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in the beginning you remind me of jin. lol


talkin behind your hook sounds weird a little, kinda throw me off, but that hook is pretty crazy.
a little loud on the vocal tip, but the content is straight.

I am what i am. I love what i am.
lol that shit was crazy though.

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i am what i am, i love what i hate. but werd, thanx for the feed. i'll hit yours up soon

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why do you put on that stupid voice when you rap?

its sort of like some attempt at snoop dogg and your rhythem is way too, i dunno... hard to put it in words... you need to flow different cause your not doing it right man...

this track was gay as fuck....

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this hook sucks.your flow and voice are nice but your lyrics suck and your quality aint too great either.

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do you need help with quality? cuz it seems you do'
the beat seems like loud compared to you...your dubs need to be on more...they take away instead of add to your shit...its cool your verse was okay but not intresting...and your voice changes from verse 1, to 2...i dont have a problem with either but i think consistancy would be better suited for this type of track....the hook is blah, but its cool cuz i dont quite grasp hooks all the time....good start....go back read some stuff on quality. and work on making a song as a peice of art and figure out how everything ties together with everything else

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my quality changes each time i record, i dont know why, and i always sound different each time for some reason. i got the co1u usb mic and it not the best by far but often times it works good. i dont know how to sound the same ever, i would like to get more consistant there but a better mic and better knowlege on mic presence would help.
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but the lyrics are talking about how day to day you can think completely different about yourself and that it doesn't matter who you are, u should always love everything about yourself "i am what i am, i love what i hate" and every decision you make u should be happy with yourself when doing it. u have to respect yourself because everyone has the same iner fight with themselves so u should never get down on yourself. "im happy on top only after i fall" like the u dont know what u've got till its gone line. every line in the first verse controdicts itself on perpose to show these points that everyone comes to different conclusions and either way you're not wrong if u stay true to yourself and love yourself.

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usb mic is where your problem is.

i figured that i had my head phones turned up too loud while recording and it was gettin picked up on the mic and was makin it sound worse than it needs too. but i think this track aint that bad of quality anyway.

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I did a track to this beat too... your intro should be louder, and the opening hook should be quieter... the mix on this is bringin' it down homie... lyrics is straight... flow is on point, and your delivery is pretty solid too... the mix needs a lotta work though yo... other than that, track is straight...

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werd. thanx for the feed, i'll prolly fix that intro part. i'll hit your track up here in a tic

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