nice fam...i dont think ive seen a more thorough approach to
this topic, the depth you went into was dope.you keep a pretty
decent flow throughout, and your story was very well done,
meaning it kept me interested and was easy to follow, the
prayer was a nice touch, and there were a lot of good sections
heres two of my favs...





and there was more, the emotion was fire in places,
as was the imagery, good word choice and a real fresh
angle to the topic imo, prolly due to the fact you know
so much about it...as you are livin it, which is why im
gonna cut this short cos i could say more, but seems
like you got enuff on ya mind...so stay up fam, stay safe
and keep writing...you just proved its a good way to
vent and relax, which is the best part of this piece
thats the art in motion ya feel...so again stay up and....peace