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Ghost 1 16.67%
Natural killa 5 83.33%
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Old 10-19-05, 08:26 PM   #16
Defined
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Voted For: Natural killa

ur always the last to buzz cos ya shit's always gon be worse,son
ya skills a "chip" on the 'ol block and ya verses "hertz" none
so go get ya purse 'n run,ya got no advantage to sit through
cos 6 months ago,i sucked
..........and yet,I still managed to beat you!!!
guarenteed....at the end of this,I'll have your pride stirred wit treason
& ya texas as whack the Rangers were this season..(text-as)

vs

really nuttin

niether of you came that good here and natural you had some self glory but you actually had some aight punches and wordplay......ghost you lines were hella stretched witch fucked with your flow BAD and made it choppy to read....fix that and you may have somethin there....but overall natural came with a better overall verse

v//natural
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Old 10-19-05, 08:38 PM   #17
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hmmmmmmmmm interesting............................
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Old 10-20-05, 03:08 PM   #18
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Voted For: Ghost

shit both of these catz WEAK as fuck, seriously nee dosme lessons from v0cab.... shit i am trying to DECIDE which verse was wacker but defently this cat here had less fillers both of u ELEVATE and nature killa.. damn man you droped some garbasge weak fillers...

this kinda battle could drive a nigga crazy, 1.
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Old 10-20-05, 03:17 PM   #19
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This was feedback posted for Natural killa

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want to see wat vocab said in my battle thread....
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Old 10-20-05, 09:26 PM   #20
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Lol@ that hate vote...

w/e....uppin............
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Old 10-20-05, 09:37 PM   #21
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This was feedback posted for Natural killa

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Old 10-21-05, 03:47 PM   #22
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uppin.............................................
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Old 10-22-05, 04:04 PM   #23
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Old 10-23-05, 04:31 PM   #24
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Old 10-23-05, 07:46 PM   #25
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Voted For: Natural killa

Aii This Is What I Think

NK
this my 1st and worst line.....and I've already passed ya,cuz
the ghost i'm battling here.....is about mean as Casper was
...a little Fuuny But No Strong Punch...
ur always the last to buzz cos ya shit's always gon be worse,son
ya skills a "chip" on the 'ol block and ya verses "hertz" none
....Nice Wordplay....
so go get ya purse 'n run,ya got no advantage to sit through
cos 6 months ago,i sucked
..........and yet,I still managed to beat you!!!
...Weak Punch Aii PErsonal...
guarenteed....at the end of this,I'll have your pride stirred wit treason
& ya texas as whack the Rangers were this season..(text-as)
....NIce!...
not without reason...so don't think I'll have ya be the last to drown
cuz ur the only ghost I know that could neva elevate pass the ground
...Damn ...

Overall You Came and did ya thang I Think That you came out on top With your wordplay and a few punchez and really good personals So thats why your verse came out to be better than Ghost did so I had to give this one to you

Ghost
You a "Natural-Killa",but Yet if you Was To Shank Air You Couldnt even Threaten ( Mother-Nature )//
Too Bad Your Only Seen 4 dayz Of The Week,Like Da Re-Run Episodes Of -Frazier-//
....Weak...Too Worded..
Schoolin Me Burnin-da-Hatred,But Yet u Aint Changed,cuz u still couldnt rip me if u Bit Linez,-------------------
yet Copy-n-Paste It//
...WTF?...That Was Very Weak and Sloppy..
Im Back For the throne,only Difference kid is You Gone like Motherz With Adopted Children when they Grown//
Coudlnt Conect With Punches,If u Was Physically Swingin N Make CONTACT with the Microphone//
....Weak & Played...
U a Killa,But hey Shyt then i guess Im A Killa In Process of BEing Late For A Hit//
Cant Relate-to-my-shit,Couldnt "CUm" at me with "flow" if u were to Abbreviate With Ya CLIT//
....Aii...Better Buut Yet not Good...
You Couldnt Compare to Me,Of My mother Verbally and Visonly Proved you Were My Blood//
have Your Mind Going Balistic With The 'FLOW',like split DOME at da NEW ORLEANZ floodz//
....Better...Good...

Overall Man Your verse was worded way Wrong and Had To Much In One line and it threw the readin off and threw ya punchez off and it made you seem so simplistic and so weak and your concept that was used in your lines were sort of played but swayed off to teh side as if we wouldnt notice but Yeah man You didnt do good on this verse at all and I think that Nk took this battle

my v/ NK
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Old 10-24-05, 11:47 AM   #26
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Voted For: Natural killa

this my 1st and worst line.....and I've already passed ya,cuz
the ghost i'm battling here.....is about mean as Casper was
so go get ya purse 'n run,ya got no advantage to sit through
cos 6 months ago,i sucked
..........and yet,I still managed to beat you!!!
not without reason...so don't think I'll have ya be the last to drown
cuz ur the only ghost I know that could neva elevate pass the ground

VS

(Fix your structure up ghost mate, its ugly -_-)

U a Killa,But hey Shyt then i guess Im A Killa In Process of BEing Late For A Hit//
Cant Relate-to-my-shit,Couldnt "CUm" at me with "flow" if u were to Abbreviate With Ya CLIT//
You Couldnt Compare to Me,Of My mother Verbally and Visonly Proved you Were My Blood//
have Your Mind Going Balistic With The 'FLOW',like split DOME at da NEW ORLEANZ floodz//

(Bit stretched too)


Ghost you fam and all but NK took this on all seriouseness,
he had better nameplays and was more consistant,

you no it aint hate, but you need to shake off the rust!!

Please rtf in sig NK.
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