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| Sin`cere |
  
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3 | 37.50% |
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5 | 62.50% |
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08-27-05, 10:54 PM
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The Paragraph President
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Paranoid vs Sin`cere
IP: 2372 BC06
Battle Rules:
Topics: (Choose any 1 of these 5) Secret Spy Betrayed trust Devil's dance Prize Possession Loving Sensation 20-40 Lines (Not Bars) 2 Days To Check In 2 Days To Drop No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No Prewriting Minimum posts to vote: 1000 Check in by: 08-29-05 at 10:54 PM Must drop verse in 2880 minutes after check in. Closed - Expired / old battle win Paranoid requested reopen on 10/14 |
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08-27-05, 10:56 PM
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The Truest TRUTH
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IP: 0D11 88C9
aight then wuteva...i didnt really want it to be like this but yea...sure ill pick.....
Prize Possession
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08-27-05, 11:08 PM
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IP: 2372 BC06
you dont need to tell me what the fuck your doin just do it man.
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08-28-05, 04:03 AM
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IP: 2372 BC06
Paranoid has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-28-05 04:03 AM.
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08-28-05, 04:05 AM
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IP: 2372 BC06
Secret Spy A thief, someone that fiends for them millions in life Never will that be, mentality controls the spy’s fight In disappearance, invisible to all who gets convicted So relax, that thief wont attack who gets conflicted Once I knew a young man, he was just a teen at that His passion for money, he was just so mean at that No one ever knew he was around, he felt invisibility Cursed with evil, so he’d burst with lethal responsibility He defended his attentions, as he pretended to play By loving his skill, to steal from the rich was his pay He’d look to destroy, so he’d always like in betrayal His brain messed up, and all he did was fight in denial Never was he loyal to reality, nor royal to mentality He scavenged for fame, by erupting his foil to fatality.. Eventually he figured, hesitation would grab him And he was correct, never to suspect it’d stab him Soon people thought, he would be equal to wrought So devastated, in time he was to lethal to be taught Then the government stepped in, saying he’d die a thief So the peasants asked another, is this lie just brief? The police thought, maybe privacy was to end his agony When living hospitality, immortality was to lend integrity He seen the highs, and the lows, but he couldn’t apologize Still he couldn’t realize, all he really shouldn’t annualize No matter the consequence, he remained on the hustle So he explained strong to muscle to stop the rustle His fear to appear, was only to determine wrong The ending to this fact of this annoying violin song A thief, someone that fiends for them millions in life Never will that be, mentality controls the spy’s fight In disappearance, invisible to all who gets convicted So relax, that thief wont attack who gets conflicted
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08-28-05, 03:16 PM
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IP: 0D11 88C9
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i do need to tell u what the fuck im doing cuz if u do a diff. one fuck.....shit dont tell me that ur doing a diff. one it has to be te same one man......WTF.......
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08-28-05, 03:41 PM
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The Truest TRUTH
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IP: 0D11 88C9
Minimum posts to vote: 1000
Check in by: 08-29-05 at 10:54 PM Must drop verse in 2880 minutes after check in. yo holy shit this battle is declined man noone gon vote if its 1000....damn...man....at least 250 or 500.....but 1000..no way....
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08-28-05, 04:49 PM
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IP: 2372 BC06
^you accept or you will be declared a duck for the rest of your net life!
bitch i dont want know noobs voting on this!
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08-28-05, 05:37 PM
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IP: 0D11 88C9
so the topic is prize possesion right...............
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08-28-05, 05:38 PM
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IP: 2372 BC06
^do what ever you want we dont have to have the same topic!!!!!!!
dumbass, you we're fuckin bickering at me for a battle and you being the bitch.
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08-28-05, 05:41 PM
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IP: 0D11 88C9
ohhhhhhh ~WERD~ we dont have to have the same topic thats stupid but wuteva......then.....yea......*changes topic.....*.....lol
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08-28-05, 05:43 PM
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IP: 0D11 88C9
Sin`cere has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-28-05 05:43 PM.
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08-28-05, 05:47 PM
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IP: 2372 BC06
dumbass!
k when you droppin tonight?
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08-28-05, 05:49 PM
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IP: 0D11 88C9
idk but not 2day ill write some 2day finish it off on monday and or tuesday and drop on tuesday...but not 2day gon watch the VMA's.....yea....watch it im gon be performing alongside w/ Gunit.....trust me.....but yea....ill drop A.S.A.P.
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08-29-05, 07:11 PM
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IP: 0D11 88C9
When I open my sleepy eyes from the night it reveals That I cared for something through my forty winks, I concealed Blood in my sheets…??? I couldn’t barely stare In shock of where it came from I started my despair Got out of my bed and took a bath, started to think & breathe The shocking of the surprise I started to cry, so I rolled up my sleeves Took the sheets to wash……and there I saw the horror scenes Terrifying in my mind I saw terrible things like it was a movie screen I saw myself in a room… I was giving my confessions Started to be a more deeply story, came into a session . . I was looking inside a room and I was focused Then I turned to the left and saw what I just noticed A bleeding pen on top of the desk with scared claws I suddenly paused…. Then I saw a black and red paw Quickly took my eyes of it and ran into another room I feel into a hole…Falling to the lost temple I assumed Recapped my thoughts But suddenly I lost Didn’t know where I was jus knew it was scary Blood red on the white dress looked like bloody Mary A girl was standing there and told me that she wasn’t a stranger And the only way to be free was to follow her so I kept out of danger . . Im walking down a street with my headphones on Bopping my head and imitating lyrics to my favorite song Saw lyricists making money so I started to do the same I was determined to be in the game so I made up a rap name I could see fame… so I started writing my raps down Battling in school and making the others look like a clown Made them have a frown… but others had to despite But I forgot the haters and kept on doing my thing with pride Had my rhyme book with me, songs ready to record Studio time, made my demo, and send it to labels so I could afford To get anything that I needed and wanted, it was greed Didn’t care bout anything else, dropped out of school but I had green Started to make a scene, the cockiness got in me every night But one day I got knocked out, a gang jumped me at a fight . So in tuned with myself I totally forgot bout everything, like an addiction That I had to fight myself cuz me and my mind were in a complete friction Still I haven’t learned what happened just I could feel my big size lesson That the love I had for what I do.......... Hip-Hop was my prize possesion ...Quick Tip... ....To understand the piece better try reading it from the last paragraph(not the italisize) & on to the first....its jus a different type of writing, showing recaps of what happened
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