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View Poll Results: Mystic Chaos vs. Death
death 1 16.67%
Mystic Chaos 5 83.33%
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Old 09-06-05, 07:13 PM   #16
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This was feedback posted for Mystic Chaos

IP: 803A 1DB4

I'm checkin those ol' polls on this battle
 
Old 09-06-05, 08:18 PM   #17
Dickard.
A Life Of Chryme
 
From: Boston
IP: 2029 97B3

^^thanks alot for the votes and feed, uppin for more votes please
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Old 09-06-05, 08:24 PM   #18
Batman
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yo death how u gonna call me tha wackest wen ur tha one gittin beat 0-3 to me in our battle?...and thatz 0(death) 3(BATMAN BITCH)...u talk too much shit and then cant back it up wit skill...no wonder u cant bak it up wit skill...u aint got none...my bad i dont mean to be like that u started bombin on me first so i fired bak...no hate tho...cuz im not that great either so dont feel bad...jus elevate and you'll be madd nice...you'll go from shit,to THA shit...once again though...no hate between us mayne...word
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Old 09-06-05, 10:08 PM   #19
Death
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yea CHACHIN LASERS

BLAZIN FAKERS

called multi syllabul rhyme... this shits retarded... i spat that in like two seconds cause his is straight garbage... anyway go peep my other battle
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Old 09-07-05, 01:38 AM   #20
AITZ
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From: Townsville - Australia
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Voted For: Mystic Chaos

Its obvious to see your whack beyond belief
This nigga was dead before his rhymes was effected by me
Newb's like you dont gotta secure spot on rapverse
This bitch could spit his best but he would still rap worse
ill expose you to your "death", youll be leaving this in a herse
Whose whacker u or batman.....silence a big controverse*
Your fighting for a spot to be the whackest on this site
Well your the worst you herb saying that w/out fealing contrite
Battelin this cat is like the hurricaine verse people, its slaughter
This nigga got his death in the hurricaine drowning in 3 feet deep water

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nice punchlines...and i felt this drop alot harder then the other cat
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he was asking where ive spat n shit..
nowhere.. but i used to COME at the SITE of ya mums tits

ill disemble your GARNENT OF RAPS, cause ill blow your TOP OFF
Masterbatin BURNS HIS WRIST, thats how this nerd CLOCKS HOT

ill set this DUMMY alight cause im blazin FAKERS
These CLIPS BURN up his FACE, like DVD CACHIN LASERS

EXCESSIVE MASTERBATION, makes his BARS SEE RAWS
so his mommy bought a sperm protector for his keyboad!

Like BABIES with matches, ill burn your BLOCK and CRIB
because ill finish my MAGICAL ACT... and STOP this TRICK

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work on ur vocab dude...and you need to work on ur punchlines..most of these lines was played...just didnt cut it

v/mystic chaos
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Old 09-07-05, 01:40 AM   #21
AITZ
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o...can i get an rtf on 1 of my battles as well.....werd.......they in my sig


uppin 4 an rtf

and uppin 4 some votes
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Old 09-07-05, 01:56 AM   #22
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From: sacramento
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Voted For: Mystic Chaos

aight you won but you need to work harder on your similies and your punches

death.. you got murder you need to work harder and elevate that might have seemed liek it was good but then again it wasnt , im not haten im just telling the truth and if you wanna ghet better just stay on this site and you will elevate just read alot more books and battles and you will get alot better

mystic...yo you beat him and you had good consepts but they where all worded wrong and none of your bars hit hard you need to work on similies and metaphores and perosnas, most of your bars wher wack but they had good consepts, if you would have took a few more minues on each bar then they would have hit alot harder ..just keep battling

vote= choas

rtf please
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Old 09-07-05, 02:11 AM   #23
GrEeN PaRtY!
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From: underground
IP: 3240 794D

Voted For: Death

Lol, this battle was tough for me to vote on, you both came with very different styles...
chaos-
you had a nice flow going on in your verse, strong vocabulary,but lacked a powerful punch to your style, although you have somwhat of a poets flow and rhyme scheme, which is good, and well portrayed, seems like this would have been better audio, if you dabble into it.
Personals, i dont know if i spotted any, or if they were hard hitting, seemed like you sort of floated through this battle. you definately have a creative outlook on battling though.
death-
Lol at the first bar, drew me into it somewhat, the second bar is decent as well, strong, some spelling mistakes but at least i know what you trying to say throughout, nice 3rd bar,kinda funny..lol@ the "sperm protector for the keyboard"bar...nice wordplay on the last bar, some funny stuff. Overall you both were good, but i have to go with death on the stronger battle type verse.No beef.1
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Old 09-07-05, 10:40 AM   #24
Dickard.
A Life Of Chryme
 
From: Boston
IP: 0825 899A

now i see why i always put the post limit higher.............so herbs dont vote............any ways thanks for all the honest votes..........uppin for more, and i believe i win by tko!
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Old 09-07-05, 11:21 AM   #25
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From: .N.Jerzy.
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Voted For: Mystic Chaos

he was asking where ive spat n shit..
nowhere.. but i used to COME at the SITE of ya mums tits
^^^No weak opener
ill disemble your GARNENT OF RAPS, cause ill blow your TOP OFF
Masterbatin BURNS HIS WRIST, thats how this nerd CLOCKS HOT
^^^ight....worded wrong
ill set this DUMMY alight cause im blazin FAKERS
These CLIPS BURN up his FACE, like DVD CACHIN LASERS
^^^Nuthin Special
EXCESSIVE MASTERBATION, makes his BARS SEE RAWS
so his mommy bought a sperm protector for his keyboad!
^^^No Masterbatin....keyboard lines played
Like BABIES with matches, ill burn your BLOCK and CRIB
because ill finish my MAGICAL ACT... and STOP this TRICK
^^^Ight Closer

Its obvious to see your whack beyond belief
This nigga was dead before his rhymes was effected by me
^^^Ight Opener
Newb's like you dont gotta secure spot on rapverse
This bitch could spit his best but he would still rap worse
^^^Ight....Not REally Anythin Special
ill expose you to your "death", youll be leaving this in a herse
Whose whacker u or batman.....silence a big controverse*
^^^Good personal.....
Your fighting for a spot to be the whackest on this site
Well your the worst you herb saying that w/out fealing contrite
^^^Good vocab....but weak punch
Battelin this cat is like the hurricaine verse people, its slaughter
This nigga got his death in the hurricaine drowning in 3 feet deep water
^^^Good closer....
V/Mystic....this wasn't really a great battle.....both came weak....but mystic came less weak....death work on ur punchs an wordplay also structure.....V/mystic.....RTF IN SIG OR THIS WILL BE REMOVED....
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