I'm The King Of Punch lines #2

Even as a carpenter you couldn’t hammer the grammar
Or nail the flavor with stale behavior just a sad mamma jamma
Your use of words is abuse to herds of readers can’t speak or write
Too weak to fight saw you on the street last night living in fright
You not thug just a slop scrub say what wanna a girl in the hot tub?
Not aware of details never share females you be bent in events in clubs
Look kid you need chrome hummers to get phone numbers
And love letters from ladies and some Mercedes just a cucumber
Won’t root her garden

You rhyme dreary even with Einstein theory wouldn’t be atomic
With Ebonics so ironic how your formula not supersonic
Like Walter Payton you falter creating lyrics sipping gin and tonic
Putting legit restrictions on your bits of fictions rhymes sound chronic

You try hustles with bad eye muscles you don’t see straight
And never be great so why debate like a whack candidate?
Don’t accept bribes but you need help with scribes don’t hate

?? where da punchlines at dogg...lmaooo i aint see nun

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U NOT FUKKiN WiTH ME PLaiN N SiMP!...

Da "SiCKEST ON DiS SiTE" LiNE HaS BEEN USED aGaiNST ME 50 x'S...U DUDES aBUSED iT

^^lol where are the punches man lol you suck bad haha thinks hes the best at punches you cant say that triple N is and then im Mr. PunchLines ill hurt you man yu got nun on me and youve been in this site for longer then me aha and im 14 haha

HA! HA! HA! yall cats listen up and read this is a punchline

You rhyme dreary even with Einstein theory wouldn’t be atomic
With Ebonics so ironic how your formula not supersonic
Like Walter Payton you falter creating lyrics sipping gin and tonic
Putting legit restrictions on your bits of fictions your rhymes sound chronic

um not realy a punchline is when yer dissingf someone buddy like this:

madraper is crap he says he spits punchlines/
but aint got time to even shine and spit his lines/.

and plus that just sucked so bad what i wrote but its better then yer song lol

BrOTheRP.A.R.A. you contradicting yourself hell I'm dissing the fuck out of somebody but my vocab is years ahead of that simple diss you wrote

om buddy you might be older then me but trust me i can out battle you dont start shit i could merk you plus i dont want no beef i was just making a state ment

BrOTheRP.A.R.A. well make sense don't look fake and dense trying make yourself look big man get some vocab please

honestly neither one of yous can drop punchlines for one i didnt see any in this lil "flow" and HOEtheRPA or what ever he fucking is you cant even rap so dont even lidten to him madd rapper.....yall wanna read a punchline......here

im gonna drop something and ill show you punchlines iight make sure you read it you can thate all you want but im gonna show the real punchlines iight fellas

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hey yo im known to play it low//
dont confuse me with these cornballs on the radio//


ima true hustlah you couldnt fit in my shoes//
my pager buzz to much man my hips are bruised//

faMBa$e Bitch ass niggas Bean Town thats how im doing it....enjoy life make money.....death b4 dishonor
trust no body that aint your fam and fuck that you cant even trust them some times i cant even trust myself lil niggas.....1

fuck punch lines, im too drunk to drop lines, so when i rap im heard, drunk on stage perved, and fuck structure, im dumb enough to jus cut cha,

Punchlines? Thats All I Got To Say Peeps Fresh Ya Boy

stuff be hitting on four corners thanks for the props and critique

work on ya punches.....
come more creative and witty with them N make ya following bar more hard hitting....
some basic lines some more decent then others.....

but keep praticesing....

give me feed back on my drop... http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=144597