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Old 04-17-06, 01:01 PM   #1
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Talking to Chicks

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Talking to Chicks

Local and bold with a social role my vocals cold
And need lubing to proceed grooving with a soul
Beat from the old streets run home get on the phone
Have to adopt to stress dealing with this Hip Hop mess
Make girls strip and flop breast her kissing lips hot with finesse
Just a renowned lady with brown gravy going to town maybe
And rap with chicks get slapped quick without a Mercedes
See a girl right and fine like white wine I bet night time
She get kissed a lots she give me the brisk hots the type design
For a bed room her head groomed with Yaky Pony tails
Not a tacky female at all I’m a guy nice she is high price sale
She can’t be a slum honey that wants some money for unknown sex
Oh hell no girl got her own Lex ride with complex pride now I’m vexed
On what to say, “so boo do I know you? “ naw don’t think so”
Look you think I’m emphatic and easy come with static greasy bro
I’ve had it with sleazy boys, not going to drop my panties oh no
So you could have at my hot candies while coo-chee juices flow non-stop
My mini-skirt unique plenty of work completed under it like finished
Construction not a premise of corruption wanna lick my bricks like spinach
You not pop eye or a hot guy go plot and try another girl lets just end this”
 
Old 04-17-06, 01:03 PM   #2
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Old 04-17-06, 01:07 PM   #3
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What the fuck are you doing? Stop being such a little faggot... You suck at writing and no one likes you so how about you stop making new names. No matter what queer alias you go by we're always going to know who it is because you're stupid as fuck
 
Old 04-17-06, 01:16 PM   #4
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These aggressive facts moves like digestive tracts
A dose of microphone potions and strong emotions attacks
In your veins this love flow mean like blood protein
Smack domes and break backbones this thug grows mean
My hot plan fractures and stop manufactures plus break down
Body Waste like liver, my art tickles even rocks parked vehicles
Wet sweat starts to trickle from foreheads even spark nickels
And jingle pocket money turn sprockets funny and fast like
Pedaled bicycles, this heat make metal fry and pickle with hype
Scrimmage with scripture just to create a image or picture
Take snap shots and rap hot so I flow fact like Kodak my mixtures
Develop on the spot this nice type is so lifelike like plumbing fixtures
This poison ivy chase all the lively baseballs like Dwight Gooden
And bite pudding and take drugs get great hugs all my might couldn’t
Kick the habit was like a sick rabbit see drugs quick to grab it and smoke
So in the tablet I wrote facts about how crack be whack lab dope
this throttle of disaster is modeled after earth quakes
I thirst great for fame ready to change my strange first fake
Name to Camelot because I gamble a lot with words and verbs
By trying to add glamour to my bad grammar this fad hammers nerds
In a wild town these vowels sound lame and harsh and clowns get
Brainwashed like hypnotism with this script wisdom and renowned bets
Are paid off can’t evade the cost or it becomes to expensive
And make the street of slums too intensive so yall buy comprehensive
Insurance, Prudential is a true essential for coverage in here
This crap’s loco I rap solo and foe get slapped doe with flow sincere
Without restriction this clout could cause friction while on route to pause
The benediction not ready to turn church out too much doubt and flaws
 
Old 04-17-06, 01:24 PM   #5
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Whatever... You're getting banned shortly anyways.
 
Old 04-17-06, 01:30 PM   #6
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50 responses kid go ahead and hate but you not better
 
Old 04-17-06, 01:33 PM   #7
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25 said you suck and 25 were you upping... Go away.
 
Old 04-17-06, 01:54 PM   #8
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now you know i don't cheat like that a statement like that shows your honesty and hiow you opearate ban a man for being lyrical
 
Old 04-17-06, 04:43 PM   #9
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This forum isnt for lyrics you retard... This is the Poetry section, not the open mic forum stupid ass.
 
Old 04-17-06, 09:01 PM   #10
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poetry come in all forms its not your job to narrow your opinion into it because much of the stuff you write is effective writing any book worm can write this form but just let you try writing my so call stupid style you will quickly realize it take true skills to write that and book worms run away from this
 
Old 04-18-06, 08:53 AM   #11
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......... Yes it is.
 
 


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