well if yall dont know by now, Ima deployed US Soldier.....alot of people are kinda blind to what really goes on over here....and if figured id write about it and i did in the open mic lounge...... then i kinda transformed to a song......

this is just one of the almost daily scenarios that goes on......some of the termanology u wont get......so ill break it down here
mic quality kinda sucks aight.....but im makin it work

flak vest - to civilians it would be a bullet proof vest (sorta)
k-pod - protective helmet
eye-pro - eye protection
m4- pssshh duuh thats a weapon
round in the chamber - loaded bullet
d-bag - that big green bag yall always see a soldier carryin on tv
apache - type of helicopter

i think thats most of the ones that might seem unfamiliar

holla

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http://www.soundclick.com/util/getp...id=4871548&q=hi

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=239350
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This beat is grimmy and I definitly like it..

Your flow has nice transitions and flow..reminds me of some LiL Wayne shit...definitly feeling this...your lyrics are pretty well put together with right hitting multiples..

The flow throughout this whole song is well put together and I'm definitly feeling this. The second verse in the middle section had some choppy sections but besides that, no probs..

Hot song, and this is definitly some LiL Wayne shit, with more meaning..

Keep dropping some hot shit, and collab with me sometime.

Stay up

flawless breath control is a highlight here. a little better mic/mixing would make this cd quality. one of the better soldier tracks ive heard. the very end is nice also, good fade out.

first thing i noticed was flow.....and ya lyrics go well with the concept of the track......breath control is nasty when u go in a faster flow i neva hear ya breathe...nice shit man.........only thing i can critique is to up ya quality.....aiite man keep droppen......

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yerr this shits crack...nice breath control, good voice, easy flow, beats bangin
you already know what i think about ya lyrics...so thats a given, just the
quality thats holdin it back, overall got some skill mos def...have you finished
this are you gonna add a hook...just seems shorter than i thought it would be
when i read it...anyway dope fam ...peace

voice def. lacks emotion...sorta like Paranoid...like...blah-zay


flow isn't bad...delivery jus needs more spark


Beat is cool

not a bad soundin track dawg



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thanx everyone a bunch

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beat is good..yeah flow is decent...I like youre multis, not as confident as yet..shit is nice..shit cud get rowdy..adlibs nice..youre voice is a lil like zone but u got multis nice good vocab range and it flows straight gd track fammo

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