its pretty tight...i like it...dont care if you dont....i'll copy the links in a second..

www.soundclick.com/jayjking

"Fame(2VF)" if you wanna you can spit on it and hit me up ona im and send it or upload it to ur soundclick cuz its a collab i wanna do...well....tell me what cha'll think


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LINK 1:http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=184833

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U sound like u from Dirty Souf and u reppin Westside..lol am likin yo voice..........beat like i said is dirty souf kinda crunk shit..................lyrics too simplistic fam u can do it betta emotions is cool neva rapped on a beat like this..but ama get some westcoastin on this shit............feel me.

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word man..thanks for the feed......i'm always told i sound dirty south....i kept it simple cuz its a club song.and its a track thats not really meant for lyrics..but thanks for the feed

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U still want me on this.........?

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i got two people that are spittin too it...well who ever does the dopest i'll keep......soo go head and give it a try...

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blah. Aite got it............ama get it finished by 2nite..lol

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aight tight..this songs pretty hott man....soo when ever you get it done upload it on aim so i can download it and spit the chorus....and then if theres enuff room maybe one of the other emcees can spit on it......well......my aims YoungSIR2352 if your down

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Uppin on this Fiya

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listening..... beat is kinda annoying..... flow is ok... better than most ya shit..... vocab still needs upping... use shit with more sylables and stop rapping about haters because thats basicly like an invite for people to hate on you any way.... mic presance is ok but could be better.... hook could be better... all in all this was ok. just ok... 4.5/10

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yeah....thats cool Wicked...i got about 12 people round olympia sayin this shits OFF THE CHAIN..and I should send my shit to dre NO lie 100% honest..i mean i even got Nitro Sayin this is hot man..

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i like this beat. the chorus is simple. u used a mayor line that was biten. ur flow is aight in this tho. vocals are too low. reall basic. but u kinda drop ur flow in this. ... DONT SEND THIS TO DRE! he will piss on this. no disrespect, you got my props for this bein a descent track but it aint professional. but the best shit i heard from u yet. i think after 20 g dissed u . u could actually knock him back with it if u came like this. keep droppin. work on gettin ur lyrics a lil more intelligent tho. cuz u got a good presence.

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werd, the chorus was good, flow was good this was one of your better tracks....the finished product with more cats on it should be coo

those two people should be me and DV but im almost done writin my shit. just aint shit been comin to mind

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