I havnt text battled in months and I'm rusty
Please rate me from 1-10 and tell me what to work on

The three battles I've had since I started doing text again:

Battle vs Red-Eye
This win is in the bag, so just quit ya bitchin’
It was a brown eye...until you went to prison
And the next time I challenge you, just say no
Cause my lines are over ya head...like a halo
I’m not through, bitch. So Death is what u get
U’re a test dummy, I just use u to try new shit
I’m just too sick, Plus all my lines are flu-like
I’d say I’m spankin’ u, but that’s what u’d like
I’m just too nice, and son, your just garbage
This match is like a no-show...over before it started!
Battle vs Weezy Snypz
My brain contain the stuff that make flames erupt
So treat your career like a dress-shirt, & hang it up
The words that I type down, will knock u right out
Plus I keep a rifle that will leave Weezy, sniped out*
And Its hype how I come wit personals to kill you
Plus if your considered hot, I guess my lil sister’s ill too?
Be f’real dude, or I’ll blow three shells through ya head
Compared 2 your skills, I’m Raisin Bran... “too scoops ahead”!
So you a dead man, with few brains and a small heart
I'm rap god & your like a midget tripping...you fall short!
Battle vs lil jon
I come with lyrics that will leave your whole style bent
Plus the 1st word in your name describe your amount of talent
I’m just wild with lyrics when I spit these free’s, whore
& the only thing that you punch are the letter on your keyboard
I conceive more ill lines than you could ever dream of
& you ‘d still loose, even if you & the real Lil Jon teamed up
I spit supreme lines and your skills can’t rise over these
You named yourself after a rapper who just screams over beats
This shit will kill you and I will still show up at the mass
This was an easy win cause your lyrics are like my avatar...ASS!

Please leave feed...
Thank you...

-W1

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4....work on real punches and personals

look at LLL battles

Ok...
Who are the illest battlers there?...

-W1

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H e n c e F o r w a r d

I'd rate you bout a 6
Ya need to work on some harder hitting punches
Good flow though.. nice structure
Keep it up...nice

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^Ok, thanks for the feed...
Anymore?...

-W1

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H e n c e F o r w a r d

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try to work on your vocab..flow was decent..think of creative punches..and dont look in LLL..look in rb legends and look for avalon mstery murdera and knightshdae..and rise..I think thats it..but tryn to come with personals..check they member profile..check some on their recent posts..and shit like that

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R.I.P. Bodie

i'de rate ya a 5 caus eof punches and wordplay and u need 2 work on Vocab a lil more dawg, keep elevating

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<a href="http://http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?p=1194274">Se7eN v.s Long Beach Finest</a>

you are stupid..."dont look in the LLL" are you retarded?? that is the only way to elevate is by reading good battles...reading the RB legends don't do shit
why? because he won't know half the personals and such...please kid if you are gonna give advice don't be silly about it...

I'm new to this website and have been flowing for years (more fingers than you have on both hands)but any WAY I CAN TEACH YOU THE ART OF FLOW.lISTEN TO PEOPLE WHO SUCK MORE THAN YOU WON'T HELP. PULL OUT YOUR PEN AND PAD BITCH SCHOOLS IN SESSION. 1. a good song does'nt always have fancy punch lines.
2.work on metaphores
3.look for your opponents faults in his raps and use that shit more than you do thats what it's there for.I'll give you a 8 your almost there

lmao an 8???

/Retire.

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Fuck you