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Dev 2 100.00%
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Old 02-17-04, 06:29 PM   #1
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Dev vs Provoke

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10 lines.. 45 mins..
Blind Spits..
Good Luck..
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Old 02-17-04, 06:41 PM   #2
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check 1...........................
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Old 02-17-04, 07:16 PM   #3
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From hookup to check in, you took twenty mins...... What the fuck?
Shoulda realized I'm above your level.. especially when you hold me up!
Looked for your past battles and found pages of wack Open Mics
Parents musta lived thru the Watts riots.. 'cos their offspring aint too bright
Banks competing for low interest rates.... that idea has me in creases
'Cos every single one is plain outdone........... by Devs topical pieces!
Always slept on.... Its only fair that I give them all a mention..
Its the only time your drops are actually thecentre of attention
Face facts son... you can't get close to me however much you try
Stick to writing a verse all week... and waiting for two damn replys
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Old 02-17-04, 07:23 PM   #4
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Noobs to me are like a balloon... bursting under pressure
Full of air… like I care… if skill was hair… you’d be uncle fester!
I’d contest ya… will… cos ima kill ya premature
But with your ability… id owe the courts… for sure!
Yes manure comes to mind… cos to the rim your full of shit
Ya couldn’t hit the clit… if the lips were a meter… in width!
Call me the sith… from the darkside… I’ll call you wicket
A deformed midget… good for nuthin like a beer widget!
So quit it… ya couldn’t 'provoke' a fight if ya tried
Cos ya like a potato chip… ya unhealthy and getting fried!
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Old 02-17-04, 07:41 PM   #5
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When I read Provoke's flow I was expecting it to be a close battle.....when I read his finisher I was like damn Dev better come strong on this shit......then as I began reading Dev's flow he had me goin "oooooooh shit" in my my head as if I was in the crowd....punch after punch his flow was better.....now don't get me wrong Provoke was tight but just not at Dev's level.....Punches, flow, evrything was on point....good job both of you! Nice battle!
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Old 02-17-04, 08:23 PM   #6
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thnx man......uppin...........
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Old 02-17-04, 09:14 PM   #7
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iight...

Provoke...

From hookup to check in, you took twenty mins...... What the fuck?
Shoulda realized I'm above your level.. especially when you hold me up!
Was actually 11 minutes... Nice wordplay though... Good enough opener... 7/10
Looked for your past battles and found pages of wack Open Mics
Parents musta lived thru the Watts riots.. 'cos their offspring aint too bright
Weak first line... Made up for it with the second... 7/10
Banks competing for low interest rates.... that idea has me in creases
'Cos every single one is plain outdone........... by Devs topical pieces!
Good punch... That was cool... 8/10
Always slept on.... Its only fair that I give them all a mention..
Its the only time your drops are actually thecentre of attention
Know when to stop dissin his OM's... Not bad though... 5/10
Face facts son... you can't get close to me however much you try
Stick to writing a verse all week... and waiting for two damn replys
Lol... Again on the OM's... Nice though... 6/10

Overall... 33/50... Decent verse... But you alone made the disses on his OM's played out... Try being more creative and diss him about different topics... Pz


Dev


Noobs to me are like a balloon... bursting under pressure
Full of air… like I care… if skill was hair… you’d be uncle fester!
GOOD inner multi's... Nice concept... Good punch... 8/10
I’d contest ya… will… cos ima kill ya premature
But with your ability… id owe the courts… for sure!
Hahahaha... Thats cool... Made me laugh... 8/10
Yes manure comes to mind… cos to the rim your full of shit
Ya couldn’t hit the clit… if the lips were a meter… in width!
Nice... 6/10
Call me the sith… from the darkside… I’ll call you wicket
A deformed midget… good for nuthin like a beer widget!
Good multi... 6/10
So quit it… ya couldn’t 'provoke' a fight if ya tried
Cos ya like a potato chip… ya unhealthy and getting fried!
Good closer... Nice wordplay... 7/10

Overall... 35/50... Good verse... Nice multi's and wordplay...

v/ Dev


Hit this up please both of you...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...020#post1193020

Thanks...

Pz...
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Old 02-17-04, 09:15 PM   #8
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Nice battle, dev has it in my opinion though.....uppin
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Old 02-17-04, 10:38 PM   #9
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uppin[2].......................
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Old 02-18-04, 10:58 AM   #10
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Uppin... I know I used the topicals alot, but I actually incorporated personals..
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