I've been thinkin to myself..when I battled Tu Centz did my verse really suck..or did he just happened to rip me?..I am requestin that someone break my verse down in to parts..possibly by bars and tell me what yall think..was it good,bad,or anything else..here is my verse:

You got a 'Diamond Mind'?/
You must be thinkin' 'cubic zirconia'/
My aim game is 'priceless' whenever I start zonin' ya/
With bars that with 'melt coal',I aint nothin nice/
You think U got a chance of winnin?,I'll jus put yo 'thoughts on ice'/
Make U take the knife to yo wrist,slighty slice up/
Cause U 'ampetatin' yo arm' is the only way you'll have 'diamond cuts'/
Kidnap yo girl,dime or slut,I'll have her insides missin'/
They say a 'diamond is forever',well I'm about to break tradition/
You'll think I'm tossin' plates the way I'm throwin disses(dishes)/
Your crew said U was ill,I knew it was superstitions/
Call me a grave robber the way I'm diggin' up old bones/
And givin you rotatin' losses like numbers on old telephones/

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Originally posted by Tu Centz
You Couldn't Get Wins Against Vets, So He Chose Herbs 'Instead'

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It's good to know that U tellin' yo opponents the truth/
Call me a 'retired boxer turned dentist' the way I'll 'knock out yo tooth'/
Ran out of punches so you decided to knock yourself out/
Dumbass wanted to 'drop from Diamond Mindz' so he thought he could 'rock hisself out'/

as you can see I have alot of disses towards his crew..do yall think I should have made more direct punches to him?..lets get some feedback..

I'ma biter!!!
Yay!!!

thanks Chrit for editin his bullshit..lets get some real replies....please...

It Would Be Smart To Provide My Verse As Well.. So The Readers Can Judge...

Words Are Filled With Hate, Your Style's Inconsistent Like Stock Market Rates/
Left Ya Slayed And Decayed, Dawg You Couldn't Hold Me Down As A Paperweight/
Got Ya Neck Cracked, And Then I Sprayed Your Ass With Lysol Because It's a Fact/
When Battlin Me, You Get Sonned With E's (Ease) Like Mothers Dope Up On Crack/
Ya Bodies Crippled Outta Proportion, Imma Murder My Son Like Performin Abortions/
And Your Lines Gotta Be Charged With Rape With The Way That You Force Them!/
Outta Luck? It's Pretty Sad When Readers Like Your Work Best Unwritten And Untouched/
Get Off My Nuts, Stealing Inhalers Is The Only Way You Make Voters Adrenilane Rush/
And When Answering Your Battle Call It's Like Olympic Hurdles.. Nobody's Ducking/
Please Kid Stop Bluffin, I Could Admire Your Skill Simply By Looking At Nothing/
Spit Then Jet? Walkin In This Battle Is Like Closed Animal Clinics, I See No Vet/
He No Vet,Just Sit And Watch Me Snatch This W, Like An Assault On The Alphabet/
I Expect An Easy Victory, Like Masturbation I Could Beat You Singlehandedly/
You Get Charged For Littering Because You Just Got Ticketed For Droppin Debris/
Bullets Just Bounce Off Me, Like 3 X 4 Nine's Aren't The Answer When Facin Me/


My Verse^^^



Blah.. You Got Ripped, You Shouldn't Talk So Much If You Can't Back It Up..

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..Remember These Dope Kids?..

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stop freepostin..I dont care to hear your 2 cents..

Yes...U did get ripped...Elevate...

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"Yes...U did get ripped...Elevate..."

^^hes right u should elevate it"

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"Yes...U did get ripped...Elevate..."

^^hes right u should elevate it" ^^

yeah tu centz ripped ya but ya verse was good as well.

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you aint ready for this

sorry rush but ya got smoked,burnt and everythin else................pz

soz mate but you did get merked.................................

Read the Tutorials on this ite and elavate

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sigs are for herbs...Thats why I got one!