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01-26-06, 08:07 PM | #1 | |||||
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fresh like me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1new one from ya boi
IP: 8630 C252
ripped this beat cuz i love it so had to do sumthing wit it....................
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pag...m?bandID=472818 linkz http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=220467 dudes acapella^^^^ http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=220476 speats snippet^^^^
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01-26-06, 08:30 PM | #2 | ||||
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decent track loved the beat verses were shackey at points we gotta work to get you a 50 cent flow lol j/p
But I like the track some hard shyt G nice job and keep reppin |
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01-26-06, 08:34 PM | #3 | |||||
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no 50 flow my flow is fine...................................thanx fer tha feeed uppin
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01-26-06, 08:54 PM | #4 | |||||||
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beat is tight...real tight...i wouldnt say you raped the beat...need a bit of work on your delivery but you ride the beat well...like that hook...need to elevate as far as punches they were kinda plain...not really feelin it so much sorry...
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01-26-06, 09:01 PM | #5 | |||||
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IP: 8630 C252
werd thanx fer tha feed................................
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01-27-06, 05:31 AM | #6 | |||||
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Aight this beat is coo...flow and delivery is aight...lyrics is str8...the hook is coo...second verse is coo delivery is aight...quality is decent...over-all nice ish man keep it up.
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01-27-06, 11:05 AM | #7 | |||||
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werd thanx bumppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp
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01-27-06, 11:09 AM | #8 | |||||||
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nice track yo
dilivery is nice lyrics is good hook is deece overall good track homie, keep on keeping on Feed used 1/31/06 "John Doe (A-Bomb Diss)"
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01-27-06, 03:30 PM | #9 | |||||
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IP: E927 7EEE
dis beats coo...lyricz is ok lines werent dat really hard hittin 2 me...flows coo not dat bad...deliverys aiiight...da hooks str8...but i cant really take sum1 serious on a bow wow beat...but overall dis was coo 4 da mos part...keep it up
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01-27-06, 03:31 PM | #10 | |||||
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lmao werd i just like tha beat so i did it for shits and gigglez..........
thanx fo feed
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01-27-06, 04:08 PM | #11 | |||||||
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beats coo, not my style but its cool.
flows pretty str8, off a few times. lyrics r pretty coo. voice is coo hook is pretty nice, scept u shudda made that very last line better overall tghis track was nice. keep at it ull elavate n be even better
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01-27-06, 04:17 PM | #12 | |||||
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IP: 8630 C252
werd thanx fam...................
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01-27-06, 05:15 PM | #13 | ||||||
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IP: 58B7 2299
theres nothing in ur voice that makes me WANT to hear this.
its.. bland. the break in ur verse when you spitting is eh U need to fix up the way you write ya verse. that chorus is bleh. Sound better if you got more hyped. is the second verse another person? the fuck is he saying.. blah could be better Feed used 1/27/06 "How We Shoot Rmx"
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01-27-06, 06:10 PM | #14 | |||||
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who tha fuck r you?????????negative bizznatch
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01-27-06, 06:44 PM | #15 | ||||||||
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for the most part... but im vibin to it... hook is nice... im feelin that... not relly feelin the lyrics that much... but its coo... nothin relly outstandin ... stay up.. Feed used 1/27/06 "You Will Fall Bacc"
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