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Check in by: 10-03-04 at 10:47 PM

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KingKenoDNC has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-03-04 10:18 PM.

XxToXiCXxVeRbZ has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-03-04 10:18 PM.

toxic verbs think he toxic well ya brain im go rock it//
if toxic say he can beat keno then we'll call him a false prophet//
this aint the pen but you bout to get lyrically raped//
i aint listenin to ya bullshit like nerds on blinds dates//
let it be known i spit flames so dont test, or get burned//
the king is here now so there is alot of lessons for u to learn//

my rhymes are sweet (nice) i punch u so hard make holes in yo teeth like cavaties//
yo rhymes wouldnt shine if u waxed dem clean even if u ride an skateboard yo rhymes wouldnt be extreme dan me//

Yo rhymes wouldnt be tighter dan mines if u wore bill cospy sweata//
my rhymes cutt yo verse like an papa shredda,,,,ur not gettin betta,u like an broken elevata//

Yo rhymes wouldne be fresh if u took some "winter fresh" iam makin u hot and sweart givin u hot breath//(RHYMES STINK)
call me an surgery doctor,,,take da "scapel" and incinsion through yo organs killing befo yo heart stops,cerbal death//

done~!

errrrrr rusty

Voted For: KingKenoDNC

King K wins this battle with his 3 bars alone punches were better and structure was on point. Toxic's flow was pretty wack n juvenile. He should work on his creativity alot and that structure was turrrrible.

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preciate the vote uppin for more votes

Voted For: XxToXiCXxVeRbZ

this battle goes hands down to toxic for better wordplay and wittier punches.He didn't have any personals but the punches made up for that.Hella stretched lines too,better watch that/
King,your shit didn't make much sense and 90% of it should've been reoworded.The nerd blind date line....um no.
you had one ok line in your verse and it was the opener.Apart from that,your verse was weak.You need to work on structure,complex wordplay,and hard-hitting punches.

V/ Toxic verbz.

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Voted For: XxToXiCXxVeRbZ

umm this is pretty one sided....
opener - toxic
closer - toxic
flow - toxic
punchez - toxic
vocab - toxic
structure - king
v - no hate king but toxic won this shit easy......
watch ya line lenghts toxic....

W/e Uppin For Mo Votes


~peace~

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Voted For: XxToXiCXxVeRbZ

Emcee:KingKenoDNC

Verse:
toxic verbs think he toxic well ya brain im go rock it//
if toxic say he can beat keno then we'll call him a false prophet//
this aint the pen but you bout to get lyrically raped//
i aint listenin to ya bullshit like nerds on blinds dates//
let it be known i spit flames so dont test, or get burned//
the king is here now so there is alot of lessons for u to learn//

Comments:hm...yeh you were pretty consistant ill give you that but you just didnt come hard....you should write ya verse then read it again to see if it makes sense then rewrite it with better multis and metas...although i did like the blind date one lol/

Marks:
Wordplay - 5/10
Metas - 6/10
Vocabulary - 5/10
Structure - 7/10
Punches - 5/10
Opener - 4/10
Closer – 5/10
Personals – 3/10 you said "if" not good word choice..
Enjoyment – 5/10
Creativity - 5/10
Overall - 50/100
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Emcee:XxToXiCXxVeRbZ

Verse:
my rhymes are sweet (nice) i punch u so hard make holes in yo teeth like cavaties//
yo rhymes wouldnt shine if u waxed dem clean even if u ride an skateboard yo rhymes wouldnt be extreme dan me//

Yo rhymes wouldnt be tighter dan mines if u wore bill cospy sweata//
my rhymes cutt yo verse like an papa shredda,,,,ur not gettin betta,u like an broken elevata//

Yo rhymes wouldne be fresh if u took some "winter fresh" iam makin u hot and sweart givin u hot breath//(RHYMES STINK)
call me an surgery doctor,,,take da "scapel" and incinsion through yo organs killing befo yo heart stops,cerbal death//

Comments:aight aight not bad verse..um ya structure was kinda fucked up but that doesnt matter too much to me its what its comprised of...i liked some of the metas and i think thats what won this..

Marks:
Wordplay - 6/10
Metas - 7/10
Vocabulary - 7/10 hott cerbal death
Structure - 5/10 coz i dont care about structure
Punches - 6/10
Opener - 6/10
Closer – 8/10
Personals – 5/10
Enjoyment – 7/10
Creativity - 7/10
Overall - 64/100
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