Check. 12 lines?

i have no idea who this guy is? i looked him up on google and got nothing, someone link me to a page or something please?

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Seriously, why in the hell would you wait until the day of to say that you don't know what's up?

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mandarin_%28comics%29

Educate yourself.

n' see now your done kid, ya just made me mad
and now ya just lay futile like a carpenter slacking bad
now Iron man has power son and so do i ya see
the son of ghangas kahn
now doesnt that just sound like a lifesize STD?
when ya get stuck, you can hit a switch man, and ditch
n' ya you can teleport, but isnt that running like a bitch?
dude is all green and shit, fags looks like a veggie brute
but mandarin?, he just sounds more like an orange fruit
i see, you had to win so you used someone obscure kid
n' now, he still got fucked up just like when iron man did

w/e..

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v/ O RLY, simply because ytmnd is win.

bob maRLY gives you a thumbs up, son.

All brute force, but not a bit of brains
Ya'd look in the sky too long and drown yourself in rain
A verse for each Labor, I'm doing you a favor
Expand it two more and I'm putting you in danger
I'll be Eurystheus, you can be my bitch
Gofer this, gofer that, come here and scratch my itch
Suck my dick - nah, for you that ain't a punishment
Probably suck your nephew off three times a day behind the sheds
I'll keep it short - you ain't man enough to finish the myth
So we'll put you in women's clothes, true to your inner nymph



Look up the Heracles and Hercules articles in Wikipedia for the references.

Nothing

vs.

All brute force, but not a bit of brains
Ya'd look in the sky too long and drown yourself in rain




I was honestly not feeling anything in this battle. Even the concepts that could have worked were very poorly worded and lacked the punch. The only line I kind of liked was the looking into the sky too long thing. That's why my vote goes to M the Literal.

V/ M the Literal

All brute force, but not a bit of brains
Ya'd look in the sky too long and drown yourself in rain



ehhhhhhhh both of you showed up weak heree, alotta bitchin before evn posting and then assing it when you come is not good, but w.e.

v/M.

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IJL

O RLY:
when ya get stuck, you can hit a switch man, and ditch
n' ya you can teleport, but isnt that running like a bitch?
dude is all green and shit, fags looks like a veggie brute
but mandarin?, he just sounds more like an orange fruit


M The Literal:
All brute force, but not a bit of brains
Ya'd look in the sky too long and drown yourself in rain

I'll keep it short - you ain't man enough to finish the myth
So we'll put you in women's clothes, true to your inner nymph


Wasn't feelin this battle at all, both of you came with fairly weak verses, I didn't really feel any lines were quotable, I just quoted the 2 that were better than the others from each of you. Teleport line was ok from RLY, Mandarin/fruit line was a nice concept but poorly worded, you coulda made it hit a lot harder. The rain line from Lit was ok, but doesn't really hit hard, the nymph line coulda been flipped better to be more effective. Overall, neither came hard, but I feel RLY was more consistent, the first two couplets were ok as well, where the rest of Lit's verse wasn't good.

vote = O RLY

now Iron man has power son and so do i ya see
the son of ghangas kahn
now doesnt that just sound like a lifesize STD?


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All brute force, but not a bit of brains
Ya'd look in the sky too long and drown yourself in rain

weak battle..
wasnt feelin either really..
M came more harder to me tho.. so he gets vote..

hmmmm...

im gonna have to go with M although it was sort of close...lyerically M won in every category but his verse started to digress at the end...the first part of M's verse was strong...O rly's verse just didnt apeal to me and the flow seemed to be off

v/M the literal

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3149147
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...53&page=1&pp=15
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=240356
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=240350

when ya get stuck, you can hit a switch man, and ditch
n' ya you can teleport, but isnt that running like a bitch?
dude is all green and shit, fags looks like a veggie brute
but mandarin?, he just sounds more like an orange fruit

vs.

I'll keep it short - you ain't man enough to finish the myth
So we'll put you in women's clothes, true to your inner nymph

Wasn't feelin' this battle much, but I actually got O RLY? here. M's closer was okay and his opener wasn't bad, but the 3 bars in the middle I thought were really ehhh and kinda lost this for him.

Vote - O RLY?