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Jay-Z 2 28.57%
sHoTTaBoY 5 71.43%
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Old 09-14-04, 01:58 PM   #16
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Voted For: sHoTTaBoY

Aiight Shottaboy had this one locked.

It was a good battle but he won hands down.


Best Line - Lemme Proceed To The ''Starter''... (Opener)
Lyrically Stomp The Shit Out You In Ya Own ''S.Dot Carters''..


LMAO.....wow.


Opener- Shottaboy
Punches- Jay-Z (that Pun line was pretty funny.)
Multi- Shottaboy
Structure-Shottaboy
Closer- Shottaboy

Final Vote- Shottaboy

This battle was aiight, but it wasn't the best thing.

Jay-Z, you better elevate alot, if you don't then your just being a disgrace to the name.

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Old 09-14-04, 03:48 PM   #17
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From: OrlAndO
This was feedback posted for sHoTTaBoY

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yo u should take this all his punches arte played and his last line is an audio line ive herd it b4 this herb biting again....how old is wrap/rap presents line lmao....jay z im calling u out set it up bitch
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Old 09-14-04, 05:19 PM   #18
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Old 09-15-04, 08:16 AM   #19
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Upin
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Old 09-15-04, 09:47 AM   #20
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Voted For: sHoTTaBoY

close close close but short got diss with his evil merkin-ness like he always has had

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Old 09-15-04, 12:24 PM   #21
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Voted For: Jay-Z

Jay-Z took this, was actually close tho.

Shottaboy, you actually came well here, but JAy-Z's verse was better structured and his punches hit harder.

My vote, you know

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Old 09-15-04, 03:31 PM   #22
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This was feedback posted for sHoTTaBoY

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nice battle vote 4 shotta bcoz-
better punches
better met
better mul
beter verse all together
v/shotta
 
Old 09-15-04, 03:32 PM   #23
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phew it came as feedbck i nearly put a vote bcoz i 4got bout crew
 
Old 09-15-04, 03:37 PM   #24
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From: OrlAndO
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yo jay-z its tru ur a bitch stop hatin....
(no one could of thought of that line) unless it was just taken.....
so shut up u got caught bitin again and dont talk shit b/c u think ur good b/c u bite from unknown people that are better than u.....
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Old 09-15-04, 04:23 PM   #25
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Voted For: sHoTTaBoY

shotta had some betta punches overall,jayz did aight but his punches werent connectin,but did have better structure n flow....punches win battles n shotta jus barely came out on top with punches...shotta if your gonna write bars with 3 lines in them i suggest you try multi's only because it through your flow off way to much but i discounted it cause your punches were a lil better.....

oh n shotta when you vote leave links so peeps don't havta look 4 ya battles,n you shouldnt give an overall vote determined on humour,like i said its punches n personals that win battles,not bitter....its aight....
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Old 09-16-04, 06:44 AM   #26
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Old 09-16-04, 08:27 AM   #27
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SHUT THE FUCK UP U DICKRIDER YOUR IN HISS CREW VOTING? IMA Have yo ass BANNED
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Old 09-16-04, 10:24 AM   #28
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He Didnt Vote You Fuckin Idiot, He Posted FEEDBACK, Your A Fuckin Spastic....

You Really Have No Reazon To Be On This Site, I Suggest You Fuck The Hell Off......

ITS CALLED FEEEEEEEEEEEEEEDBAAAACK
F E E D B A C K

He Didnt Fuckin Vote, You Fuckin Stupid Bastard

Jesus Christ, HOW DUMB ARE YOU

Want Me Too Explain One More Time?

IT IS CALLED FEEDBACK, NOT A VOTE......FEED.....BACK, Okay?

Understand Me You Faggot?
Jesus Christ...............................

Upppin 4 Votes
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Old 09-16-04, 10:32 AM   #29
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Voted For: sHoTTaBoY

flow-shottaboy took it the syllabels and lines matched better

punches-shottaboy,better punches then jay only one he had was the "wrap better then me...christmas eve" line, the simpsons one i wasnt feelin at all

personals-shottaboy, goin against soemone who has his name jay-z should be good for personals and he won this with the s.dot carters,dick suckin lips

multies-none,both were lacking this couldnt make a fair decision

vocab-shottaboy, even though both didnt have spectacular vocab, shottboy took it he just had better words

originality/creativity-jay-z, even though that "fattboy over here just ate him" is really played i still gave it to jay-z, with the christmas eve,simpsons,etc. it was more creative then shottaboys faggot,saggot,maggot lines

overall i vote shottaboy he had more and done better elements
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Old 09-16-04, 10:40 AM   #30
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