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Old 05-15-07, 06:34 PM   #1
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Old 05-15-07, 07:32 PM   #2
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what uppppppp son
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Old 05-16-07, 01:43 AM   #3
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.......what it does.......
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Old 05-18-07, 08:11 PM   #4
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I aint tryin' to feed but how can anyone find that this kid is a threat?
Look, I giggled & laughed at the fact you can't write full sentences yet...
...But am I lyin' or meak? No, So When I'm Fryin' This Geek,
Remember...
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Originally Posted by Intense it E
.......what it does.......
is shut the Fuck up when I'm tryin' to speak...
You thought it was gimp - I be? Kid I frame and with stain guards,
But I'll have you buried intense it e's... with 10 different names & graveyards.
I aint tryin' to play. I won't even ask what u think of me.
'Cuz I know you havin' a Satur-Day & I've proved I'm showin' no sympathy....
Peace-out, I beat sprouts, I-IT-E was just to set the sign,
That if you come first on the list it's 'cuz u're the 1st 1 checked off mine.


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Old 05-17-07, 01:13 AM   #5
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I'm shittin on this cat, meanwhile, this wanna-be pissin/
S.C.M should stand for Skill Currently Missin/
Get real, everybody, I'ma shatter this foo/
Don't find it gay when I say I'm leavin this battle wit you/(2 v's, VV, W)
Do yoself a favor cuz and no show, homo/
Clown ass nigga, I betchu grew idolizin bozo/
I'll say it clear, he's fake, this dude fag/
I heard you was nice, DAMN!! that was a helluva April Fool's gag/
Smash this herb quicc, and crush this lame quiccer frail pumpkins/
2vision huh? well i bet you still ain't see this L comin/

ehhh nothin TOO harsh just yet, just match me cuz
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Old 05-17-07, 11:12 PM   #6
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uppin for homey verse
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Old 05-18-07, 11:42 PM   #7
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Intense:
Get real, everybody, I'ma shatter this foo/
Don't find it gay when I say I'm leavin this battle wit you/(2 v's, VV, W)
Smash this herb quicc, and crush this lame quiccer frail pumpkins/
2vision huh? well i bet you still ain't see this L comin/

vs

2v:
I aint tryin' to feed but how can anyone find that this kid is a threat?
Look, I giggled & laughed at the fact you can't write full sentences yet...
I aint tryin' to play. I won't even ask what u think of me.
'Cuz I know you havin' a Satur-Day & I've proved I'm showin' no sympathy....

This was a close battle, but I am goin' to have to give my vote to Intense, you both had two good lines, I am givin' him the vote becuz I felt that he went for nicer punches and personals in his bars, you had a better vocab 2v, but it seemed like you wernt tryin' very hard.

Vote - Intense
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Old 05-19-07, 12:11 AM   #8
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better vocab and it seems like i aint tryin' very hard... lmao..
thanks for the compliment.

But w/e on ya vote sonz.

I'm surprised people like u still exist on the net.
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Old 05-19-07, 01:30 AM   #9
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better vocab and it seems like i aint tryin' very hard... lmao..
thanks for the compliment.

But w/e on ya vote sonz.

I'm surprised people like u still exist on the net.



wooooooow good sway! you swayed a vote out of a 2-0 AUDIO head, ?-? text head and I got a vote out of a vet TEXT head. ohhhhh. k? but watever works for you cuz. congrats
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Old 05-19-07, 11:07 AM   #10
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wooooooow good sway! you swayed a vote out of a 2-0 AUDIO head, ?-? text head and I got a vote out of a vet TEXT head. ohhhhh. k? but watever works for you cuz. congrats


congrats 4 what? Don't you think you're being a little immature?

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Old 05-19-07, 01:03 AM   #11
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Intense - Only good.. actually decent lines i saw was....
I'm shittin on this cat, meanwhile, this wanna-be pissin/
S.C.M should stand for Skill Currently Missin/
I'll say it clear, he's fake, this dude fag/
I heard you was nice, DAMN!! that was a helluva April Fool's gag/
thaz ya only line that stood out but wasnt that nice.. april fools one is real old.. but i did like ow u flipped the S.C.M.
Rating - 4/10

2V - Definitly Came better than intense
basically each line u did was actually Decent and pretty nice
strongest ones in my opinion
You thought it was gimp - I be? Kid I frame and with stain guards,
But I'll have you buried intense it e's... with 10 different names & graveyards.
I aint tryin' to play. I won't even ask what u think of me.
'Cuz I know you havin' a Satur-Day & I've proved I'm showin' no sympathy....
Peace-out, I beat sprouts, I-IT-E was just to set the sign,
That if you come first on the list it's 'cuz u're the 1st 1 checked off mine.
Rating - 7/10

Vote = 2V its obvious he stronger on this.. Intense i suggest u spit better in this tourny and not underestimate people or half ass ya verse...
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Old 05-19-07, 01:30 AM   #12
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people like me?.. what the fuck is that supposed to mean?
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Old 05-19-07, 08:25 AM   #13
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Quit Freeposting in this battle 2v, don't sway either. Let the votes be votes.



Intense-You seriously need to lengthen your lines, You must add more wordplay. Lines like that just throw me off in a verse. Theres nothing to them. Vocabulary was extremely basic. You have to throw a concept/metaphor/cliche into the punch somehow and make your overall verse harsher. 2v crushed you w/his opener. Sorry bro.

.vs.


I aint tryin' to feed but how can anyone find that this kid is a threat?
Look, I giggled & laughed at the fact you can't write full sentences yet...


^2v, you a bitch. ha!. see you in the finals =>
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Old 05-19-07, 01:02 PM   #14
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Smash this herb quicc, and crush this lame quiccer frail pumpkins/
2vision huh? well i bet you still ain't see this L comin/

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You thought it was gimp - I be? Kid I frame and with stain guards,
But I'll have you buried intense it e's... with 10 different names & graveyards.
I aint tryin' to play. I won't even ask what u think of me.
'Cuz I know you havin' a Satur-Day & I've proved I'm showin' no sympathy....


vote 2v
 
Old 05-19-07, 02:23 PM   #15
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intense u a dumbass kid.. and audio would be 5-0 to clear that up cuz im shuttin kids out in votes... but anyway... Swayin? c'mon homie Man up.. i dont even think u understand the full meaning of swaying... your allowed to disagree with a vote, cuz all votes are is opinions.. you just whining now man..
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