #9 | |||||||
The Most Feared Gang!
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IP: 79BA 8EB3
Yeah quality is noticeable..
New Chick?..you bisexual now?.. yeah energy is good on this...flow is nice..too lyrics are aight.. presence is good ma slide between my thighs?...u into gurls now?.. hook is catchy..the like the lizard bit kinna corny but still decent def have a good delivery on this, i jus dno if uze being fake in the track wit the gurl shit?..or u turnin bi or what cos u talkin about chicks every other 4 bars.. yeah its decent..not sumin id bump so much because u def can do better..but the qual prolly comprimised it.. wanna see some of ya older shit..this was below ya levels fam..1 jus tryna be real..no hate..jus pointin out whats wrong wit it...
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09-18-06, 03:51 PM | #10 | |||||
scotia's finest
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IP: EA03 FBCE
qualityz lacking badly......but
beatz nice.....flow dope as alwAyz...............lyrics r illyyyyyyy............ love ya style ......verses r strong......vocab is good.......so overall for being on such a shit mic...this is hot dogg.......madd love and respect...(no homo) lol get at me and return tha favour |
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09-19-06, 02:29 AM | #11 | |||||||
Flyweight
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IP: 4B42 F7C5
Listen'n
Like the lil intro... Ur mixin was off homie...on some real shit...ur vocals are to loud... hook: Like it catchy 1st: Cocky like the punch lines....flows always on point man...love it...multies on point like the pan from left to right good to be different...ur vocals are to loud though sound a lil high pitch....u gotta new mic or suttin? HOok: Same 2nd: Chevy malibu ahahahah thats whats up..like this verse presence is dope lyrics is dope like the concepts better than the first...flow is crazy on this kid...good shit.. Over-all Man i cant front maybe its just my ears the mixin is different than the other tracks i hear from...you...but the beat was crazy like the way u freaked it...deff a club banga...keep doin what u do fam.. my ratin 8/10
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09-19-06, 11:26 AM | #12 | |||||
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IP: C229 A120
i rember when you where spiting constant fire what happened as you can see i dint like it the hook needs more work and when you explian the streets or whats happenig you got to describe more
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09-19-06, 12:15 PM | #13 | |||||||
I'm Talented.Period.
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IP: 47F3 E0A2
I actually don't have a set up. I recorded on my new lap top. So, that explains the quality, or lack thereof.
preciate da feed 1 |
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09-19-06, 07:24 PM | #14 | |||||
The Paragraph President
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IP: 2372 BC06
damn man, you don't do any kinda mixin at all or what? nah yea you do I can hear some ecko's you must do some other shit. but quality isn't horrible but before it was better. anyway your voice sounds more pure and loud. Your emotion is on top fa sure always is. the lyrics is decent, catchy pharses in there. The hook is also catchy too, nice job with that. The beat is hot as fuck and I believe this is a hot track still even with the weaker quality. decent job Q.
rtf here: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=235147
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