RB's two worst named battles, head to head.

iceman
you have a really bad structure, your lines are stretched making the flow off, making it boring to read. you need short lnes, which are witth an have flow.

His sig says “get sonned”, but I already made his mother take “Oliver Clothes Off “
you attempted to make use of wordplay bubt failed several times

your verse had no really hard hitting pucnes,

He swears he raps good cus he beat Reign Man, but Ice leave dents in his content
at times it seemed like you was just putting random words, to make multies

Nothing really stood out, an i have seen you come harder than this.


oliver clossthefuckoff
ok again another weak verse, which is expeced from the crew you rep.
you had a ok flow actually which surprised me. Although your ounches were badly worded, an hardly hit they did hit in one or two place.

An their were time were i didnn't know what the fuck you were goin on about
e.g

This bitch is actually on this site cuz his rap is new
Even if StarWars was remade, the force still wouldn’t hit you


but one of your punches actually stood out, a little bit, not in a good way, but in the way like you see something that isn't right an it catches your attention.

one of your punches wasn't too bad
Cant figure out a way to tell u, without getting you upset
Silva Dolla doesn’t like white boyz who pussy out over the net
^was a personal as well, your wording let you down but still^

you had a good structure.


my vote,
my blessing goes to iceman,
as i am voting for NyZ Grynch aka olvier jkdboff
he had a better flow, structure, an his punches stood out a little bit more than icemans!!

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