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05-16-06, 12:49 AM
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Bone is gay.
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Finality
IP: 133C 7AC8
Tears stain the signed name in crimson that smudged across the lines
Hand outstretched as if calling for you to console me; I need you I gave my heart unto you in deepest trust the moment your lips met mine Now my eyes stare through you rather than gaze upon you devotedly Questions confuse the sanity within my conscience like encrypted telegrams The pulsing torment racing through my veins in guilt and numbing realization Denial in 3rd degree hollows out the screams inside my heart breaking Your voice no longer heard as the comatose shock rapes my sensibility I watched your lips move to the tormenting rhythm of malicious intentions Please understand why I cannot forgive you as I cannot forgive myself To me you are stained now, infected by the scent and touch of another Our love once so indestructible now in ruins around the burning hourglass Was it because his hand touched mine and for a moment I was swept away? Did my eyes tell the tale of a toyed moment to be within his arms though I resisted? You promised me forever and stole it from me for one night of lust Where I merely entertained a thought of a simple kiss from your lack of affection Oh god, please stop the throws of guilt, stop the shrieking of rage and sorrow I will drop to my knees if you would only lower your hand and calm my burned soul Give me the courage to do what I need and escape the insanity drowning me Rewind the time to when we were invincible and the world was insignificant It was my words of repentance that turned him away though his sin was mortal Splintering wood from the shredded door slammed now as he left me my own convictions Steel to bleed away the anxiety and fault contrasted with hate and love Laid upon the bed shared once, now drenched in blood from wounds of hopelessness Blade of escape laying beside the hand he now reaches for with a letter from a lost soul ‘ Please Forgive Me….Love your baby girl’ |
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05-16-06, 01:50 AM
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IP: D40E 67D5
this was real nice. i liked your whole emotion and shit mayne!. nice flow and creativity stay up man nice execution! man real deep and great stroryline
RTF on SHADED GREY in my sig!
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05-16-06, 09:22 AM
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Bone is gay.
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IP: 4242 4FE8
Will hit that up when i get back on today to mix some shit for people.
thanks for the feedback uppin |
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05-21-06, 09:38 AM
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IP: 7BE2 A0A1
Pm me two links to have this reopend
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