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Antonio Banderas 5 83.33%
Quelude 1 16.67%
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Old 01-27-04, 10:58 AM   #16
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Uppin# 2 for votes......................................... Im up (1-0), I will vote on anyones battle honestly , NO MATTER WHO THEY VOTE FOR...
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Old 01-27-04, 11:35 AM   #17
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Vote - For whoever Antonio Banderas battled. Don't drop your links in EI ever again.
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Old 01-27-04, 01:17 PM   #18
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Uppin for a PROPER breakdown please

structure
meta's
punches
wordplay
multi's
flow
sustainment
enoyment
overall
Please include a good line or so explaining why you picked who you picked...I personally will vote in the same manner on whoever votes from here on...
 
Old 01-27-04, 01:32 PM   #19
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word to end.

but v/ antonio . .
but, if you ever drop links in wrong place again you may be banned.
oh, v/ ant because his punches were pretty original.. and the other kid fed, plus the other kid didnt have that many punches to begin with.. and none of the ones he had made me recognize them... a few of antonios were good like the mars satellite thing... current events are sometimes good to use in ur verse. nice job...

v/ antonio, vote here, both of you;

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108165
 
Old 01-27-04, 02:02 PM   #20
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word to end.

but v/ antonio . .
but, if you ever drop links in wrong place again you may be banned.
oh, v/ ant because his punches were pretty original.. and the other kid fed, plus the other kid didnt have that many punches to begin with.. and none of the ones he had made me recognize them... a few of antonios were good like the mars satellite thing... current events are sometimes good to use in ur verse. nice job...

v/ antonio, vote here, both of you;

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108165


TY for voting.... Sorry about post my battle links in the wrong forum. I mistook the text description. I thought the lounge was a free place to post anything.... Sorry again guys..... Upping for more votes.....
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Old 01-27-04, 02:35 PM   #21
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To feeble....i doubt you really read my verse all the way through...I fed? show me one line in ly verse where I fed off that terribly structured verse.
 
Old 01-28-04, 03:47 PM   #22
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Antonio took this only cuz Que was pretty tame.

Not really any direct disses in that.

All roundabout shit and it wasn't roundabout due to wordplay.

Pretty much cuz he was stuck on multi's.

Seen it happen so many times.

Fucka multi, a few are cool, but you can't direct hard disses when ya trying ta fit them inta multi form.

Despite the way herbish format complete with ridiculous explanations and stupid exclamation marks...

Antonio is still the one who threw metas, wordplay, and the harder shots.

Check it again if you don't believe me.

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Old 01-29-04, 09:27 AM   #23
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Uppin # 4 for some explain votes..... Please vote on this battle as well, so we all call be able to battle different individuals.... I will vote honestly as links are dropped.....

Battle Verses Killa Kid
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109803
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Old 01-29-04, 09:30 AM   #24
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This battle was good, but...

Antonio Banderas: Ur verse is good. I liked ur punches and personals. Nice wordplay and creativity. Keep elevatin'.

Quelude: Your verse was good too, but it was more of a self-glorification verse. Nice wordplay. Keep elevatin'.

Vote: Antonio Banderas
 
Old 01-29-04, 09:30 AM   #25
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This battle was good, but...

Antonio Banderas: Ur verse is good. I liked ur punches and personals. Nice wordplay and creativity. Keep elevatin'.

Quelude: Your verse was good too, but it was more of a self-glorification verse. Nice wordplay. Keep elevatin'.

Vote: Antonio Banderas
 
Old 01-29-04, 09:32 AM   #26
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Oh snap, this is in elevated.... My vote don't count.
 
Old 01-29-04, 11:56 AM   #27
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wordplay - antonio
metaphors - antonio
personals - none
structure - quelude (antonio's linez were kinda stretched)
finisher - antonio (although it was stretched as fuck)
overall - antonio

vote - antonio

votez on thiz plz:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...735#post1137735
 
Old 01-29-04, 06:00 PM   #28
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Ya Breath stinks...U remain Chick-less (Chicklets)...I rip-spits the sick-est+
U could spit-ur-quickest but Instant still lost(loss) like Mars satellites-visits+
cool
U checked into a mated-quest..This rook caves-chest(chess) & Leave ya brain-stressed+
Til ur confused & laid stretched like pedifiles reachin for gay actovists breast+
blah
Stupid Nigga.............Takin photos of RUBIX CUBE dont mean U pose-a-challenge+
Ur known-to-coward..U Havent posted ur verse cuz I shut U down like 2003-power-outtage+
eeeh
Slugfest? Assault & Batter(Battery) U with stich-es, :K:. could pitch-hit+
still both bitches go down swinging at balls like 50 Cents bitches+
ok

------------Finisher----------------------------------
U Never tear pussy....ur limp dick cant rip-sex, U prewriting to save-Rep+
Strappin on condoms only way ya Lay-text(latex), ur dayz-hexed like unlucky gamblin with Vodoo taboos in Las Vegas+
(put down text)
the lay-text has been played for a long time

I dont like the attempted wordplays like the "loss", "chicklets", and "battery" and the other lines like that. Also the dashes in your verse emply that the reader doesn't know a multi when he sees one. Your readers arn't that stupid. Besides that, the verse could have been better, but it was ok

Your words wouldn't be deep...in a bottle beneath the sea
Quelude is pure emcee...Ant's mediocre textcee
nope...rhyme better
Who even as a father..wouldn't possess the word's to bless me
Ya chest can't hold enuff breath to utter a threat against me
note
I'm real emcee..if needed I'll truck your entire infantry
Defeat you in battles mentally..and beat you unconcious physically
not a punche, and the rhymes are blah
Your beneath me like the soles of my feet..you always will be..
You must don't have no sensory pads on your hands if you don't feel me.
nope, and the soul of the shoe is played
V.O.D's ain't no roughnecks...half ya'll aint even emcee's
A squad a herbs that's suspect as Micheal Jackson at Chuckie Cheese.
nope

Your verse just lacked hard enough punches and wittiness

V/ Antonio for connecting a couple punches, better multis and more creativity.

Please return the favor on my battle with GaZeebo

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Old 01-30-04, 08:52 AM   #29
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Uppin for more Votes.....

Please drop honest votes here...
Battle Verses Quelude
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109584

Battle Verses Killa Kid
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109803

Drop a link and we will vote HONESTLY on your battles no matter who you vote for....
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Old 01-30-04, 02:21 PM   #30
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Ya Breath stinks...U remain Chick-less (Chicklets)...I rip-spits the sick-est+
U could spit-ur-quickest but Instant still lost(loss) like Mars satellites-visits+
1st line is no good, useless multis and no punch...second lime is nice..good meta
U checked into a mated-quest..This rook caves-chest(chess) & Leave ya brain-stressed+
Til ur confused & laid stretched like pedifiles reachin for gay actovists breast+
played
Stupid Nigga.............Takin photos of RUBIX CUBE dont mean U pose-a-challenge+
Ur known-to-coward..U Havent posted ur verse cuz I shut U down like 2003-power-outtage+
dun rhyme..but ok punches
Slugfest? Assault & Batter(Battery) U with stich-es, :K:. could pitch-hit+
still both bitches go down swinging at balls like 50 Cents bitches+
kinda played but ok
------------Finisher----------------------------------
U Never tear pussy....ur limp dick cant rip-sex, U prewriting to save-Rep+
Strappin on condoms only way ya Lay-text(latex), ur dayz-hexed like unlucky gamblin with Vodoo taboos in Las Vegas+
(put down text)
dope


Your words wouldn't be deep...in a bottle beneath the sea
Quelude is pure emcee...Ant's mediocre textcee
1st line is good...second is filler
Who even as a father..wouldn't possess the word's to bless me
Ya chest can't hold enuff breath to utter a threat against me
1st line is filler, second is ok
I'm real emcee..if needed I'll truck your entire infantry
Defeat you in battles mentally..and beat you unconcious physically
again 1st is filler..second is played
Your beneath me like the soles of my feet..you always will be..
You must don't have no sensory pads on your hands if you don't feel me.
whack
V.O.D's ain't no roughnecks...half ya'll aint even emcee's
A squad a herbs that's suspect as Micheal Jackson at Chuckie Cheese.
decent but played

Overall Que came too weak and with too much filler in his verse. Antonio...you had a alright verse...some drop punches in there. Try and avoid multis unless they are punches/personals too..otherwise they are worthless. Vote=Antonio

PLease drop an honest vote here guys. I took the time for you http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110513
 
 


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