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Old 09-25-04, 03:52 PM   #1
SUCC MACOKK
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aight this was an ok battle from both, p-dizzle,you had some decent punches but some played out stuff too about balzing up like weed,his mom blowing you,yeah yeah that shits old.Your flow was pretty sketchy with the ending of lines with "you see?" and stuff.Nah not wordking here.In your whole verse you probly had 1 personal but even that's hard to find.you had some multies and shit but as a whole,your verse wasn't as good as your other battles ive read.
WORDPLAYA-your verse was slightly better because you didn't have too many played out punches and your flow was a little bit better and your structure was superior with all the lines being of equal length.Your disses and wordplays were good and your punches nice.Witty lines such as not full grown but I know you can do better too.I dont know if all the so called 'vets' are dropping half assed or what in here cause so far,I havent seen anything amazing.
Overall,this goes to WP for not having played out shit and bad flow.Peace out.

V/WORDPLAYA.
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