His verse...

This kid's so anxious to get sonned..ran out the pussy in six weeks*
Half developed finger's on the keys..can't tell his shit's weak.
You BEGGED to get in my crew..DENIED..elevate punk.
Roll ya finger nubs to a fist...and try throwing a punch!
Wanna be Instant's runt.. you fag I'll push you back in the cunt
Oh...you the kid with two dads?....I'll stick you back in the butt.
I'm scared to battle you?..fool you could barely get through rule!
Don't tarnish my rec with newbs..why da fuck should I battle you?!
Cause your a pest..web obssessed..clogging threads with ya idle threats
Ya punches just can't connect..ya feet grow right outta ya neck!
I'm teaching you some respect.. you don't approach a vet...
Get on his squad's dick...and think winning is how you'll come away from this...

Definitions....
The six week line..I just added the four weeks of Dec. and the two weeks in January that have nearly gone by.
All the shit about him challenging me and then trying to join my squad is real..check the threads...

And with this I move on.....stop pm'ing me....It's your fault my box is full.


My verse
Now Im fukkin confused? should i kill Aragorn or prelude?
can eat the pussy or the clit...Which one to choose!
Both of them are cowards who demanding respect
Ducked for cover when he got attacked...how u a vet!
You don't have a ray of hope, U got sun-ned in this test
You preluded in the east...but got ended by the west!
This man is pitiful, claims he posses victory fundamentals
Only way this guy will beat me...is by making instrumentals!
Funny how after our last battle, you changed all ya info
suddenly aquired fundamentals and ya got a new intro!
Bet his verse will talk about my pix...i'll let him drop his shit
cuz dis already like when Vince did the crossover dunk.....
.....contest over wit!

*Even tho i didn't define my shit in my actual post...I don't see what is wrong with my verse and why he beats me here...i'll even explain the personals.
Bar One...His old name was Aragorn...I call him a pussy cuz he no-showed last tyme I dropped my verse while battling him.
Bar two...He's tellin me I should respect him, and when I battled him before, I dropped my verse and he no-showed.
Bar three...Ray of hope-sun rays, sun-ned (sonned), preluded means like intro...so he started in the east...and got ended by the west. My name is t-west.
Bar four...His atavar custom text the day of the battle said..."Back to fundamentals"...instrumental consists of beats...ya noe...
Bar Five...Our last battle, his name was Aragorn and his atavar custom text was "The king has returned"...Then I diss him about changing his custom text with the fundamental crack and new intro...ya noe, he changed his name...his name is prelude...prelude=introduction...
Bar six...Yea, it's pretty whack, but I had to defend myself from his bringing up issues about my member picture in the battle since this ain't a real battle, and im unable to flip it on him...just a closer


Heres the link to the actual battle...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...11&page=1&pp=15

you lost cuz u only had 2 notable/creative/strong bars in your verse.
everything else was decent....it wasn't filler, it just wasnt hard hitting because it was missing that creative aspect. i think the opener and closer were wack personally...no offense...and the other bars in there besides the west/east one and the beat/instrumental one were just only decent. i think prelude beat you because, though he wrote a bit non challantely, he still came harder. sometimes one can come with a more cocky approach and it just seems to have more attitude...therefore the punches connect and the whole verse disses better as a whole.

just my 2 cents.
hope it helped.

mad props on those 2 bars though, i really liked them.

This t west kid shud have won,..Other cat lacked punches,& the one he had were played as fuck,plus halve didnt even rhyme.

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Fuck you

/\if so

T-west please report that battle to I.R. and say that people in here agreed that you should have won....

Simple as that

Agreed u got dickridden to death ..u should have won

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MerK SquAd.

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t-west..you've been punked...you should've won...

T you should have won, maybe in your battles you should say people with 300+ posts, maybe the dick-ryding won't be so bad...
But alot of this happens all the time in Front Lines, and with this new system hopefully it will get better.
You did win, but these things happen in Front Lines, come up with some ideas to change it. And uif the dick-ryding is really obvious PM a mod...

How is it dickriding...I don't associate with no one on this site and I definitely ain't got no ones back except my groups...I came with a decent drop and won fairly...

^Probably because you were online so people voted for you, so that you could return the favor quicker...
Don't reply either, WEC is more help threads not bitching ones, time to piss off ok bitch?

Bye

^ yes thats true

alot of people in FL used to not even read verses....now the new voting system makes them

but the dick riding is still there...people who have more posts or are online could just get voted for because they can return the favour faster

also if your a vet the newbies might look up to you or some shit and just vote for you because of that

when i vote on battles in FL sometimes i do see votes that are exactly the same, people just copy them, which means they dont even read the verse

Take it to IR...

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