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Old 03-24-05, 02:22 AM   #16
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Indeph-

Yeah go on change your name,so my rap gets ignored..
its okay,my rap changed,but you still as wack as before
eh concept of this punch is played
graph to kyleon...your wack ass don't deserve a name..
feed off your verse?to kill you,I'd probably regergitate!
no
Dude's a hustla..yeah he hustlin his ass off..
dumb ass paid double for rap lessons..and sold it for half off?!
eh alright
Yo I gotta crush you quickly,so I'ma be more serious..
so unlike ya title I'ma crush in less then four periods!
pretty decent
only way you could win is by sayin what I said..
cause you attractin bullshit and don't blaim it on the red....
kinda weak but ok...
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'In' RV we dont like bitches,I know ya hear them stop actin 'Deph'
Grippin ya chest,Ya out of breath,Coz its 0-4 I got one vote left
^not feelin it
LaughinOutLoud in your check in,Must think this is Makin The Band
But this aint a cakewalk,Im here to dismantle you just like da band
played as fuck...
Just in case,Pop shells to ya rib cage,death comes in a fast pace
Through ya eyes i can see ya soft,So i just smack you in the face
lmao wow...no
Leave ya faceless,no need to see which way ya punches is
Like banks ya only good for multis,back fire you into ashes
now this was decent
Your 'In-Depth' accepting this battle,and Like crack addicts
Find your inhaler quick cuz im collapsing your chest like Asthmatics
alright

Overall this was a weak battle both came weak i thought indeph had more punches then grafh did thats why hes gettin my vote...vote-Indeph
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Old 03-24-05, 01:00 PM   #17
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only way you could win is by sayin what I said..
cause you attractin bullshit and don't blaim it on the red....

only semi decent line of the battle... v/ whoever's line it was
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Old 03-24-05, 02:17 PM   #18
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Kyleon... You came pretty wack here.. no punches stood out. the 0-4 line was wack the da band line was wack and clearly elementary... Your closer was your best line and its played

overall: 3/10

indeph:

You had a pretty good verse... your first 2 bars were decent... as was your closer. 3rd and 4th bars were pretty good also, you stayed consistent with the punches and 1 good meta so you got my vote.

vote: Indeph
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Old 03-24-05, 03:22 PM   #19
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weak battle really

Grafh was just all about bein gangsta, there was no real personal punches in there that had any affect, it was mostly i'll crush you and i'll leave ya faceless and tlkin like u already won. its aight to have a couple of lines like that but a whole verse on it doesnt really work. ure wordplay to was pretty basic and honestly i cudnt spot any creative parts of ure drop. Indeph, ure drop wasn't much better, but u did actually show some personals in there, i liked ure opener that shit was pretty funny. ure wordplay to was basic and could use more complexity. both of y'all lacked in almost everything apart from flow and structure. overall though i think that Indeph took this cuz he actually had some worthwhile personals.

V/ - Indeph
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Old 03-24-05, 03:59 PM   #20
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Originally Posted by Wet Willy
wow, i dont see how mem voted for kyleon.. or whatever.. kids shit was forced, didnt flow well at all, syllable count was jacked, no hard hitting punches.. the personals from deph is what gave him the win.. neither came hard at all.. but deph gets this cause of personals..


That whole concept of "changed/you still suck" is played. I guess this site hasn't seen that shit before. The one quotable i pulled out of Kyleon's was better then the one in Indeph's.. to me.
 
Old 03-27-05, 09:08 PM   #21
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Indeph wins by KO, 'cuz it was 8-1 but none of you cockmonsters dropped links.
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