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-http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=233397
-http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?p=2818636&posted=1#post2818636

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ight im listening in lo fi...beat is aight not my type tho......hook is decent if it was mixed better it would sound mo hotter....needs pannin....gkilla goes you need to up your deliver cuz ur swag is lackin u need to sound more cocky more believeable..flow is off on spots but overall decent verse hooks back in....kriptic ight flows better then gk flows a lil choppy but its cool delivery could be better overall aight drop hook is coo like i sed jus needs better mixin word overal gud track....gkilla holla at SKM word.....kriptic welcome to the fam =1=

nodoubt....yeah that track we fucked around witha lot...but i said were done there lol... ill have it produced better next track...thnx man.. SKM in this bitch. haha

uppin-------

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this beat is ight, hook is okay, should be more catchy, the first dude fell off maybe once or twice, but overall he was pretty much on beat, your flow is nice, on point, lyrics need work, but then again u were just fuckin around so its cool. stay up, drop some serious shit so i can judge your skills better.

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Bored so im Rapping on the internet Just for Spite....
Rhyme dictionary rappers please battle me with your writerns

Listen'n....Beat is egh...lol

HOok: Coulda bin better, lil more raw material wit a catchy touch to it feel me

1st: G-killaz.....Presence nice...Dubs was too loud...if turned down i think it woulda sounded better thats just me yo...delivery was nice....lyrics were cool..

HOok: Same

2nd: Kriptic....flow's aight...you sound muffled...a lil bit...dubs over-rode ur actually verse...they coulda bin turned down a lil bit...presence was there though...so it made up for something's....

HOok: Same lol


Over-all fellaz tracks aight u know...the inital mix coulda took more time doin... to make it sound a lot more richer feel me....but other than i dont see any more problems wit it...y'all got ur message accross nice shit...keep doin what y'all do....my ratin 7/10 holla back 1

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thnx...might re-do it sometime an have it done really good..i dont mix really..but i put the shit together this time.. lol

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usual south beat.............nice hook get's da point across...ya area code...

1st MC- flow is strate...i can barely hear..but he sounds like he's on beat....can't really say much
2nd MC - this MC came harder....i can hear him...flow is nice....delivery feelin it man....not bad juss up ya quality and it'd be a nice track man........

pz

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*a betrayed metaphore*

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thnx for the reply ....

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this aint even the whole song, I was supposed to do half the hook, and I thought we was doing that 3rd verse? I also needed to redo my verse, haha... oh well, still an iight track.

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nah man..the last verse woulda threw off the song..you no what im talkign about..we talked about it lol and u havent been on for like 5 days..so i said fuck it and put it up lol

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Overall quality of the whole track sounds..blah

Beat is alright
Verse 1 is decent i guess you were aiming for a club banger verse.
Verse 2 as well was pretty good, but the vocals were a tad low, and quality was ehhh.

Overall the flow and everything was good.
*used bars of death*

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you need to start leaving better feed

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Kriptic, you came with that gangsta feel. coolness, both yall came pretty evenly matched. Good pair of artists here. I can't wait to hear yall in a few months after some practice. Yall just need better mic pressence that's really all. Idk the lyrics were bland the hook wasn't catchy enough and I didn't understand what you we're trying to say with the hook kriptic. Overall I think yall did a decent job. and yo tight lyrics gkillaz I loved your verse, you just need more emotion.
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