Voted For: Invektive

Welll Invective..I heard ya got a deal so I decided to check ya battle out so..................


Flow-Easily Deadly Vision.....Ivective,you was rappin a lil too slow there.Maybe try rappin a lil quicker.And deadly....try to cut down on the "ugh,ught, and yeah,yeah".
Both of you had a nice delivery.No complaints there.

Lyrics-Invective......the starting(before the actual rappiing) of ur shit was just too cheesy.I'm sorry...no other way to put it.It didn't sound good and was uncreative.but luckily....you came strong at the end.Nice personals and shit.As for Deadly.....I was listening to it...and didn't find the hrd hittin punches.So work on makin ur punches hit harder.U got flow and delivery........but work on punches.

Vote-Invective(rtf below please)
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=196552

is funny how ktrini neva votes on audio battles..lol and suddently drops a vote and says "dv gets the flow."...lol

OMG funny shit. this will be dq.

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Voted For: Invektive

Alright, Deadly kill the backround O an A's goin on, make it hard to focus on your verse, Even tho you had decent punches and OK delivery your flow hurt you a lil bit. It was choppy.

Invek.
Your shit was pretty nice, alotta people aren't gonna like it cus it aint all HARD an Broo-Hah shit. But I could catch it all clearly an laughed quite a few times. Delivery is Nice, Flow perfect.

Decent Deadly...
Invekt...I liked it better.

Drop Sum Honest Votes on my battle with ^^..^^ when he drops. thanks. -1

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Voted For: Invektive

Damn even with all the singing and ish... that verse was fire.. nice punches and personals, basically did it better then deadly vision'z

"He wouldnt have deadly vision if he was houston and stabbed him self in the eye"

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^^Deadly invizion.. nice verse.. punches where nice.. and it flowed pretty good..^^

sorry the top have got fucked i think i erased it from above..

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ok ike im hating the beat change and the way your shit ended the mixing on that is dirt im loving the hook punches were ok disses were ok only one i really liked was the rodman shit and houston line.flow was good and basically carried this track shits kinda like a diss 50 would do all flow but lacking dope punches and personals emotion was kinda weak as well and its way too low overall good song bad diss 5/10
deadlyvision i cant hear you shit cuz it aint free mp3 you dick ill vote once i can hear deadly verse

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vvv AND A NEW LEVEL OF HERB EMERGES vvv

^^in other words your scared running from a battle on a site made for battling and your mod so you dont have to battle you just duck and pop shit?
herb

Voted For: DeadlyVision

pretty hot battle actually...

invektive-
not a bad track at all man, but there was an obvious difference in lyrical quality between your first segment and the 2nd with the beat switch...
up until the beat switch i was pretty dissappointed with the lack of quality punches...i kept waiting and waiting to here something that would make me laugh...but it just never came
your flow was ok, but nothing spectacular, although i know its harder to flow on a slower beat....at least for me
i didnt really like the beat switch at first but then i got used to it, and found that it was actually a lot better than the begining of the track...
the arnold line was pretty clever...
but just a not, the padres actually DO have a chance of winning this year, considering they are first in their division by a considerable margin...

but overall i just thought this track wasnt very consistant...
some spots were hot, some were not...it just needed that lil something to put it over the top and make it a hot diss
it would be a good track, but not a good diss track...

deadly-
you came hard man...
i loved how you started the track off...the actual verse that is
i loved the piss on your hand line...
you had nice flow for that segment, but your real strong point was the lyrics...
"battle me youll get an l like ya mom had a mis-cariage"

but is switching the beat something new that ive just missed? lol
i thought this was ok, not really that necessary though
if i were you i wouldve just done the fo-fo beat the entire time and gotten rid of that first shit, but w/e...
your lyrics were still hot here, but personally i thought your flow fell off a tad..
it seemed like a lot of your lines were stretched, but i think you did it to squeeze a bit more into your lyrics....which kind of cancels it out...
overall, a good diss...
its the kind of stuff that you should come with when your making one...

nothing against invektives track, but dv's was just harder
vektive man, it just didnt really sound like a diss track to me, more of a regualr track with the occasional diss in it...
but nonetheless good battle, both of you did good jobs...

i just gotta give it to dv...
v/ DeadlyVision

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Voted For: DeadlyVision

invektive

i didnt like your approach, the delivery bothered me you seemed like you were doing more singing man,you didnt seem to have any energy man this is a battle,but i mean but i did love the way you put this shit together the intro and vocals all was perty nice,the beat was nice too i was feeling the beat and flow..butt..anyways this was just not your battle man....ive heard way sicker from you man

DV-i loved your energy it seemed just write,the concept and your approach on the diss was solid,nice beat good vocals nice vocabulary and emotion man emotion = energy and feeling is was persuades the listeners i feel so much props man

v/DV

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