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01-23-05, 02:01 PM
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War Zones- Lethal Gk
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my newest track that I have been working on I need to know exactly what yall feel about this track, even if the vocals sound to loud or low, anything yall can think of check it out at
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/5/lethalgkmusic.htm I checked out http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=173441 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=173153 Soooo Stickied- Featured Track 1/31/05-2/06/05- Congrats- Last edited by SevenThird : 01-31-05 at 12:51 AM. |
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01-23-05, 05:19 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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up your vocals a bit i couldnt really hear you in that..maybe just turn the mic up a bit...but other den that its all good but it might have been the style of beat that cut your vocals a bit....but its all good...keep doing yo thang...pz
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01-23-05, 05:38 PM
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IP:
thanks for the feed im gonna respond to everyones tracks a little later
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01-23-05, 07:48 PM
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I walk & walk over you
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Give Me That Beat Please~!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
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01-23-05, 08:24 PM
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yo it was tight, maybe just turn the beat up a lil bit but other than tht, ur flow was on point and u has some gd lyrics up in dere
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=173203 - wat u think?
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01-24-05, 01:35 AM
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Ask About Me
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your voice dont sound as clear as usual....
your flow goes well with the beat.... lyircs where kinda played......(speaking of your feel in lines...) raise your vocals...or lower beat...i say oyu lower the beat a lil bit and raise your vocals a lil bit... chorus...... you need to switch up oyur voice or add eckos...your chorus was good just couldnt tell it was your chorus.....most chorus's have eckos or they change there tempos... alll in all...change up your speed and shit like that every now and then...you had like a lil bit off emotion...work on that shit....not your best work....
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01-24-05, 05:27 PM
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IP:
word exactly what I wanted to hear man, thanks see thats the kind of feedback that you improve from
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01-28-05, 02:10 AM
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The Ups and Downs of Life
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yea i'd cop an album off the flow in this song... everything an emcee should display in a flow i think was displayed here... I'd love to here it after being mastered by a professional... good shit man, keep the hot shit here.... 111.1.1.1.1.1.111
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01-28-05, 02:27 PM
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STROBE's Favorite Rapper
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Shit Is Decent Your The Best Kid Under 16 I Ever Heard And Thats Word Sun You Got Potential Flow Is Good Lyrics Are Blah Could Be Better But They Reflect How Young You Are Shit Is Pretty Good Overall
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01-30-05, 01:16 PM
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No Relation To Tina
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lyrics are ok in some parts...not so good in others........you flow was on point....but switch it up every once in a while.....it gets boring after a while.....ad lib your hook so people know its your hook......it kinda just sounds like one big verse if you dont listen to it closely....u have a good voice....good flow....quality was good....beat was dope......overall this was a pretty good song.......RTF in sig
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01-30-05, 02:11 PM
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New to RV
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This is nice ... i like the flow to this ... the flow matches pretty good to the beat ... lyrics are pretty nice ... ALOT of wordplay ... lol ... this is nice man ... good track overall ....
Peace !! ~1~ |
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01-30-05, 02:15 PM
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Rastafari Walk Tall
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IP:
the cd cover in ur sig is sick.............who made it?
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01-30-05, 04:40 PM
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IP:
you know my boy Ltizzle made that cover but dont evrybody go rushin on him asking him for one, hes one busy person
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01-30-05, 09:40 PM
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I Smacc Booty Emcee's
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this track was pretty dope. i was feelin it...overall i give it like a 7
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01-31-05, 07:20 AM
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IP:
word the featured track man I really should redo this track in the studio for my mixtape then
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