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Old 08-14-06, 01:47 AM   #1
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This my boy vivid nevets, quality sucks, i've working on tryna get better quality

www.soundclick.com/verse420

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=233409

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=233413

leave feed and i'll return the favour
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Old 08-14-06, 10:22 AM   #2
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you not that bad to be honest you need to up quality and I can do that for u if you need hola at me....

But as for the song beat comes on pretty nice shit beat seems to be up a tad bit to loud quality is ass fo real flow is pretty good thou that little bridge couldn't really hear it sounded nice but couldn't really hear it lyrics is hard fo real delivery is good thou this...

Just work on uppin quality and and mixing your shit cause you got yo
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Old 08-14-06, 10:23 AM   #3
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Old 08-24-06, 03:02 AM   #4
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like the beat but its too loud
not liking the scratches
this kid mi and ebrics would sound tight on a collab
yea quality is really killing it
he got a grimey delivery
flow is off a little bit
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Old 08-25-06, 04:48 AM   #5
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thanks for the feedback
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