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Old 04-05-06, 08:10 AM   #1
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*** Nostradamus - The New Prototype ***

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Yep...
Chucked it together in the last few days... Trynna keep myself busy. Beats by 9th Wonder...



...........Enjoy.

(I'll post links asap, no bullshit)

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Old 04-05-06, 09:56 AM   #2
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I always loved your music Nos, but to be honest I couldn't really understand you. But for the most parts I could. the flow was pretty good and I could till it was pickin up as you went on. the delivery was pretty strong, I also like the fact that you don't flex your voice to sound american. Props for that man, be yourself is right. The 9th wonder ebat was a good choice, they make dope shit too. The Lyrics were hot too, one thing though.....I just don't get why you do not record as much anymore?

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Old 04-05-06, 10:22 AM   #3
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You've improved a lot since I last listened to you. And I really only say that because I haven't listened to you in a long ass time. 9th Wonder is one of my favorite producers, and I was definately feeling this beat. I've been thinking of doing something over this beat actually, maybe if you wanted to do a remix to this sometime I'd be down. But that's up to you.
Overall, your flow is consistent, keeping it upbeat and enjoyable to listen to. That "what" that came in the first verse was pretty loud. Don't know if that was intentional or not, and if not I'm sure you've already noticed it. But anyways, it doesn't really take anything away from the track, just something that caught my attention.

Yo, if you care to return me a favor...
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Old 04-05-06, 11:13 AM   #4
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nice beat

flows nice,like ur voice n shit...qualitys decent....could b noise reducted a bit tho or sumthin....sounds a bit fuzzy...lyrics r tight n shit....emotion not realy their....

decent drop
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Old 04-05-06, 01:58 PM   #5
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I re-did the mixing a bit.. Shit was a bit rushed before...

Track should be more solid now.......I'll check cats tracks and rtf tomorrow. They'll be the links I post.
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Old 04-06-06, 01:49 AM   #6
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Old 04-06-06, 04:18 AM   #7
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flow is good, at times its heavy, but then theres other times it sounds abit awkward, delivery is good, abit monotonous in the sense it could do with more animation/variation to make it more interesting and less predictable, lyrics are good, not feelin the hook if thats what it is, them ad-libs u say in between lines e.t.c dont sound mixed properly at all un-fortunately cos it makes the track sound sloppy if they was mixed properly this track would sound much better, couple times u sounded like u ran out of breath slightly too but im being picky with ur flaws here, but imo thats the best way to help heads better themselves, gd crack.
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Old 04-06-06, 04:31 AM   #8
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Adlibs were recorded after I gave the comp back..
I had to do em on a shitty dynamic sony mic... Thats why they came out so fucked...

But yeah...This is the first track I've written in a few weeks... Looking forward to getting back into the swing of things........
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Old 04-06-06, 04:35 AM   #9
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lyrics and flow stand out instantly. Good vocal levels,nice and clear,this track i can clearly hear what your saying bro, alot of your tracks your spitting double time, and I found it hard to catch ya rhymes and message.
This track is enjoyable man, on the real.
I felt the hook might be a bit more effective without the whispers on it, maybe a diffent effect. but your styles your style.
Appreciatte what you have to say on this track man. Solid!


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Old 04-06-06, 05:00 AM   #10
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that cud explain alot bput quality difference then lol
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Old 04-07-06, 10:49 AM   #11
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Listening...

Beat is nice. Where the hell do you find these..? Anyway...presence is a lot better on this track. Flow is nice and tight...lyrics are pretty nice as well. Was that an adlib...? It was like a muffled old man spitting into the mic...oh well, like you said, you're working on production. Flow is nice, as I said, but it's kind of repetive. It happens to the best of us though. Quality was lacking, but it is pretty good for the mic you are using. I love the accent...The voice still does remind me of Tupac. Overall, this track was nice. Keep it up.
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Old 04-07-06, 11:41 AM   #12
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Aight

Beatxs dope really feelin it,deliverys nice,although your emotion aint that good,lyrics are tight as fuck bro......Wow@that adlib,ewwww lol.Flows nice feeling it,sometimes its real dope.quality was aight i suppose,could be better though....

Overall:8/10

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Old 04-08-06, 03:54 AM   #13
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It's coo Nos i like most of ur stuff.
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