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fuck this bitch who votes fo hoes like lattin kitten

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-21-04 at 03:34 PM

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pictureperfect2 has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-18-04 09:58 PM.

MARVOLoUsJ1009 has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-19-04 11:42 AM.

“dont rap 4 just chicks n sex,da get rid of ppl like u n get some checks
no disrespect but dont ruff's records look like da system's guest...”
….. punch by marvelous, system’s guest record is 0-1, this cats record was 4-5, until he beat this bitch of course..


Only faggots wit their pinkies out would say “your marvelous”
Wut u fuckin thinking about wit punches^^^I couldn’t (marvel less)

This bitches pussy gets handed out like she on a conveyer belt
Your battles expose it, and it looks like an open faced Arby’s melt
Shits jus to easy…….
dont even need a punch, to drop blood from ya lips
I jus wait about a month, fo ya cycle ya pussy bitch

Marvelous sayin she “still da fuckin sickest” (title)
U a lyer, I can get 19 different people to witness(record, 19 loses)

U know the story, im above marv in every category. Why?
Cuz If I wasn’t, I’d quit. My shoelaces she couldn’t even tie.
But lets stay friends…….
Over reactin is needless, jus cuz i told people u have a little penis
Come on dogg, “Don’t let something that small stand between us”

shit i aint got time da wait!,ya lil thug image i find it fake...
.........but dogg how ya ryhmin great???........
dem shits like da "front of a gay club" nun of ya "lines is str8"
i neva show signs of break,so come on fag try ya fate.....
pl's a lye ya str8!..even if i was dissin myself dis guy a hate
just 5 but you gotta use more "bar's" than "shyne's estate"

if dis fagget nigga talk about killin ppl dont believe he do.....
his girl give head & like his "initial's" she drink "pee-pee-2".....

dont worry bout marv b...cuzz u win hardley eva since RB!...
u was weak n slow nobody "peeps ya flow" like a "fog sea"....

i guess on my dick cuzz my flow n bar's movin me da ranks...
shows? only "back stage" u gon b is "commiunity complaints" ..

^^^i dotn know if ya'll get dat but whuteva

“dont rap 4 just chicks n sex,da get rid of ppl like u n get some checks
no disrespect but dont ruff's records look like da system's guest...”
….. punch by marvelous, system’s guest record is 0-1, this cats record was 4-5, until he beat this bitch of course..
^^^^^LMAOOOOOOOOOOOOO DOGG DATZ BETTA THAN ANY LINE U SAID IN YA LIFE...N U DA WUN DATZ VOTES ON ALL MY BATTLES SO I COULD LOSE

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U NOT FUKKiN WiTH ME PLaiN N SiMP!...

Da "SiCKEST ON DiS SiTE" LiNE HaS BEEN USED aGaiNST ME 50 x'S...U DUDES aBUSED iT

imma go ahead and say that this is the weakest attempt at swayin votes i've ever seen. the punch DID suck and is part of the reason u DID lose to a newbie. and i'll send u 1000 so u can change your retarded title if your ganna complain about people dissin on how gay it is, oh and nice way to put that in your sig after u battle me to sway the votes even more. i'd prolly do sumin similar if i read the other persons verse before me and it it was better than mine too.

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Voted For: pictureperfect2

Pis gets my vote on this, although both of you had some good punches that were consistent. Pic's just came a little harder, with a nice finisher too. Both of you had good structure and wordplay, this was a close one...
Vote - pictureperfect2

Return the favor - honest votes only...
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=143513

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Voted For: MARVOLoUsJ1009

chose winners verse.....

shit i aint got time da wait!,ya lil thug image i find it fake...
.........but dogg how ya ryhmin great???........
dem shits like da "front of a gay club" nun of ya "lines is str8"
nice punch....good wordplay 8/10
i neva show signs of break,so come on fag try ya fate.....
pl's a lye ya str8!..even if i was dissin myself dis guy a hate
just 5 but you gotta use more "bar's" than "shyne's estate"
good punch....kinda stretched 7/10
if dis fagget nigga talk about killin ppl dont believe he do.....
his girl give head & like his "initial's" she drink "pee-pee-2".....
aight punch....could of made it hit harder 6/10
dont worry bout marv b...cuzz u win hardley eva since RB!...
u was weak n slow nobody "peeps ya flow" like a "fog sea"....
decent punch....nothing to special 5/10
i guess on my dick cuzz my flow n bar's movin me da ranks...
shows? only "back stage" u gon b is "commiunity complaints" ..
OK closer....you should always try to make your closer complex 6/10

v/marvolous

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=143293
return the favor^^^thnx.

^^^??? yo is u retarded or u just a dickhead nigga...u not fukkin with me dogg after...i cant see ya verse till i put my verse up stupid...u vote on all my battles n i know u see how many niggaz use my title dat shit is wack n u said my title wrong u go around watchin other niggaz records every person u battled got unda 5 wins n how u get koed my RUSH??? come fukk dat swayin shit swayin my dick in ya moms mouth

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U NOT FUKKiN WiTH ME PLaiN N SiMP!...

Da "SiCKEST ON DiS SiTE" LiNE HaS BEEN USED aGaiNST ME 50 x'S...U DUDES aBUSED iT

Voted For: MARVOLoUsJ1009

ummm this goes to marv for overall better verse picture perfect wasnt that persect and marv was close to bein the marvolous lol he had more punches dan perfect thats why marv one

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A crip just like Bonecollector

goodlookin...uppin 4 more votes

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U NOT FUKKiN WiTH ME PLaiN N SiMP!...

Da "SiCKEST ON DiS SiTE" LiNE HaS BEEN USED aGaiNST ME 50 x'S...U DUDES aBUSED iT

u can see my verse after u put yours up, and thats when u said that shit, and u can also change your sig then too. and i voted on one of your battles to see if u were any good, and i saw that u werend and voted agianst u. and no i aint seen that line used agianst u, maybe u should send a link. and i never battle rush enless he has more than one name cuz i aint never battled someone called rush that i know of. and......."come fukk dat swayin shit swayin my dick in ya moms mouth"- clever, u think of that one yourself, prolly, cuz it sounds jus as genius as the rest of your battle.

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Voted For: pictureperfect2

I will be honest....It was close both need major structure work,I liked the arbys melt line lol I just had that for lunch HAHA

Keep the work up kid

Vote:Picture

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