fuked up the otherthread so here's a fresh n new one...

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sorry bout the confusion jus post ya shit here..g luck..1

Known-fa-hell-in-spits, FLoW Seams Important but he so(w)-irrelevant,
& I Bet playin Russian Roulette... wouldn't FlOw-InTeLLiGeNt(s),
Check his sig, He from rochester...LOL...stop claimin it's-a-Hard-Place,
just cuz ya Raps be Stool(shit) in collabs don't mean U git-some-Bar-Space.
U Make Me-jus-Chuckle! Get Back To Ya Mom, feed-n-suckle,
& ya Knees-ull-buckle after I Dis-Arm ya Punches like Gangreen-ta-Knuckles,
You need some talent-scout cuz our skillz just don't, Balance-Out,
Plus I Spit Talons Out, that "Make u Go to dodge" Like the Talons-Out.
I hope U found-it-out, Ya grasp of complexity, its really absurd-mayne,
My genius a 'Parkings spot' so ya shoulda Put ya 'Focus' On the Word-PLay.

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FlOw InTeLLiGeNt's verse !!!!


time to get served so my cold words will make ya brain freeze
and when I smack this herb backwards, u wont even "Face Me"
ketch damn son only way you could merk me is with a 22 handgun
ya lines is random like the ones you used against kings & phantom
take a number cuz you aint comprehendin these competitive lines
i'll take 22 and subtract 31...so it can equal ya age...negative nine*
first im gonna rip ya heart and lungs out so ya chest is hollow
then im gonna start screwin caps on ya head like pepsi bottles
if you cant end it...dont start it...talk shit and i'll leave ya head departed
you must be retarded A.I dont want you
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Originally Posted by kEtCh~22
guess i'm back on the market..

2~1~5...? fuck ya block cuz ill kill you when you restin**
leave you "under ya hood" like you checkin ya car engine
ya chin sliced..i been nice..but that dont mean i wont smack a geek
i'll fucking grab ketchs spine and make his shoulders clap for me


*=in his profile his age says -9
**=his location is 2~1~5..."leave him under his hood"..bury his body in his hood

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come on now my verse looks gay without the links and shyt

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time to get served so my cold words will make ya brain freeze
and when I smack this herb backwards, u wont even "Face Me"
ketch damn son only way you could merk me is with a 22 handgun
ya lines is random like the ones you used against kings & phantom
take a number cuz you aint comprehendin these competitive lines
i'll take 22 and subtract 31...so it can equal ya age...negative nine*
first im gonna rip ya heart and lungs out so ya chest is hollow
then im gonna start screwin caps on ya head like pepsi bottles
if you cant end it...dont start it...talk shit and i'll leave ya head departed
you must be retarded A.I dont want you



2~1~5...? fuck ya block cuz ill kill you when you restin**
leave you "under ya hood" like you checkin ya car engine
ya chin sliced..i been nice..but that dont mean i wont smack a geek
i'll fucking grab ketchs spine and make his shoulders clap for me


*=in his profile his age says -9
**=his location is 2~1~5..."leave him under his hood"..bury his body in his hood

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thats what my verse should look like not the other post ~!1!~

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OK both was good.

Ketch u had fillers, couple personals, punches was basic.........nothin impressive.
Inteligent had punches, personals....played at times by both.......but what confused me is that Flow had more lines than Ketch i think...........i guess u went over the limit with yo verse but Flow edged this one with betta punches.

V/: Flow

Ketch u ar in.............dont worry good that u tried i read otha battles u been in. but this one u came weak fam..........but welcome to A.I

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ok nice drops by both but imma lean 2 flow intelligent da name speaks 4 it self flow was just...intellegent ahhahaha nice drop feelin yo punches and personals and its good u redun yo verse ahha

bestline-ketch damn son only way you could merk me is with a 22 handgun
ya lines is random like the ones you used against kings & phantom


tight as shit.....

worsteline-none

ketech 22 u had a ok verse 2 but didnt keep up wit punches

bestline-Known-fa-hell-in-spits, FLoW Seams Important but he so(w)-irrelevant,
& I Bet playin Russian Roulette... wouldn't FlOw-InTeLLiGeNt(s),

nice vocab u had was tight in yo verses

worsteline-none really just add more punches wit details of yo personals

overall winner-F/I

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uppin for votes will return the favor ~!1!~

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uppin for votes willr eturn the favor ~!1!~

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uppin for votes will return the favor ~!1!~

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Ketch- Your verse was nice...but your punches didnt hit hard enough but they were decent in some way ....You had some nice personals...but your flow was aight...but overall you did well..but you came weak in dis battle inlike your other battles...

Flow- your verse was much nicer i thought...plus your punches were good they hit hard too...and you had a decent flow and some personals..but it seems you had more lines then Ketch...but overall you get my vote for better punches....

v/Flow Intelligent

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arright heres an honest vote for a couple of honest guys- please return the favor... http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132453

Ketch - Your flow throughout the whole verse was good... you exhibited some nice wordplay, with some strong lines... I really liked your opener through the "dodge" talon line- Some sick stuff in there... nice verse...

Flow- Your flow was good as well, the rhyming scheme was little simpler than ketch's- you also exhibited some good wordplay as well- you threw in some personal shit too- like the age negative nine line- that was pretty dope...

It was hard for me to pick a winner so I went on my favorite lines from both of you to decide....

take a number cuz you aint comprehendin these competitive lines
i'll take 22 and subtract 31...so it can equal ya age...negative nine* -
Shit was sick here.... sick flow, excellent wordplay- give this bar an 8/10

You need some talent-scout cuz our skillz just don't, Balance-Out,
Plus I Spit Talons Out, that "Make u Go to dodge" Like the Talons-Out.
I really liked this line- it flows well- and the wordplay is ridiculous- The only problem I have with it is you said "Talons-Out" twice... I understand Talon would have to be used twice to acheive the wordplay you were goin for- but I think you could have subsituted one of the "out's with something else for maximum effectiveness... ima give it a 7.5/10- -- Vote Flow Intelligent... Like I said, return the favor pooples...
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132453

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