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No Crew Votes
No Recycling
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Minimum posts to vote: 150

Check in by: 08-20-04 at 01:26 PM

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G has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-20-04 12:57 PM.

J DOT has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-20-04 12:59 PM.

My punchlines are more deadly than 'I.C.U'
Put you on the third floor, that's where I see you...*
(Intensive Care Unit-Third Floor in most Hospitals)

lol...you aint no "G", I'll expose you like Iraqi Soldiers
This dude's not a hard cat, I'll bomb on you like roaches

Your played out rhymes are as old as flat tops
You can't battle me with yo cheesy lines, you looking for rat spots

i got traps for cats like you, just fall in the ditch
I guarantee you'll come out with nothing less than bruises and stitched

Your nothing more than a fake emcee, riding like your tight
I might fuck around and put a hole in yo bike

If ya attempt to ride, you'll see yourself coming up short
...You dont spit fire, you'll get lit like newports*
(Cigarette Brand)

In a New York minute, you'll see J Dot in this battle winnin'
I'll treat you like Spreewell's, keep your fuckin mind spinnin'

My minds grinnin', cause i came here to takeover
Spit one punchline, give yo brain a makeover

Yo game's over

damn...that was quick, i shouldve looked it over...o'well, good luck

The King of Sac?..yes, but you Bring the wack..ness,
so the thing in my pac...guess, will lay you flat, like a ma...tress!
He gets "thrown around by kids", like he was the "hot potato",
my punches put more bruises in him than a rot tomato!
Eat you up and swallow you alive quick, like a desperation shark,
Cuz I’m “over your level” like the lines in exclamation marks!
In your heart is where I’m aimin..I lyrically stab-thee-there.
cuz I’m hard ta fade like doos with nappy hair.
This bitch is just a "dot", I'm a grand "star",
I'll run his ass over with his own damn car!
80 miles an hour, this stupidass tried to blitz the bumper again,
your family celebratin your death, cuz its a slumper ta them!
I put tar on his mouth, so they cant even hear-the-kid,
cuz in 1 line..I kill "J...Per-i-od".*

*J "DOT" = J "Period."

-Look at his profile. Youll get it.

Good shit dogg, Good battle.

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yea coo shit....aiyo, uppn this

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uppn this...why aint nobody voting today? c'mon people, lets get some votes

Voted For: G

ummmm v/ G

he came harder had harder punches and usm personals overall dope verse.....nice flow


J- wasnt feelin ya punches bro improve on dat and youll be good.........nice lfow....some ok metafours......but overall G took this

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Voted For: J DOT

j- dOT

1RST BAR - ICU ISN'T DEADLY, THEY SAVE LIVES, THAT PUNCH DIDN'T MAKE SENSE..

2ND BAR - NO PUNCH, JUST FILLER

3RD BAR - AGAIN, MOSTLY FILLER, BASIC WORDPLAY AND A STRETCHED LINE..

4TH BAR - LAME, STRETCHED LINE AGAIN ALSO..

5TH BAR - PUT A HOLE IN HIS BIKE? THAT WASN'T A PUNCHLINE..

6TH - BASIC AND PLAYED OUT SIMILIE AND BASIC WORDPLAY..

7TH BAR - THAT WAS JUST WHACK DUDE.. MIND SPINNIN LIKE SPREWELLS?

8TH BAR - DISSAPOINTING LAST BAR ALSO,

OVERALL I GIVE YOU 4/10, YOU LACKED SERIOUSLY IN WORDPLAY AND PUNCHES, YOU NEED TO ELEVATE..

G

i'M NOT GONNA GO BAR FOR BAR, BUT YOU HAD SOME REALLY GOOD WORDPLAY, NICE MULTIE SYLLABIC RHYMES, LIKE HOT TAMATO, ROT POTATO.. AND YOUR PUNCHES GOT MY ATTENTION AND WERE LESS PLAYED, THEY STUC.K.. PERSONALS HIT ALSO, LIKE THE KING OF SAC THING, SO YOU GET MY VOTE..

YO, HIT UP THIS BATTLE CUZ, THANX.
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=143508


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