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check in and agree on line limit
drop by Tuesday Feb. 16th Midnight...or anytime before
no recycling or biting
no dickryde/crew/fan votes

*edit*
the guy below me is a fucking moron....there is a due date...no bitching out....ur crew is suppose to be "all mighty and powerful" not pussylike....dont bitch...drop on time or it will be counted as a no show....

Judge The Rhyme, Not The Crew

peace

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Edit : Here's a personal for you
Your crew is dope..

And it was 10-12 lines
For all these battles..

^ Fucka Wits End pussy.. ur a disgrace to ya crew.. now stfu an stop lookin fa excuses as to why u lost.

14 lines..

a compromise.. u wanted 12.. i wanted 16.

An i'll post today at some point..

-check-

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No it wasnt.. Smoka jus said 'agree on line limit'.. 14.. can u not stimulate ya brain to produce 2 more lines?

Surely someone as dope as Wise Ways who's in the almighty Wits End can do that..?

An theres ya fukkn personal ^^

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Lmao..what ever man..
Hottie said it in tha IJL forum
But if you already got 14 ghosted for you
Its fine with me..ya merked anyways..
Good Luck...

Ur genuinely afraid of losin arent u??

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For those of u that dont know:
A.I = Arson Ill (elite of IJL)



Im prolly jus battling the Leaders alias.. another pussy getting whored
Wits End raises the bar?? Wise only got in cos the WarLords were floored…
Like his title this fags hopes are -dashed-.. the unfortunate misfit in his crew
Misunderstood ‘ghost writin’.. to mean bars fa blind men ta walk-thru…
Ya need ta forget ya voting rings an sad lil cliques.. ya led by a bitch
Makin Hottie a Wise leader.. first choice when it comes to handling dikks…
Welcome to Elevated.. wait.. r u lost?? < same as battlin A.I’s Leader
Ya Theory’s in Kaos.. an more conFue-Xion’s bout to occur...
Pinned ya hopes on a dream.. an like Prom Nite cherries ya bout to get popped
The Wits beginning to End.. an A.I is big shots wiv nothing but hot drops…
Big names is all ya got.. in a crew made up of.. Oh.. I forgot!
Suppose I could get myself banned.. then you’ll recruit me fa top spot…
Prediction: when this coward finishes his verse an gets to postin
Its strait to AIM, pleadin: “I need the –Technician- in to fix the votin”…

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And dont post anything unless its ya verse..

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Edit : just thought I'd be as special
as you and edit in my crew
"Wits End"


Whoa Ill..ya crews faith in u..sad to say..is covered with holes
Ain't hard to tell..even ya own leader put me on top of tha polls
This kid gets alot of ass..he's got a list of gays and boy skanks
I don't know whats dumber..
Christmas handeling money..or Ill with a picture of Loyld Banks!
..Arson Ill?
U coming at me with toy tanks & hitting me with plastic bullets
Asked Ill to carry some talent,but he got dropped trying to hold it
& U ain't naturally a herb.. so I guess I can't hold that against u.......but
Tha moment u click "post quick reply"..all of tha wackness hits u!
To Ill beating someone good is like pussy,he don't know how it feel
Got sick peeps calling his crew fake..so he had to put "tha real deal"
& ya Loyld's got a lisp..except we can't understand it quite fully
I'm hearing "feel me & hold me"..when u say.."Is really that gully"!
Like get'n contract papers for adoptions..I guarantee u total funding
Cuz fuck me spitting this shit to u..I just handed Illtalic his sonning!

Very tough battle to judge...

I like both cats, so don't wanna piss either off...

And both cats threw pretty good, so...

1)Wise takes the opener (great use of a personal and current event)
2)Gotta say that Wise hit funnier and more personal on this, nice attempt from Ill tho.
3)Wise came funny and witty, but Ill got em with the personal on his crew.
4)Going with Ill even though he reached for the rhyme, but Wise was reaching for a punch (worse in my opinion)
5)Better personal punch by Wise, alot better.
6)Ill took this with some nice wit...good shit...Wise reached again and fell flat.
7)Ill takes the closer (I'm really gettingtired of 'sonniing' disses...they've all been done...Nice personal and wordplay from Ill.

So who won?

According to that shit^^^

Ill wins by a tiny hair.

Peace

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Merkings will occur Monday thru Friday, 8 am thru 5 pm, C.S.T.
For my convenience, not yours!

Not sure wot the numbers mean.. but thanx fa the breakdown dawg.. no link? Ok.

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illtalic
Im prolly jus battling the Leaders alias.. another pussy getting whored
Wits End raises the bar?? Wise only got in cos the WarLords were floored…
not too bad, 5/10

Like his title this fags hopes are -dashed-.. the unfortunate misfit in his crew
Misunderstood ‘ghost writin’.. to mean bars fa blind men ta walk-thru…
nice, hit hard, 6/10

Ya need ta forget ya voting rings an sad lil cliques.. ya led by a bitch
Makin Hottie a Wise leader.. first choice when it comes to handling dikks…
nice personal, hit hard, 7/10

Welcome to Elevated.. wait.. r u lost?? < same as battlin A.I’s Leader
Ya Theory’s in Kaos.. an more conFue-Xion’s bout to occur...
a good personal, 6/10

Pinned ya hopes on a dream.. an like Prom Nite cherries ya bout to get popped
The Wits beginning to End.. an A.I is big shots wiv nothing but hot drops…
wording, an concepts let you down, 5/10

Big names is all ya got.. in a crew made up of.. Oh.. I forgot!
Suppose I could get myself banned.. then you’ll recruit me fa top spot…
lol, nice, solid hit hard, 7/10

Prediction: when this coward finishes his verse an gets to postin
Its strait to AIM, pleadin: “I need the –Technician- in to fix the votin”…
nice closer, 7/10


overall 43/70


wise ways
Whoa Ill..ya crews faith in u..sad to say..is covered with holes
Ain't hard to tell..even ya own leader put me on top of tha polls
lol, nice opener, 7/10

This kid gets alot of ass..he's got a list of gays and boy skanks
I don't know whats dumber..
Christmas handeling money..or Ill with a picture of Loyld Banks!
..Arson Ill?
not too bad, wording let you down, 5/10

U coming at me with toy tanks & hitting me with plastic bullets
Asked Ill to carry some talent,but he got dropped trying to hold it
nice punch, 6/10

& U ain't naturally a herb.. so I guess I can't hold that against u.......but
Tha moment u click "post quick reply"..all of tha wackness hits u!
pretty witty, 7/10

To Ill beating someone good is like pussy,he don't know how it feel
Got sick peeps calling his crew fake..so he had to put "tha real deal"
not too bad, 6/10

& ya Loyld's got a lisp..except we can't understand it quite fully
I'm hearing "feel me & hold me"..when u say.."Is really that gully"!
i didnt really like this, 5/10

Like get'n contract papers for adoptions..I guarantee u total funding
Cuz fuck me spitting this shit to u..I just handed Illtalic his sonning!
not too bad, 6/10

overall 42/70

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The numbers were bars...

I just didn't copy them like Menolin did.

Peace

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Gotcha..

werd at the votes..

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