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check........................

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...43&page=1&pp=15

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checkin in.........

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"Wordz Ahgod has DECLINED this battle on 12-20-06 09:49 PM.

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^^he's scared.lol

boston trumps NY....... and thats everyday
only thing queens niggaz run is far far away
a net loser, kids got rv tattoo'd in his name, shit
his verses..
got more funny symbols than the spanish language
quote here, quote there..makes it hard to feel ya
ur lines stay stretched longer than coke dealers

*does marv jay stretched style.. except with a good punch*

kids a loner, never seen drugs... hes finished
if i gave him a brick..
.......... hed build a wall and lock himself in it

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look....

dogg im sick!...shit i dont even know dis kid n he's on my dick.....
when dis is ova he go do like his "title",make a thread sayin im GONE i QUiT
cuzz dat stainless i clap...a put u in a "BaG" like ya frame's a dyme sack...
yeah im in "millitary minds",& ya moms just a hoe dat give's "brain in iraq"....
fam how could u eva say dat ur sick??...i was laughin when i peep'd ur shit..
its all SHiT!!..and ya punches like da "kitchen sink" all u do is "FORCE-iT"..
u dont do audio's fam...ur a karaoke mc so keep puttin flows on cheap...
cuzz ya album's like cats dat got "LiFE iN JaiL" it got "no release date"....

1st bar-look at his title its say GONE I QUIT...

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^^he's scared.lol

meh its clear sdizzle got this... he had punches and some personals.. nice flow.. on the other hand marvjay hand no flow... and some decent punches but nothing really hard hitting nah what im saying..

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sdizzle
boston trumps NY....... and thats everyday
only thing queens niggaz run is far far away
decent
a net loser, kids got rv tattoo'd in his name, shit
his verses..
got more funny symbols than the spanish language
…nah
quote here, quote there..makes it hard to feel ya
ur lines stay stretched longer than coke dealers
decent punch
kids a loner, never seen drugs... hes finished
if i gave him a brick..
.......... hed build a wall and lock himself in it
okay, could’ve been harder


MARVJay1009
dogg im sick!...shit i dont even know dis kid n he's on my dick.....
when dis is ova he go do like his "title",make a thread sayin im GONE i QUiT
persona was good, punch was okay
cuzz dat stainless i clap...a put u in a "BaG" like ya frame's a dyme sack...
yeah im in "millitary minds",& ya moms just a hoe dat give's "brain in iraq"....
weak punch
fam how could u eva say dat ur sick??...i was laughin when i peep'd ur shit..
its all SHiT!!..and ya punches like da "kitchen sink" all u do is "FORCE-iT"..
uhhh decent
u dont do audio's fam...ur a karaoke mc so keep puttin flows on cheap...
cuzz ya album's like cats dat got "LiFE iN JaiL" it got "no release date"....
nope

v/ MARV

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uhhh this was actually close cuz sdizzle came as wack as Marv..


a net loser, kids got rv tattoo'd in his name, shit
his verses..
got more funny symbols than the spanish language
(pretty good meta and punch)

Vs.

fam how could u eva say dat ur sick??...i was laughin when i peep'd ur shit..
its all SHiT!!..and ya punches like da "kitchen sink" all u do is "FORCE-iT"..
(punch was wack but good meta)

So i think i gotta give this to Sdizzle because he actually had a decent punch and a good meta while Marv only had a good meta and no hard punches.

Vote: Sdizzle

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boston trumps NY....... and thats everyday
only thing queens niggaz run is far far away
funny, nice opener!
a net loser, kids got rv tattoo'd in his name, shit
his verses..
got more funny symbols than the spanish language
NO! not feelin this!
quote here, quote there..makes it hard to feel ya
ur lines stay stretched longer than coke dealers
pretty gud!
kids a loner, never seen drugs... hes finished
if i gave him a brick..
.......... hed build a wall and lock himself in it
not bad.......

dogg im sick!...shit i dont even know dis kid n he's on my dick.....
when dis is ova he go do like his "title",make a thread sayin im GONE i QUiT
nice personal, gud opener!
cuzz dat stainless i clap...a put u in a "BaG" like ya frame's a dyme sack...
yeah im in "millitary minds",& ya moms just a hoe dat give's "brain in iraq"....
alright punch!
fam how could u eva say dat ur sick??...i was laughin when i peep'd ur shit..
its all SHiT!!..and ya punches like da "kitchen sink" all u do is "FORCE-iT"..
nice!! gud multi, nice meta!!
u dont do audio's fam...ur a karaoke mc so keep puttin flows on cheap...
cuzz ya album's like cats dat got "LiFE iN JaiL" it got "no release date"....
bleh!! weak closer!

V/- MarvJ

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^ its a simile ... similes use like or as, metaphors are a direct comparison

sdizzles mad monkeyish today is a metaphor

sdizzle is like a monkey today is a simile

see?

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be4 u dickride da nigga cuzz he koed ya stupid ass last week..."a net loser, kids got rv tattoo'd in his name, shit
his verses..
got more funny symbols than the spanish language"

sombody tell me did dat ryhme????

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^^he's scared.lol

boston trumps NY....... and thats everyday
only thing queens niggaz run is far far away
a net loser, kids got rv tattoo'd in his name, shit
his verses..
got more funny symbols than the spanish language
quote here, quote there..makes it hard to feel ya
ur lines stay stretched longer than coke dealers
\
yo, this is the definition of simple.
i dont understand why sdizzle came like this,
but the hottest line in this was the queens and running far away.
the drug dealer line was played
the spanish symbol line wasnt good.
i guess he really didnt care anymore.
,
,
dogg im sick!...shit i dont even know dis kid n he's on my dick.....
when dis is ova he go do like his "title",make a thread sayin im GONE i QUiT
cuzz dat stainless i clap...a put u in a "BaG" like ya frame's a dyme sack...
yeah im in "millitary minds",& ya moms just a hoe dat give's "brain in iraq"....
fam how could u eva say dat ur sick??...i was laughin when i peep'd ur shit..
its all SHiT!!..and ya punches like da "kitchen sink" all u do is "FORCE-iT"..
/
marv shit was good, but the 1st line was kinda predictable personal, and the force it line was forced.
the brain in iraq line was good.
overall marv got better shit, and it was kinda stretched but he came harder than sdizzle
v/marv

quote here, quote there..makes it hard to feel ya
ur lines stay stretched longer than coke dealers
kids a loner, never seen drugs... hes finished
if i gave him a brick..
.......... hed build a wall and lock himself in it

vs.

NOTHING

Dizzle is seriously being dicked out of this battle.. I don't give a fuck what anybody says.. MarvJay lost, and if you think he won then you're either a dickrider or fucking retarded.

Vote - Sdizzle.

*cough* says nothing but nods in agreement *cough*

also...

name, shit
language

rhyme perfecty

*cough* sad thing is all my lines were true.... quote here quote there *cough*

*leaves thread*

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