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02-03-04, 03:54 PM | #1 | ||||||
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B.I. detained (0-0) vs. Young P (0-0)
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verses due friday
check ins due NOW loser's out of league |
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02-03-04, 03:56 PM | #2 | |||||||
I'm Better Than You
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IP: E81B 1539
Now.
Check In. * Uh oh....Two Minutes late! 14 lines Brix. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111691 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111675 And Feeble vs Walter Brix is cool Last edited by Young P : 02-05-04 at 03:58 PM. Reason: ;) |
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02-03-04, 04:00 PM | #3 | |||
Mona Lisa.
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Voted-- Jacent Vs Allegory Feebs Vs Walt Leth Vs Quality
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02-04-04, 09:43 PM | #4 | |||||||
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IP: E81B 1539
Saying you fell off is an understatement, you more idle or dead.
Feebs got you the closest to dope...when he titled this thread! Only ever capitilized...his punches...but I guess a vet would... Think that B became wack...I'd say that he never was good! Brix is nice though, at making excuses for skill that he lacks. Fell down a hill tryna catcha' flow...and he still isn't far from Jack! Honestly, I'm not tryna hate on you B, as a matter of fact... I said "Brix is cool "...It's Webster that defines you as wack! And fuck my pic, call me a bitch, you'll just get mothered on the spot. Use New 2 Rb as a reason for losing, (...room for any others you got...) You're known as a slut to all of RB, fucked, whored and prostituted. Concepts arent bad mate...I just used them months before you did! Asked me to fuck you, put it in your sig, you know this fag's foul. A quick verse? Here's some time...for you to go 'n pack your bags now! Last edited by Young P : 02-04-04 at 09:45 PM. Reason: Added go to last line...lol. |
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02-04-04, 11:08 PM | #5 | |||||||
I'm Better Than You
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IP: E81B 1539
Shit. I'm gone from RB for now. Vacation. And these damn niggarochies only have 2 battles. Oh well. I'll vote on four next time.
Bye! |
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02-05-04, 06:43 PM | #6 | |||
Mona Lisa.
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IP: 9E53 07A2
P's against played Negligée lines..Innevitable it was gonna happen
his Rhymes reflect his Dress sense..they both follow a Horrible Pattern to say Young Pre-writes gets me Laughin..this maggot can't de-Bate i gave him 50 hrs to Spit & in return..* Uh oh....Two Minutes late! he's a strong believer in Fate..thats why he's already signed out Proudly says "Brix is Cool"..now the chump thinks he's in w/ a Shout constantly throws names About..coz he's so embaressed by his own when Young says he's in the Zone..he refers to being Home Alone on the other end of his Sitters Fone..using methods to get some Nookie wot RB’s about to find out.. ………….. ..it’s a retards way..of asking for some Milk & Cookies P’ll damn sure be Lucky!! Like trying to Hanstand in Kwik Sand P’s dreams Fade head first.. like the disabled Rides at Disneyland So fuck off to Florida..take a Vacation..blow your Social Allowance your family bringing in a Steady Income..is like a Flidimi tryin to balance
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02-05-04, 09:27 PM | #7 | ||||||
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Well....
This battle is close, you both came with some good punches and some bad ones...... However...Brix's punches seemed to make better connection I wont say he had more personals but they were certainly used better On That note ^ Brix edges this one out Vote: B.I. D. "i gave him 50 hrs to Spit & in return..* Uh oh....Two Minutes late! " |
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02-06-04, 10:19 AM | #8 | |||||||
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Very close battle...
I'm a have ta break it down bar by bar and see how many were better... YOUNG P Saying you fell off is an understatement, you more idle or dead. Feebs got you the closest to dope...when he titled this thread! BRIX P's against played Negligée lines..Innevitable it was gonna happen his Rhymes reflect his Dress sense..they both follow a Horrible Pattern Played opener for Young, seen this recycled time after time...But, I thought Brix's was a reach and a miss with the wordplay, so the punch died for me...Despite being played, Young P YOUNG P Only ever capitilized...his punches...but I guess a vet would... Think that B became wack...I'd say that he never was good! BRIX to say Young Pre-writes gets me Laughin..this maggot can't de-Bate i gave him 50 hrs to Spit & in return..* Uh oh....Two Minutes late! Gonna say that was a pretty mild punch by Young, Brix takes this with the personal, even thought the punch wasn't much here either...Brix YOUNG P Brix is nice though, at making excuses for skill that he lacks. Fell down a hill tryna catcha' flow...and he still isn't far from Jack! BRIX he's a strong believer in Fate..thats why he's already signed out Proudly says "Brix is Cool"..now the chump thinks he's in w/ a Shout Just didn't grasp what Brix was tryin ta say here,and how's it a punch? Decent wordplay from Young on a slightly played but nicely twisted concept...Young P YOUNG P Honestly, I'm not tryna hate on you B, as a matter of fact... I said "Brix is cool "...It's Webster that defines you as wack! BRIX constantly throws names About..coz he's so embaressed by his own when Young says he's in the Zone..he refers to being Home Alone Much better shot and wordplay utilized by Young P, Home Alone is probably 10 years old, this was funny, but real eh as far as punching power goes...Young P YOUNG P And fuck my pic, call me a bitch, you'll just get mothered on the spot. Use New 2 Rb as a reason for losing, (...room for any others you got...) BRIX on the other end of his Sitters Fone..using methods to get some Nookie wot RB’s about to find out.. ………….. ..it’s a retards way..of asking for some Milk & Cookies Better wordplay again by Young P, inventive punch...Brix, that line coulda been so much better if ya'd not stretched it out and added so much filler...Young P YOUNG P You're known as a slut to all of RB, fucked, whored and prostituted. Concepts arent bad mate...I just used them months before you did! BRIX P’ll damn sure be Lucky!! Like trying to Hanstand in Kwik Sand P’s dreams Fade head first.. like the disabled Rides at Disneyland Again, the wordplay takes this over the metas, nice personal as well by, Young P YOUNG P Asked me to fuck you, put it in your sig, you know this fag's foul. A quick verse? Here's some time...for you to go 'n pack your bags now! BRIX So fuck off to Florida..take a Vacation..blow your Social Allowance your family bringing in a Steady Income..is like a Flidimi tryin to balance Didn't think that was much of a punch by Young, Brix hit the personals and had a nice meta that gave him the closer...Brix So...check it out... Who won more lines? Looks like Young P did... There's ya winner. Peace
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02-06-04, 12:49 PM | #9 | |||||||
I'm Better Than You
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IP: E81B 1539
Ohhkayyy....
More votes? |
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02-06-04, 09:40 PM | #10 | |||||||
I'm Better Than You
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IP: 32CF C0D9
Uppin again. Just tell me the name of your battle I'll peep it.
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02-06-04, 10:21 PM | #11 | ||||||
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^lmao
upp'n 3 times in LLL take your ass back to frontlines I read both your verses and they sucked my opinion is that you both should be kicked out so it really dosent matter who wins, now does it? |
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02-07-04, 05:41 AM | #12 | |||
Mona Lisa.
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IP: 9E53 07A2
^^how much more of a loser could you be?
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02-08-04, 01:32 PM | #13 | ||||
^ Says It All ^
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Vote - B.I
Both Came Pretty Weak, Young P had Played Lines. The 'Websters' Line, The 'Played Concept That I Used Months Ago' Line...Hows That For Irony. Anyways, Brix Came Less Played And His Punches Hit Harder.
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02-09-04, 03:16 PM | #14 | ||||
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Well, not breaking this down. No need for it. Brix came with fresher concepts and harder hitting punches. Neither verse was too great, but Brix didn't edge him, he just beat him. I agree with Walt on Young P going back to Frontlines. Anyway, kinda bleh battle. Wasn't feelin it much....come doper next week Brix...I'm sayin Brix cuz I'm hoping Young Pissant will be kicked out.
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02-09-04, 03:33 PM | #15 | ||||||
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BI's attempted sonning of WW
"^^how much more of a loser could you be?" WW's sucessful sonning of BI ................well, I could be you Once again, both verses were not LLL caliber and I strongly suggest they be removed and make room for heads with talent |
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