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03-07-04, 01:06 PM | #1 | ||||||
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undefined YO .....YO...HERE WE GO you cant mess im the best "is that correct sir" "YES!!!" "NO!!" "IM NOT SURE!!!" im a better rapper than tupac shakur and fatman scoop but he's just fat he's not cool im also a better rapper than ja rule and biggie small and definitly p.diddy but thats all! many people have been jelaous of my lyrical skill because literally with theese words i can kill i will pull them out the air and stab u in the chest u be wishin u were wearin a bulletproof vest under ure amarni shirt wich i meant to tell u i rubbed it in the dirt wich is a waste of a 150 dollas witch u spent in that shop hopfully in this game ill go straight to the top but stop people dont take this seriously they think its a game they only wanna do it cuz of the fame to have all the money and to be a star,to have a big house to drive a fast car id always b lucky to have a dolla if u liked this rap...go on HOLLA!!!!!
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03-07-04, 01:07 PM | #2 | ||||||
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im sorry to any fat kids who find this ofennsive....ha ha ha ha
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03-08-04, 09:35 AM | #3 | ||||
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This was ok....nothing really good....try adding some multies to your pieces to make them more complex and also add some internals maybe to help the flow out....the content was ok...should try writing about something else than this kind of stuff.....but keep at it.
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03-12-04, 06:41 PM | #4 | |||||||
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borin realy...no real flow or anyfin
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