Feeding is allowed, and will be optional

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Let ME fiiiinnd ooout

yup, checking in

Check sir, yurp

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GBA Champion

Axe

Check our names, if u don't get it, check 'em again
People seein' this match are seein' D/R ... is the ONLY fuckin way u can win

No problem but when I commence in droppin the gays is an issue
& fuck ya name cuz all it is now is a popular phrase when I hit you

Net life must be good cuz from what I hear Trus is a grown slut
I'll you heer is a boom box, now DTH mad cuz his crib blown up

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GBA Champion

Axe

U think u make dope sounds, but I can see that ur gay
Cuz fool, even newbs can beat box ...
... / house wordplay, by just coming equally played

both sucked but

v/rival

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eh close here. Both only had 1 i liked.


Check our names, if u don't get it, check 'em again
People seein' this match are seein' D/R ... is the ONLY fuckin way u can win
Nice nameplay on both parts, could have been worded better though


No problem but when I commence in droppin the gays is an issue
& fuck ya name cuz all it is now is a popular phrase when I hit you
This was ok.

Net life must be good cuz from what I hear Trus is a grown slut
I'll you heer is a boom box, now DTH mad cuz his crib blown up
Eh, descent.

U think u make dope sounds, but I can see that ur gay
Cuz fool, even newbs can beat box ...
... / house wordplay, by just coming equally played
I liked this, and i don't usually go for the 3 line'dtructure

v/trus.

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Let ME fiiiinnd ooout

only bar i liked was dth's feed so....

v/ trus

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Check our names, if u don't get it, check 'em again
People seein' this match are seein' D/R ... is the ONLY fuckin way u can win
^^Set-up didn't work well, but still a cool concept.
U think u make dope sounds, but I can see that ur gay
Cuz fool, even newbs can beat box ...
... / house wordplay, by just coming equally played
^^Eh. This was okay, not great.

vs.

No problem but when I commence in droppin the gays is an issue
& fuck ya name cuz all it is now is a popular phrase when I hit you
^^Wording was off...it's probably been done similarily by other people before, pretty simple.
Net life must be good cuz from what I hear Trus is a grown slut
I'll you heer is a boom box, now DTH mad cuz his crib blown up
^^Word, this is played and has been so for the past few years.


This was pretty onesided, I got Tru taking it with both of his punches being better, but he kind of slacked here.

V/ DaTrusHurtz

Check our names, if u don't get it, check 'em again
People seein' this match are seein' D/R ... is the ONLY fuckin way u can win
... forced and lame


No problem but when I commence in droppin the gays is an issue
& fuck ya name cuz all it is now is a popular phrase when I hit you
^^^decent nameplay

Net life must be good cuz from what I hear Trus is a grown slut
I'll you heer is a boom box, now DTH mad cuz his crib blown up
Eh, descent. box/house is played but u put a fresh spin on it with the boom thang

U think u make dope sounds, but I can see that ur gay
Cuz fool, even newbs can beat box ...
... / house wordplay, by just coming equally played
^^ no wordplay just a lame played statement

i only like punches with wordplay mixed in with a punch.. not simple statements
vote-rival

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Check our names, if u don't get it, check 'em again
People seein' this match are seein' D/R ... is the ONLY fuckin way u can win
^Mad forced. Didn't like it. 0/5
U think u make dope sounds, but I can see that ur gay
Cuz fool, even newbs can beat box ...
... / house wordplay, by just coming equally played
^Again forced. But a little better. 1.5/5

vs.

No problem but when I commence in droppin the gays is an issue
& fuck ya name cuz all it is now is a popular phrase when I hit you
^Blah. Weak bar here. 1/5
Net life must be good cuz from what I hear Trus is a grown slut
I'll you heer is a boom box, now DTH mad cuz his crib blown up
^Played & weak as hell. 0/5





Vote = DaTrusHurtz

4-2. Lets get a couple more votes on this.

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Let ME fiiiinnd ooout

U think u make dope sounds, but I can see that ur gay
Cuz fool, even newbs can beat box ...
... / house wordplay, by just coming equally played

vs.

No problem but when I commence in droppin the gays is an issue
& fuck ya name cuz all it is now is a popular phrase when I hit you


I didnt like 1 bar from either of you so i went to who's bar made me laugh more..

so

v/Rival

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