Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-14-04 at 11:39 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Elusiv G has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-11-04 11:40 AM.

Mc:Xplicit has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-11-04 11:43 AM.

This here is not a rap battle its more like a knowledge dual
Cause ima drop “so many lines” on this nigga you’ll think I sppittin in “college rule”
I “eat” mcs “daily” lyrically as part of my “nutritional breakfast”
G want drop a “metaphor” so lets put him on the spit a “punch line back fast”
Half G’s raps trash…
Me… going down in history so in the “future” what im sppitin is a “back flash”
My rhymes will spark heat…
That’ll take you “old school” “listening” to the “greatest” of your last “five heartbeats”
I say the greatest cause the last is always the best
Eternity on the flat line see if you can pass the test
You judging my rhymes dawg that’s a weird event
Cause you criticizing yourself seeing your rhymes in the mirror tint
~one Xplicit ~

yo yo yo yo yo

Mc:Xplicit hate do burst yo bubble, but u jus not wit it
like cheddar bomb in 8mile u jus cant kick it//
rhyming baffles u, like words to illeterates
ur brain confused, like fathers to illegitimates//( out of wedlock babies)
U think u got skillz, n rightz to say that ur ill
Its a fact thats earned, not a sentence that can be sparadically spurned//
"U remind me" of usher and his battle wit sisqo ( u reind me trak by usher)
U seem scared to step up and battle ur foes!//
15-7, ur records impressive, i aint stressin'
cos all ur votes were from fake aliases signed with fake e-mail addreses//( blap)
Yo rhymes weak, phone "alicia" 4 u hit the "keys" ( keyboard and pun on a.keys)
shed cud help u out and fix tha jelly in your knees//
ur so fat ,u remind me of big pun
girlz scared, cos cholesterol comes out every time u spunk// (lol..ejaculate)
Ur rhymes remind me of fat people da way u screaming
Its a similar sound, its like fat people breathing.//(lol)
Like a wack ass programme i wanna change the channel
Ur rhymes bore me, cos there wetter than a flannel//
Mc:Xplicit, im stumped, cos ur rhymes fail to exhibit
The skills u speak of in each and every spit//
Self-glorifying nigga, yo rhymes bush shud prohibit
Cos kindergarten kids c ur verses and easily rip it//
I'm gonna "Xplicitly" lace u wit psychopathic profanity
Leave stunned and robbed of yo vanity//
Like in tha sims i seen a character whos strait up shit
To erase u fool, all i gotta do is type and click//
I cud hav won this battle from half way across tha globe
I'm surprised u even posted, I'm surprised u even showed//
Cos similar to Nas and Jay-z, ill drown u in "Ether" ( Nas finished Jay wit dis)
Lite ur rhymes on fire, cos u cudnt get "respect" from Arethra// ( arethra franklin and her son r.e.s.p.e.c.t)

hey yo i typed 15-7 cos i was lookin at big bad wolfs record a diff mc im battlin his record is 7-5 tha rhyme still works jus change that shit round y'all . Peace

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Voted For: Elusiv G

Aight, Elusiv, Ya Structre Was All....BLAH, Yea...Improve That!...But Other Then That Ya Had Som Nice Metas n Personals, I Think Ya Disses Hit Harderd, Just Improve Vocab n Maybe Up Ya Punches, Add Humour To Em

MC Ya Verse Was Aight, Room 4 Improvement, Better Usage Of Words In My Opinnon, An Addin Humour...But Nice Structure n A Few Aight Metas In There, Nice Drop...

Return The Favor Ya'll...

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Voted For: Elusiv G

elusive wins this. both were about equal as far as punches go. elusive just had more. this infinite lines shit sucks cause it gives the second guy posting more of a chance to win, especially when competition is this close.

i like the second guy's rhyme pattern and layout better. it seemed like you bit it from Jay-Z, but it would be pretty effective in a live battle.

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dren a.k.a. dren rapes u

uppin for votes in here

to dren..i cudnt c his verse..when i posted!!!!! hey yo uppin 4 votes

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uppin for dome votes man we need to get some votes drop a link and ill hit you back

uppin............................................. ......and chek ma sig shop y'all, below is a lil taster of ma skillz

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